VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Deadlocked in Time [Final] [Neko-Hime]

What can I say? I'm' a fan of Neko-Hime's work. She makes all her own models, and they're sexy as all get-out. This game is a little slower-paced that Maou-Sama, and that gives more of a sense of realism. The MC's problems with his landlady and roommates follow sensibly from his terrible treatment by the landlord, but his friends stand by him, even when he decides to try reconciling with his landlady and roommates (except for one of them). The fascinating thing so far is what the heck is going to happen that takes us from an ordinary story of a regular life to the futuristic scenarios hinted at by the name, the opening scenes, and the weird people who are secretly testing the MC.

For a V 0.1 this isn't bad. There is room for improvement. The writing is off and I can't put my finger on it. I can't go into details with out spoiling things, but the story contradicts itself. It starts off one way, and then BAM! It's a complete 180. Maybe the opening should be a backstory instead of being in the story. I'll still come back and check on the next update. Good luck to the dev with this project.