Ren'Py - Deathable [v0.3.7] [Meorless]

I had fun. It has interesting mechanics that aren't annoying and good scenes. Just including a walkthrough if you want it right from the beginning was very appreciated. Not a lot there yet but there's enough there to make me want to see what is next.

Its a story visual novel with many options in the menu.
Like choosing your fetishes and stuff.

When it comes to gameplay/story i must say its really good.
Theres a nice intro to the game, key to the story i guess.
The animations are really well made as well, you can even interact which is so cool.
Theres a point system with characters, whether they like you, their affection and trust.
I must say this all sounds very interesting and i would urge you to try it as it seems like not many people tried it or left a review.

The only downside i could give you is English mistakes, thats why i put 4 stars as there is room for improvement

v.0.15

The game has potential. Decent art, and the game didn't shy away from some kinda dark thing like R*pe. Aside from the laggy animations and awkward writing, I can see the passion and what this game could be if the dev would continue.

This is my first time writing a review on this page. I've played a lot of fantastic games on here, a lot of well made, story telling or not, plot driven or pure sexual but still some really fun and sexy ass games. This is not one of them.
There has been times when writing was just off putting, on this case saying this would be putting it nicely. Even if the author of this game makes a valiant effort to verify the age of the user at the beggining of the game I doubt he himself is older than 18, it is just pure edgy teen nonesense.
Fetishes are presented for free, dark ones at that, which I can understand some might not be my taste, but they are just there for the sake of it, surrounded by the nastiest most brainless quotes just to make them even more tasteless.

Animations are decent, use those skills for something else. Check out other games by the way.

Game is still in early stages, but what is being presented promises in the future to be a very good game with choice and consequences with a variety of fetishes and scenes depending on your preference that could be turned on or off from the settings. A very ambitious project I applaud the dev for it.

Version Reviewed: 0.1

Not bad, I liked the interface and the option to turn an LN.

There aren't many H-scenes, but I see potential in the plot. The amount of fetishes is a good attraction, the art is not bad and the mysterious air of the story draws a lot of attention. Good luck to the devs.

No doubt it's already on my watchlist

Deathable

Version reviewed: 0.1

I really enjoyed the branching dialogues and the cinematic style. Definitely something that you don't see every day, even if the intro itself is very cliche for what it is. Rating 4 stars for potential, we'll see where it goes.

Personally, I find this more original than the infinite RPGM titles, and with potential to become something more than the run-of-the mill Ren'Py visual novel.

The art has room for improvement, but does its job, and is even cute at times.
The story seems to deviate from the usual, which can be a good thing if done right. Characters aren't boring (yet).

The main issue I have with the game is writing. The dev's obviously isn't a native speaker, and their English is all over the place. It mostly manages to convey the meaning, but is too off-putting (for me).
If hiring a professional writer is not financially viable at this stage in development, the dev should consider writing the dialogue in their native language, and then translating with google or Deepl, I guarantee better results.

All in all, a title that caters to the younger demographic that could turn out good, if technical issues don't kill it in conception.
I was on the fence between giving it two or three stars, but opted for two, as this is a Ren'Py game, so the writing is much more important than in a gameplay-focused product.

Good luck dev.

Reviewing 0.1 is never easy, especially when you wish you had never played it!!

No need to scratch your head trying to reconcile the star rating and that first sentence. I'll explain it.

I truly wish I had not played this 'version', because it was like inserting the tip of your dick into the pussy of the hottest girl you ever met after abstaining for months, and thats all she would let you do!!!

It is awesome, but leaves you wanting....scratch that... it leaves you craving, much like Deathable 0.1!

The attention to detail by the dev is just amazing. They have really thought through the human interaction element.
The kinks menu looks delicious!
The art is beautiful.
The Audio, for a change, is subtle and nice. Its not jarring or misplaced /mistimed like many other games.

With a setup like this, the expectations will be very high. I am cheering for Meorless! Kudos and Good Luck !! If you continue this quality, I will stay with this game till the [COMPLETED] tag hits it!