VN - Ren'Py - Daily Challenges [v0.3.0] [TheAlex]

ver 0.3
Focused on the theme, that's how game writing should be.
Porn game focused on interesting hot scene. The setting, the teasing feels hot not annoying. The graphic is nice enough. The lens language builds up the hot feeling.
My hope is up. Please keep the good work. Do not abandon this.

While the effort behind this project is evident, it is clear that there are several areas in need of improvement, particularly in terms of storytelling and execution. Setting aside the poor English, the story itself feels overly simplistic. While this isn't inherently a bad thing for a first project, it leaves a lot of untapped potential and room for growth. For instance, certain elements, such as some names defaulting back even after being changed, highlight a lack of polish that detracts from the immersion.


A specific example of the story's shortcomings is the scene in the toilet, which stretches believability to its limits. The idea of sneaking up on someone in complete silence in such a scenario, especially in a secluded location, feels implausible. At the very least, environmental factors like a creaking door could be added to create a more realistic dynamic. Additionally, the girl wearing only a pair of panties adds to the scene's unrealistic portrayal, making it feel more contrived than convincing.


The driver character also contributes to the narrative's lack of believability. His appearance and behavior seem immature and detract from the overall tone, making it difficult to take the scene seriously. Revising his design or role could help ground the story more effectively. On the technical side, the dating sim-style UI is another detractor. Opting for a simpler approach, such as placing a small character portrait to the left of the text box instead of using large, screen-dominating images, would create a cleaner and more professional presentation.


Finally, while there is potential in the project, it would greatly benefit from animations to add depth and bring the scenes to life. With more experience, the developer could refine these elements and create a more cohesive and engaging experience.


In summary, while this project shows promise as a first attempt, it struggles with believability, narrative depth, and technical presentation. With time, effort, and constructive feedback, the developer has the potential to significantly improve and produce a more polished and enjoyable game. Best of luck moving forward!

I really like it so far. Trixie is really hot and switching characters is a really cool mechanic I haven't seen before. I wish she wasn't already so turned on in the car scene though, there needs to be more reluctance and slow burn in my humble and probably unpopular opinion. Needs some polish but great start of a game, give it a try

(Review of v0.3.0)

Bad English aside the story is quite simplistic. Not bad for a first project but as usual in this case there's a lot of room for improvement. Some names are still the defaults after changing them, for example.

The scene in the toilet in not believable, sneaking up to the girl in absolute silence in that situation is highly unlikely. Maybe at a school thanks to the background noise, but here in the middle of nowhere? At least the door would creak, giving away the boy's presence. Oh, and the girl only has a pair of panties? Really?

I'd also suggest changing the looks of the driver, he only contributes to make the whole thing even less believable; I mean, I'd have a hard time deciding which character is more immature... And remove the dating sim UI, only use a face left of the text box when someone is talking instead of taking the whole screen like every run of the mill japanese game.

Anyway, good luck with the project. I hope by the time the developer has more experience he tries and implement some animations.

Daily Challenges is a bold and immersive adult game that delivers an intense experience, blending engaging storytelling with provocative themes like teasing, netorare (NTR), and various forbidden relationships. The game dives into complex, mature dynamics that keep you on the edge of your seat, offering a thrilling journey through taboo desires.

The high-quality animation and detailed artwork set Daily Challenges apart, with every scene meticulously crafted to draw you into the intimate moments. Whether it's the teasing interactions or the deeply personal scenarios involving complex relationship dynamics, the game keeps you captivated with its visual and narrative depth.

The gameplay mechanics are smooth, allowing you to seamlessly navigate through different storylines and make choices that affect the outcome, enhancing the immersive experience. The mix of adult content, forbidden relationships, and suspenseful NTR elements creates a game that is both intense and emotionally charged.

For fans of adult games that push boundaries, Daily Challenges offers a unique and thrilling experience. I'm excited to see where the developers will take the game next with new versions or updates. It’s definitely a must-play for anyone interested in these genres. Best of luck to the Alex can't wait to see what's coming next!"

The game starts with a hot and original MC with a good personality
female protagonist : Personally, it is one of my favorite tags
incest : Great, because it always adds a lot of tension to the game
Then his bro descends from the sky. I mean, there was a need for more background and dialogues
The sexual act are very short and there is no excitement or stress in them
When fmc gets angry, she loses her attractiveness
Being dark in this game is not felt, the atmosphere should be dark
We need a sense of competition between Ali and Bob to increase the excitement of the game
Writing is nothing special, it doesn't increase or decrease the game's appeal
Personally, I prefer quality over quantity, but the amount of updates in this game is so small that it disappoints the player
Adding NTS to the game can make the game more exciting
Sometimes the renderings are not good, sometimes they are great
Etc

So it is an average game

Very short but very promising.
Includes a switch button to change the MC, which haven't seen often (at least not in this type of games).
It's not a masterpiece novel but that's not what i was looking for. Just simple hot situations.
Good job TheAlex!

It's still an early release but it looks promising! The fact that you can switch character perspectives with a button on the top left during some scenes is a nice touch. Makes this different to other games. I look forward to seeing more! Nicely done!