VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Cyberspace [v0.15] [Cyberreality Games]

This is very short novel. You start the game, set the relationships and you get 4 scenes. Some of the renders are quite good, but in my opinion that is simply not enough. Also the game mechanics about love and dominance doesn´t make any sence.

am giving this all 4/5

render is decent
character develpmen also decent
story , damn really sad this abandoned n then it being a decent story, if not probably will go all 5/5 a really interesting story
design/model, all of the girls its lovely

I will give 4 stars because the game is still new. I don't like sci-fi much but the story is unique and simply mind blowing.... Everything about this game is close to perfection , I can't wait for the next update.

The premise of the story is interesting, but it gets bogged down a little from excessive amounts of dialogue with a little too much repetition.

The aesthetics are fine.

As of the current version 0.15 there is little content, but what there is looks promising. So I would recommend waiting a little before picking up the game.

V.0.15 So far the game shows a lot of potentials. The story is absolutely above AVN average. It's interesting and intriguing. Not a huge fan of the cyberspace content till now tho. Just feels like the old soulless quick fap material. However, I love the Incest content/Main Story. It is well written and the girls act believable and not like total sluts that are (for some reason) super horny, especially toward the MC. At least it's not that bad as in other games of this sort.

BUT the girls and graphics and especially the faces are at max average. He should try to improve those.

But good premise. Keep going and put Story before fap content, please. There are already enough soulless fap games out there....

This game has a very interesting premise, nice graphics, and even the music is fairly solid, if a bit repetitive. It also has a very generous amount of content for such an early release point.

From what I can see, a lot of effort has gone into this, but it's still very early on, and while that remains the case, I hope the developer hires either a writer or an editor to assist them, because every problem with this game involves the writing.

It is littered with every mistake a novice writer can make, from way to much exposition, to spelling mistakes, misused words...right on down the line.

This could be something really good, find the editing/writing help you need, I'll be happy to adjust my rating upwards.

Good luck!

Welp, the game overall looks fine, it has nice renders, good models and an interesting story although it feels like it's all over the place like too many things happens that doesn't make too much sense.

And the biggest minus of the game in my opinion is the writing/dialogue which isn't the greatest to say the least, it's very plain and simple, it makes me feel like a kid wrote this who doesn't have any idea about sexual relationships.

It's the typical trope where we seen in every average porn game, a very attractive MC surrounded by females who gets wet when they see him.
All the women wants to get bent over by the MC for some reason, they feel empty and they lack personality and the only thing that gives them life is how horny they are including the MC.

Him being the only one who has some kind of personality but is not very clear? in some situations he acts like a douchebag and in others he is kind and understanding, so it gives me confusing vibes.

For a typical average porn game made only for fap material, it's great, it's cool but for an adult VN, it's pretty bad.

It's early on in development but it is super promising and worth a download already. The visuals are fantastic, and there is already some content in the game to show them off. Character models, graphics, and scenery all look great.

The story and writing is frankly incredible for an adult game, and I am actually super interested in seeing where it goes. There are super well made dramatic scenes that are giving me more emotional investment in this game than most other games on the site. The music is perfect for each scene too.

Definitely keep an eye on this one, it has a lot of potential to be an incredible game and story.

downloaded this mainly due to amazing visuals, only to discover a fuckin brilliantly written story too. one of those rare games that get downloaded for the fap material but get hooked on the story instead. high hopes for this game, a must download with loads of content considering this is release 0.1

Though Cyberspace v0.1 is riddled with typos, and grammar errors, Cryberreality does a good job of building up a pretty-decent amount of lore in the first act... even though a lot of those Sci-Fi elements are borrowed.
However, not a bad first entry into the adult VN space. I am usually not a fan of incest games, but I do appreciate being able to change the relationships between the MC and the love interests; I personally prefer a "step-familial" relationship.
I am going to keep a close eye on this game With a little bit of polish, and some editing for your dialog, this could evolve into an awesome game.