So frustrating that this is all, but wonderful story so far. Models are beautiful, writing is compelling.
Critiques: long slow blackout transitions are annoying and do not seem necessary. Writing needs a decent edit in English. There are some wide views and close ups but images need more depth (super close, medium distance, arms reaching etc)
Critiques: long slow blackout transitions are annoying and do not seem necessary. Writing needs a decent edit in English. There are some wide views and close ups but images need more depth (super close, medium distance, arms reaching etc)