VN - Ren'Py - D.J. Story [v0.35] [VReal]

What did I just play?
The character models look good at screen, no questions there, but... while in game. looks like hmm and noo much option to choice is soo baddd, story its just following
Renders 3/10
Story 5/10


No much option to choice is soo baddd story its just following

LI is unattractive/awful animation, cannot change MC's name. There was little to no choices that affected the game in the short time I played it. I can't go further this is just something that is not good enough to warrant further playing.

Maybe this should be 3 stars, but I had such a lot of fun that It's an easy 4 stars for me.

Graphics and animation are not the best but having said that the 2 main girls are super cute, and the progress and story is super fun so far.

The main story is fun as hell, but I almost enjoy the adventures between Ludwig and Fabi more. (Ahhh... young love)

The language, grammar is not the best, but it is not difficult to read or understand and very easy to read and not distracting for me at all.

All in all, I enjoyed this game a lot, but I just feel is not in the league as a 5-star game.

Best of luck to the dev. The game is awesome.

Weird pacing, disjointed, and just overall pretty unsexy. Not one of the better offerings out there. Honestly, I can't see why devs can't just recognize what actually working for popular games and capitalize on that. This is disappointing.

Nice game! the art is good, the writing too, is nice that there are 2 stories (and that u can have 2 paths on the second one) animations are ok and can be improved ofc but are decent enough and one of my fav things that i hope other games of the genre does is that the "she will tell u later" option that u have, even tho, some events at the moment are not there and u prob need to wait till next patch (beach, club) or ofc just select the other option lol so yeap, hope to see more of this game looking like a good slow burn

I don't know why they gave it 1 star before, this game isn't perfect but it's very enjoyable, I liked the main characters and the story is very enjoyable for me, I played version 0.19 on my cell phone, without errors and smooth

I didn't like the side story but depending on what you do, the waitress "girlfriend" isn't pretty, if she were a more attractive woman it would be better
The game lacks some background scenes but that's the least of it, you can see that the dev is a beginner and we need to support the initiative. It's a good game, I'll wait for more updates

History: 5 stars
David and Jessica: 5 stars
Ludwig: 3 stars
Renders: 3 stars
Dialog: 5 stars (I like simplicity, dialogue that takes a lot of time is unnecessary)

Give it 5 stars because the general average doesn't match reality, which should be more

Giving this a 1 overall.

Renders: 2/10

Nowadays the bar is just SO high for good renders. These are basic backgrounds, grainy renders, and non-complex scenes.

Story: 1/10

After reading the description and playing the game, still have no idea what is supposed to be the point of the story. You are constantly changing between mcs, the game offers to tell you bits of the story or you can choose to learn later. The girl is constantly sexually assaulted which is just, fine for some reason. Branching paths that lead to choices the dev just wont let you make (you click a choice and a dev note pops up and just says no)

Dialog 1/10

Needs a proofreader badly. Constant google translation done wrong of words that just dont mean what is trying to be said. Tons of grammatical errors and sentences that just have trailing ) at the end.

QOL: 1/10

The light pink dialog for the girl is extremely hard to read in bright environments. Along with the audio for sex sounds being tied to the music slider so you cannot just mute the sounds without killing the music too.

Overall cannot recommend this game to play.

My rating for this Game is:

Pros:
- different Game Graphics
- Complete new Game Play
- Nice Renders (Different Style)
- Nice Characters
- Nice Action
- Long Update

Cons:
- Languiage Errors
- No Save Options

Conclusion:
Very Interesting Release, completely different approach then other Games,
the Story telling and Graphics are unique, and totally different what I am used to.
The Dev needs to have someone check the writing and story telling, it sometimes sounds funny the way its told.
If the next release is as long and Hot, then I will consider supporting the Dev..