VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Daddy Issues [v0.03] [Okalix]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    Robitron

    The story is great so far, but in chapter 2 Jakes shirt blends in with the windows/doors to much in his office. In the living room scene, the lighting on Jake should maybe be toned down?

    Sorry for the honesty but you did ask... :cool:
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    rfox317

    So this game was really early in development at the time of this initial review. It is distinctly m/m oriented so players who aren't interested in that content probably might not want to play; as the MCs orientation is unlikely to change through the course of the narrative.

    Players interested in this game will likely be able to relate to the MC's desire to explore his own orientation, and all that entails, if only at a cursory level.

    The artistic design of the game is easy on the eyes, it's nice to see a developer that pays attention to the backgrounds as much as the characters they are using.

    Once again, it is still very early on in this project's lifespan and it will be interesting to see how it develops. I will try to update as the project progresses.