Well...
I've only made it to the end, which is roughly halfway through volume 2. That, in turn, corresponds to 30% of all four volumes. There's some good, but also some bad, things to report for a comic book copy.
For example, plot gaps. Since the aunt wasn't shot (or her stand-in in the game), why does Brooke have to dig a grave?
Skip the lake and move the scene to the garage. The men are curious about the house and then find appropriate toys in the garage (ropes, belts, bands for gags, restraints, etc.).
This also raises the general question of why the burglars bring all their BDSM toys to a break-in.
Animations: These aren't bad in terms of the movements and the sometimes dynamically changing camera positions. There's also the option to cancel them if desired.
A lot of the shaking effects in the movements are bad. This is especially noticeable with the legs and the lap dance movements on the floor.
Likewise, the synchronization of the paddles, moving breasts, and the speech bubbles with the clapping sounds is incorrect.
Equally poorly implemented: some animations end normally after a single run and the game continues, while others remain frozen on a black screen.
The transitions between scenes take too long. If you could click through everything, why do you have to wait up to three seconds just to read the time-skip window?
So, overall, the performance still offers plenty of room for improvement.
Yes, the original has enough story gaps that can only be roughly explained with a small speech bubble stating that it's an accepted role-playing game (as can be read at the end of almost all of his comics). But you missed this very opportunity to cite Fernando as inspiration while still putting your own stamp on the story. And swapping Aunt for Sissy simply isn't enough to achieve that.
I've only made it to the end, which is roughly halfway through volume 2. That, in turn, corresponds to 30% of all four volumes. There's some good, but also some bad, things to report for a comic book copy.
For example, plot gaps. Since the aunt wasn't shot (or her stand-in in the game), why does Brooke have to dig a grave?
Skip the lake and move the scene to the garage. The men are curious about the house and then find appropriate toys in the garage (ropes, belts, bands for gags, restraints, etc.).
This also raises the general question of why the burglars bring all their BDSM toys to a break-in.
Animations: These aren't bad in terms of the movements and the sometimes dynamically changing camera positions. There's also the option to cancel them if desired.
A lot of the shaking effects in the movements are bad. This is especially noticeable with the legs and the lap dance movements on the floor.
Likewise, the synchronization of the paddles, moving breasts, and the speech bubbles with the clapping sounds is incorrect.
Equally poorly implemented: some animations end normally after a single run and the game continues, while others remain frozen on a black screen.
The transitions between scenes take too long. If you could click through everything, why do you have to wait up to three seconds just to read the time-skip window?
So, overall, the performance still offers plenty of room for improvement.
Yes, the original has enough story gaps that can only be roughly explained with a small speech bubble stating that it's an accepted role-playing game (as can be read at the end of almost all of his comics). But you missed this very opportunity to cite Fernando as inspiration while still putting your own stamp on the story. And swapping Aunt for Sissy simply isn't enough to achieve that.