VN - Others - Completed - Dark Waters: Gino and the Witch of the Black Swamp [v1.0] [Outis Media]

Artwork-very basic and simplistic and that is generous.

Story-Very old concept that been done to death (apprentice not listening and causing harm yes even Disney did it).

Writing- Bland and while some effort put in to try build suspense the flatness of story made it pointless.

Dialogue/Social interaction- Terrible, while it might have been understandable if isolated witch lacked social skills it was MC that was ridiculously inept (I not sure if he was meant to be stupid and rude but it just came across as clueless writing0.


In summary it failed in every aspect with no redeeming qualities.

Short kinetic (one choice on a game) visual novel. Three sex scenes, couple of word document pages in Arial 8 font size of writing.

Plot is simple.
Boy have looked for some MiStIcAl and PaRaNoRmAl things but stumble upon a witch instead. She showed him several magic spells then asked did he want to transport via teleportation something (item) from his home to witch hut, just because she can do so
Guy choose to teleport his sister to show her real magic. Everything went not as planned, because teleportation was supposed to teleport inanimate object. So sister was cut in half in process of teleportation, with expected result.
Somewhere here witch bewitched dude to believe that he is her familiar/husband/fuck toy/*insert* because she was lonely.
When (rather if) dude find out that his sister are feeding worms he raped witch (revenge worthy of porn game), after which witch reanimate his sisters corpse to kill guy. The end.
There also alternative route to not look for sister body and lived long and happily with a witch. The end.

Moral of the story, READ THE FUCKING MANUAL and FOLLOW THE FUCKING MANUAL