VN - Ren'Py - David VS Goliath [Demo v1.0] [Koko Theory]

I'm giving this game five stars because of the shota protagonist. If others don't appreciate that, maybe this isn't the right platform for them.

The only thing I'd suggest is adding more games in this category with similar themes, especially focusing on corruption arcs.

Great work—looking forward to more like this!

I'm referring to Sophie Elku and loikl; it's a shame women are allowed on this site.

Changes needed:-
1. MC looks underaged
2. Graphic needs to be better
3. The scene changes too quickly, needs slow pacing

What I liked:-
1. Script has the potential
2. Animations are good for demo
3.Music and sound was good

This is bad, the story is confusing at times, the MC is another child... I mean "adult" of "18" years old with an annoying attitude who plays detective, and the rest of the characters are not exactly better, especially the "friend".

The graphics are also very bad, sure, perhaps the dev does not have the best PC for this, but the renders look old and grainy, this was already bad in 2018 now it simply does not work, to that we add that the models, especially in The faces look strange, as if they had bad plastic surgery.

The animation is abrupt, it does not feel fluid.

A good game must have:
-Good Story
- Good character development (Especially the MC)
-Good graphics
-Good sexual scenes (This is porn at the end of the day)

This game has none, maybe some history, but it pales too much in comparison to the rest.

Not recommended, at least not at this time, maybe the dev will be able to correct this but I doubt it.

Ok. For a demo it has a good sized download file. You can still play through it rather rapidly however.

To begin...I give all games 2 points to start with.

I gave an additional 2 points because of how attractive the majority of the characrers were. So we currently are at 4 points.

I gave an additional point because there is somewhat of a story here. So now we are at a 5.

You may be asking yourself why you see a rating of 2 and not a 5? Well we are about to get to that.

I deducted 2 points because of the fact you can NOT rename your character and that prevents me from being able to fully immerse myself into the story.

I deducted another point because while there are sex scenes and yes they are animated a little they are pathetically short in length. The dev says there is a lot of sex. Okay but how great is that if you blink and you missed it. Besides if all you show is one position animated only with no foreplay and no lead in it kind of loses its excitement.

So now we are back to the 2 you see.

I did not deduct points for the not so great English in the story that made a few of the choices offered questionable as to what they were offering. I also did not deduct anything for the dreadded and hated terms landlord or landlady being used in the game either. I also did not deduct points for the lack of backgrounds for any of the characters already presented in the demo.

That said all of this can easily be improved on with a bit of real work. This review can go from bad back to a 5 just by putting more time into the issues at hand. Just making the character able to be personalized is 2 points right there. Add some depth and feeling to your sex scenes that people can, lets be honest, fap to and you have a huge improvement. Obviuously English is not their main language but its something that can be improved with mor effort.
Backstories help the player get involved in the story you are presenting as the characters now have a life that can be related to. You don't need to present a novel about each one but something is better than nothing. There was nothing relatable about this story whatsoever.

Oh and how old is the MC? 12?

Visually this isn't the best. The renders are pretty grainy. The models are average and could use improvement, especially the MC.

Not being able to change the MC's name hurts and when "cousin" shows up saying " Hi Landlady" it's really off putting. It would be better to let the player define relationships.

A rough start that could use some refinement.