TLDR: nice setting but a chore to play. Need a lot of polish.
I wish luck to the dev an hope that in a year or so of updates game will become better.
Story\setting wise it's allright. Tall dominant tomboy will always find players.
But the quality of life gameplay-wise is really lacking:
1) No skip option. It's fine for the first and only playthrough but what happens when you return after a couple of updates with no save and need to sit through all the scenes you already saw? And some of them are really long, like that scene in the bath drags for ages. For a game where most of the stuff is in text an not visuals having no option to skip is a no-no.
2) flying camera is whatever but for me it was a rudiment. It's not that kind of game where you need arrows+ mouse to navigate, arrows alone work just fine. And it's not that there is anything actually worth looking around at, game is pretty straightforward. Imo cutting flying camera off entirely and zooming out a bit would be more clean way.
3) You move with arrows\wasd (ok, pretty expectable) + you proceed the dialogue an activate some objects with a space (again, pretty standard, all good here)... but then you for some reason need to point and click on other objects with the mouse? What? Why? It's genuinely confusing why you nee to switch from space to mouse, why can't it all be just space? Pressing space to open the door\put an egg on the oven\ slap dat butt is just the same thing, you don't feel more immersed by clicking really.
4) I turned character sounds off but still got all the moans an sloppy stuff, so that option is not working as it should.
5) I'm confused why it's not made on rpgmaker. It would fix almost all complains that I listed above an you'd get exactly the same game. To be honest you can actually make it on ren'py too: ability to walk around gives you nothing, you just walk from one scene to another. Game is very straightforward, apart from naming the character you get zero choices to make, you can't skip the scene or pull away from it if you're not into fetish that scene contains. So this game could be easily converted into some kinetic novel on renpy.
Overall it's a decent premise poorly executed. Hope Dev will listen to some\any of my suggestions an the game will only goes up from here.
I wish luck to the dev an hope that in a year or so of updates game will become better.
Story\setting wise it's allright. Tall dominant tomboy will always find players.
But the quality of life gameplay-wise is really lacking:
1) No skip option. It's fine for the first and only playthrough but what happens when you return after a couple of updates with no save and need to sit through all the scenes you already saw? And some of them are really long, like that scene in the bath drags for ages. For a game where most of the stuff is in text an not visuals having no option to skip is a no-no.
2) flying camera is whatever but for me it was a rudiment. It's not that kind of game where you need arrows+ mouse to navigate, arrows alone work just fine. And it's not that there is anything actually worth looking around at, game is pretty straightforward. Imo cutting flying camera off entirely and zooming out a bit would be more clean way.
3) You move with arrows\wasd (ok, pretty expectable) + you proceed the dialogue an activate some objects with a space (again, pretty standard, all good here)... but then you for some reason need to point and click on other objects with the mouse? What? Why? It's genuinely confusing why you nee to switch from space to mouse, why can't it all be just space? Pressing space to open the door\put an egg on the oven\ slap dat butt is just the same thing, you don't feel more immersed by clicking really.
4) I turned character sounds off but still got all the moans an sloppy stuff, so that option is not working as it should.
5) I'm confused why it's not made on rpgmaker. It would fix almost all complains that I listed above an you'd get exactly the same game. To be honest you can actually make it on ren'py too: ability to walk around gives you nothing, you just walk from one scene to another. Game is very straightforward, apart from naming the character you get zero choices to make, you can't skip the scene or pull away from it if you're not into fetish that scene contains. So this game could be easily converted into some kinetic novel on renpy.
Overall it's a decent premise poorly executed. Hope Dev will listen to some\any of my suggestions an the game will only goes up from here.
