VN - Ren'Py - Darker [Ch. 1 Part 7] [Director Unknown]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    ding00000

    I think overall the story is decent goes at a decent pace although i do agree development is a bit slow.

    Overall i would give this a 4 1/2 star but the fmc skin is just so gray like she's dead and has no blood circulating in her body. It looks so unnatural that it takes you out of the game. Which is sad because so far i like the game and how it progresses .
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    alex220477

    unfortunately the game is too slow in terms of plot, development is also slow, the dialogues are repetitive, the graphics have bugs on the colors of the characters, MFC has the color of a vampire, and we are still at the first chapter.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    hairy_trump

    I am writing this review to convey to myself and others why I will nopt play this game. So it will be a biased pov.

    The reason I started playing AVNs is primarily because unlike porn which have been primarly meet and fuck or its counter part JAVNs that tries to do a bit of storytelling. AVNs gives good amount iof space to individuals and sex. It is the delicate balance betwween he two that makes this style of adult copntent fascinating. In addition of that there is a little to no exploitation of real individual is a bonus to me.
    Having said that like every individual i Have prefrences, there are some stories I like, some I don't because of my conditioning and hence my biases. This story even with its good renders falls in thecategory of astories which I Iavoid. Not because there is nothing worth in it, but precisely because there are somethings that I consider off limit to me.

    One of the things that I hate is when Humans are dehumanized, I am not saying people can't have desire or corruption uin game doesn't fascinate me, because that is just human failing to thweir own frailities, even in games constining rape doesn't disturb me, because it is the reality we live in, this happens and if AVNs task is to show storytelling even taboo need to be explored and more often than not the game comes out better for it, Like in Pale Carnations, where none of the women characters are dehumanized, they are individuaslsd first and foremost asll three are fighting their own demons craeted by society and even the MC refuses to be shutdown by those oppression even when he is part of it, and through that hellscpae they support each other and things do cahnge. That is why I consider Pale carnations as one of the best stroy ever told in this genre.

    Darker is not that, here all humans especially FMC's husband is demon in human clothing that doesn't see his wife anything other than a piece of meat for his satiation. there is no escapism inherent in this game, Similarly what i see in this FMCs is a women who is not out to explore her sexuality but rather a women traversing a dangerous path because of hollowness of love in her life because of toxic relationship that see onlyt her body as the only worthy thing about her, hence her sexual exposure is more of a rebellion to make her husband care as that is the only value he sees in her.
    The third character is a broken child who uses this toxic relationship and his puberty riddled brain and tries to break this independent spirited women to his whims not to prove a point, but to break this independence and thinking faculty, i.e, turn this women into a piece of meat.
    SO this game is not really about corruption which in my simple language is about change of moral values, where by the end of the game the value systems of those being corrupted is changed to a new individual, the individual remains but they are now a changed person sometime for betterf in my pov or btter but always better for individual in their head , This game is not about that, This is about the death odf the character/personality of the indivual. It is about the death of human by repeated dehumanization, Which is evident from all the males surrounding the FMCs, even the fucking pizza guy. This is a emotional gore
    And since gore is a genre I can't get behind I voluntarily choose to avoid this game. Imagine it like this Imagine an game about slavery where a slave like that of samuel jackson character in Django has a wife and when his master asks for that wife getting raped repeatedly the chjarcetr says yes and the women goes willingly with the slave master because to all the parties involved she is a piece of meat, and the women who had a bit of agency, her humanity is getting destroyed piece by piece through a sequence of sex parties amd fancy luxuries resort she gets to live in to give her the illusion that this dehuminazation process is worth it. Thsi is what this game feels like.
    A sadistic game , out \there to kill women , her individuality. W/o anyt light of rebellion or change , ther is no spark in any of the women here they are seen as cattle and what they are getting is nutritious feed for the slaughter. And I am not into such perverse form of sadiusm so . While techncally tis game is one othe bestdeveloping game here, with great eye for female proportion dress and and even decent writing that clearly telegrapgh you what this game about unlike those writers whose dialgue doesn't match the intenet of the game which creates schadenfraude when game goes off track. This developer knows what he wants and for that I respect it.

    There are some issue i game about its limited/ barren backround setting. Comically stiff sex scene that uses static , But again I am not expctting that out of verey AVN and sicce it is a new game in DAz I expect the same from a new developer, infcat the eye the game developer have for characetr models and how he frames the scenes I would say he just needs a bot of help before designing breathtaking scenes, Moreover as I telegraph the inteion of these scenes is not to establish intimacyt but a detached voyerism which is axhieves greatly buy a wide angle shots and regualr voyeristic look at the FMC when changing , bathing or getting a piuza. Hence in this way this game achives it stated objective.

    Overall: As you may have gussed this game is not for me, hence it would be unfair to give it a rating but as you might have seen I have given it a rating and that is purely because even as a critic I can see this game does what it sets out to do perfectly. It might not be my cup of tea but I can clearly see how it would be a favourite game for some, who likes thses types of stories.

    Hence my rating
    is 4.05 /5 for all its technical and storytelling brilllaince as a regualr player of AVNS
    and a solid N-A/5 for my subjective perspective, as this is not a game a deem to judge on enjoyment level, and since ther is no enjoyment to be had, why I am playing it in the first place.

    P.S: This rating only applies for first couple of cvhs not overall game. Why I didn't play the full game before its review shd be obvious to you all by now.
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    Enlight432

    I started playing this game today
    Currently, I'm at the part where the MC sells the FMC to Oliver for money and status. He’s fully aware that she's going to be tortured and violated by countless men
    Because of this, I have to say the game fails entirely from a Netorare perspective. A core requirement of Netorare is that the MC and FMC must be in love with each other. From the very beginning, it's clear that the MC doesn't care about the FMC—otherwise, he wouldn’t sell her for money
    This game is better approached from a female protagonist perspective. Personally, the MC holds no value for me in this story. In fact, I hope terrible things happen to him by the end because, as of now, he’s the most despised character in the game. Even Oliver is far better in comparison
    Since the Netorare perspective loses its impact right at the start, I hope the majority of the game focuses on the female protagonist's point of view. At the very least, I hope the segments involving the male protagonist are skippable, as I find him completely unappealing
    In the hour I've played so far, the FMC has shown a rich and compelling personality. If she doesn’t turn into a "slut" too quickly and the corruption arc progresses at a natural and engaging pace, this could become a standout female protagonist game

    For now, I’ll give it 2 stars. If the female protagonist's perspective is executed well, I’ll upgrade it to 3 stars

    Render: Good, smooth, and appealing
    Writing: Acceptable
    Atmosphere: Acceptable
    Story: Engaging and intriguing
    FMC’s Appearance: Excellent, very hot
    Concept: Excellent—I’m definitely excited for the game’s future

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    Edit to 3 stars:
    The perspective of the female protagonist is well-executed, offering plenty of choices along the way that shape the outcomes of side paths and main path. Her character and personality are good—not outstanding, but solid. How she evolves in the future depends entirely on the player’s decisions. At her core, she has an appealing personality

    This 3-star rating is solely for the female protagonist aspect
  5. 1.00 star(s)

    sitornaancoraaaaaa

    Unfortunately it started with great expectations, graphically not bad, if we consider the skin color of the protagonist too pale, but I was not convinced by this system of three separate chapters, with these adventure variants. In my opinion, a very messy plot
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    MonsterMinion

    This game is a slow burn and is good if you are looking for a story that builds up.

    The characters also stand out well because their personalities are well developed.

    The only compliant I have would be that the animations are just two different pictures that move.
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    sharlotte

    Ch5 played.
    Very good story so far - may benefit from a native speaker reviewer to get the proper expressions in English.
    Graphics: good in general, more colour and more intense facial expressions on the MC's face (like when reaching the end of the hobo scene where she does not seem to be that bothered) would make it even better.
    Well worth checking it out! Well done dev.
  8. 4.00 star(s)

    nuclearbomb

    Review based on Ch. 1 Part 5:

    Interesting game with quite unique character designs which some might really like (like me) or absolutely hate. Story is so-so, a bit hard to understand as we are controlling all the characters actions instead of following one MC and making decisions just as him/her. But I guess things will start to clear up story wise as we move further into it. Starts of more or less like a kinetic novel, which for me was initially a turn off but after the 1 hour mark we finally started to get some decisions to make and it was totally worth the wait, cant wait to see how this develops further. If you are looking for a game with plenty of H scenes then this might not be the game for you yet, what is there is mostly just teasing and setting up for future scenes. Some here say the main girl is to forward and kind of a total slut in hiding, the story do hint at her having a wildside that she has suppressed and dev is doing a ok job at teasing that. That is at least how I see it.
    And yes this game will feature netorare/sharing, however the player controls the narrative of how far you will let it go but there is unavoidable parts to it so if that is not your thing then this game is absolutely not for you. You cant name the characters of the story which is a bummer, would make it more immersive if we could imho.

    All in all a game that I will follow, sadly has developed quite slow so far but seems like the dev has built a new render computer which might make upcoming updates larger and maybe arriving quicker, we will see I guess.
    Likes: k2ren
  9. 5.00 star(s)

    isumadu600

    Very good story telling, interesting. Renders are quality but animations needs some works. Recommend everyone to try it out..

    9 out of 10 game
  10. 1.00 star(s)

    tharsheblows

    The porn logic is strong with this one.

    Husband agrees to send his wife (unbenownst to her) on a two month fuckfest with a guy he knows is going to torture her and use her like people use toilet paper. But does it so he can advance in the company.

    She refuses because she knows the guy is only out to fuck her. She then changes her mind when hubby tells her that he's going on a two month trip of his own with out her. Her reasoning is that they live in a risky neighborhood and she might be safer on the trip with the guy who wants to fuck her.

    You get what you pay for folks.
  11. 3.00 star(s)

    Dimsey87

    I''ll give it props for being shinier than a lot of its contemporaries, 'tis above average in terms of production values. Unfortunately there is no amount of gloss and glitter that'll make up for what is, in my view, substandard writing.
  12. 3.00 star(s)

    tr12345

    This game bored me out of my mind.

    I'm giving it 3 stars because it looks like there's a decent amount of work in it.

    I'm not feeling any connection to the characters or the story. It takes a long time into the game for any choices to pop up.

    I ended hitting the skip button, (and from the reviews I can sense I'm not the only one), waiting for anything meaningful to happen.

    It wasn't worth the time in the end. So 3 stars for a working product, with lots of scenes, but that don't spark any interest in me
  13. 3.00 star(s)

    prawnstar700

    Promising start, and a well implemented VN. If you expected the choices to matter, I can say they don't do much at this point.

    On the bright side, dev has made the skipping slow enough to read so you can blast through the current content in no time.

    Story and lighting need some work though, as MC is sometimes pale as vampire.
  14. 4.00 star(s)

    WolferQT

    Absolutely gorgeous renders.
    The story and writing are pretty good for a porn game and I haven't noticed any grammar issues or weird phrasing.
    Not a big fan of female mc games, but this one is working for me.
    -1 star for making skipping so insanely slow that I had to look up how to fix it.
  15. 2.00 star(s)

    loikl

    Another game with a weak protagonist and a whore girlfriend who sleeps with everyone, visually it's fine but the writing and development of the story leaves a lot to be desired.

    Recommended only if you like NTR and are not looking for a story that makes a lot of sense (yes, it has ntr, why isn't the tag there? because the moderators don't want to put it in, it's that simple).
  16. 5.00 star(s)

    bill19890

    I came in not knowing what to expect but it's one of the best games I've played on here. The art and models look good and it has a good flow to the story. It's a great start with the slow corruption but still having plenty of content that doesn't feel forced in or out of place.
  17. 1.00 star(s)

    aly237204

    Too bad, I was thinking of a game made with a finally strong and vengeful MC, but as you progress through the game you realize that the game already has something seen and revised, useless, this is now the trend, the majority of players love these versions of games with a weak MC, a slutty wife, and a strong and gifted enemy, graphically it has a lot to give, even in terms of sound, but the original plot is missing, the scenes to follow are obvious, with very few choice options, a porn film I would say , not a Game.
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    tuber100

    Nice and engaging. has elements to satisfy all.. will wait and see how it goes from here on. Hopefully it keeps the same tone.....of Dominant husband with a faithful wife corruption...and also looking to see how some choices in initial parts affect later
  19. 2.00 star(s)

    palmtrees89

    Would love to give this game a higher rating, but I simply can't. Renders are nice, story somewhat promising, characters decent for the most part.

    But the writing...It's just bad. This game needs a mature writer. Some of the dialogue is so cringe and straight up dumb that it almost made me want to quit. One example; Pretty much at the beginning of the game, when Oliver and Ryan start drinking, Oliver keeps calling Grace a slut for the accidental towel malfunction earlier. Ryan, her husband, is completely unphased by it, acting like it's the most normal thing in the world to call his wife a slut. Ryan and Olliver met for the first time, mind you. The entire discussion and both character's behavior is just stupid beyond belief, and there are several scenes which had me left thinking "What the actual fuck?!".

    My recommendation: English (fluent) writer would elevate the game to be easy 4 stars. Right now, the writing makes it borderline unenjoyable for me. 2/5.

    Best of luck!
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    HypnoKitten

    Oh my! A new favorite! Deliciously vulgar (always a fave), lot of dark things happen and much darker promise to happen (delicious), a promising dark storyline and events, descent artwork, lots of sexual situations and sexy clothes, but most of all the build up of anticip- ... ation. Oh I so can't wait for chapters 3 and 4, I am Here for it.

    My only bits of 'hm..' is that it is hinting it might become one of those 'terrible things happen to the heroine and she discovers she likes all of them' which is always a bit weird to me if no mind-control is involved.. but it sounds like chapter 3 won't do that? (hope) Also there's certainly very few choices / feeling of control. It helps that you can go through the phone whenever (and there are some funny things in there) and the choices you do have promise to be somewhat meaningful (though really, we're all gonna pick the same ones, I'm pretty sure. But is what it is, some games are just more linear / illustrated stories then others.