Others - Completed - Debt Ridden Me Picked Up An Obedient Runaway JK [v2024.06.03] [Kebab Reverie]

It's short, the animations are kinda... small resolution but well made small loops, the story is very interesting - you either act like a hero and choose to be with your roomate, act like a hero and choose to be with your coworker and kick your roomate out, or you become the villain and blackmail and terrify your roomate to solve your personal problems.

Is it worth dropping a save and watching the gallery? well... not really, cause you won't see the story.

If there was much more story involved and many more endings, and much higher quality scenes, then this would be a masterpiece, I will keep it 4/5.

A game worth playing and above all I hope the creator will continue it. I will still buy it to support it, para los no parlantes de ingles este es un uego que recomiendo plenamente una recomendacion de alguien mas de internet pero este juego vale la pena y por este medio lo encontre y ha comprarlo para apoyar al creador

Okay, this gets two stars because I do like the pixel art, but this game was still a huge let down. The main character being a nobody blob is... a choice... but at least the girls have a handful of animations in a variety of positions. However, the game is extremely short, and minimal effort was put into the story and character side of it. The story was both predicable, and extremely unbelievable, which kind of made me wish that it didn't even exist at all. I found myself just wanting to skip through it to view the H scenes. You do have some control over the ending, but the choices you make to get there are extremely telegraphed and not at all interesting.

Worth noting, the user interface, controls, and game settings were also bafflingly bad. But ultimately, the shitty story (and lack of control over it) is what ruined it for me. I wish I skipped this game.

Alright quick review.

Played it, finished it in about less than a hour. Its just not very good is it?

The amount of content is kinda sparse, but then again its not unexpected given that its premise is thus; you play as a random nobody who wakes up and discovers that youre in a 1 million yen debt (for what...I mean this guy works in a convenience store, and theres no indication...whatever I guess). The thugs threaten to be not very nice with you if you cant pay back within a week. Meanwhile, you discover a lost girl and after some contrivance you allow her to cohabitate with you, because why not.

So long story short, there's a good ending and bad ending. And really, having played through both, I have to say the endings pretty ironically twisted. The good ending is so absurdly unrealistic whereas the bad ending has absolutely no downsides; you cant even call it a bad ending because our protagonist suffers no repercussions for his actions, his debts get wiped off in exchange for the girl's honour, someone who he literally only met 5 days ago. Does he at least suffer his own loss of humanity and conscience? Does he fuck.

The game has VA. But really, could have saved some development cash and just omit it because it neither elevates nor make the game any more playable than it is.

So all in all. The H 'gameplay' which is basically just watch as the H goes along, is sparse, done in the familiar 16 bit impression, but I wasnt impressed with it. Gameplay is tedious. But for what its worth, its at least mildly amusing.

If the game was longer i feel like i would've hate it, but since you can 100% it in under 1 hour (maybe less if you skip some dialogue like i did) it was a really enjoyable experience.

Scenes are hot, the pixel art is well done and there are some CGs too, with voiced characters and overall pretty chill music, short and sweet!

Concise and simple story, yet the pixel art and a few choices work very well in this game. It's ~1h game. It's worth to mention that there are some unfinished ideas. But overall I think it gave me some fun. However I was surprised that the first sexual interactions with the main girl are very pervy, and I mean like very pervy. Personally I prefer the second girl

Gotta say, it's a short game.
Style 10/10, i love pixel art games well executed as this
Models 7/10 Generic, nothing to bloat about
Story 9/10 Must say the story is very short and simple but it gives you different endings, I hate the NTR one, but overall it was good

Well, the game isn't bad, the only problem that i have was with crashes in a particular scene, odk why but this limited my experience. So I'm giving 4 stars, can be a compatibility error in my PC...
The art in beautifull, the game is short and the plot is simple (but works)

The story is very cliché, and you can find it in many other Japanese works nowadays. but even so, many aspects presented by the developer can still provide a great gaming experience.

The dubbing is really good, the CG art is also good (although personally I don't like the outfits of the two main heroines), and also the pixel animation is satisfying.

Fine game overall, just nothing mind blowing.
The NTR is super avoidable, which is good for some, me included. It's super easy to just not be a creepy weirdo and get the best ending and the best scenes (in my opinion).
The actual "interactive" sex scenes are really whatever- it's kinda hard to tell what's going on due to model size and the pixel art style; the detailed CG images on the other hand are very nice. A lot of good feet stuff! The protagonist being a blank grey blob is disappointing, especially since he has such a small pecker.

It was a fine ''game'' first impresion it looked like NTR legend o game like that but is more like a visual novel.
now the desings are good but notingh from another world. And the VA is great so far.
Now the issue here is he lack of content an scenes and the fact that there is no good ending and the game is full of bugs with the translation like game freezes or black screens.
Then there is the engings. endig 4 is just NTR and ending 2 its also NTR but more good for the player the other two are like good endings but they are bad. History is fine but just that. still meh wank meh game still kinda recomended. 4/10 (Sorry for my bad english)

quick game that's actually a visual novel. Decent animations and there's voice acting. Story isn't anything ground breaking but at least has some branch points that feel different from one another. Very short game worth the time to complete at least one ending.

Excellent game if you are the kind of person who likes to see girls being fucked by things similar to penises but that look more like imaginary and semi-transparent beings.
I, personally, am sick of that format, but the game is well made...I'm not going to argue with that.

A small game but good story, i like it.
The dev got potential, hope they can improve it over time and make an even better game.
The girl at the shop doesn't deserve to be treated like that in END 1 dammit!
She might not rich but she's definitely a keeper for life.

Good game with some good art and a banger start for a new developer.

It's not perfect by any means. Its a bit short and some mechanics i would like from the game are missing. Like dressin the girl up and diciding what to buy and stuff like that.

Also it would be nice to save at choices.

Big plus for a nice translation tho.

Super short but I'm a sucker for good pixel art and voiced. It plays almost like a sandbox with you roaming every day but there's only set events and sex scenes. Also why is armpit sex the first scene lol

Lovely story when going for the good ending route, I was hoping for some more CGs of their reunion after the time skip.

Felt like the other girl deserved a few more scenes as well when going for her ending. Having an option to romance both girls would definitely seal the deal, even tho I'm content with just the main girl's story.

a staggering 4/5 for me.

can easily beaten in 1 hour. I've spent way worse on 1 hour on other stuff than this, like a laggy game that you can't play at all...

story is short, but even then has more content for a short time frame.

also is it just me or are game styles like this are getting fewer and fewer? don't listen to those that say art is bad. honestly I can't remember the last time I played this kind of game style.

note: there's a scene in the game where it will lock you out of the game. this happens on day 6 when the thugs requests something out of you and your main girl. important to save at that point, change language to japanese, get past the part where the game freezes and go back to english.

very short game for a price of 6$ and this is the first game from this dev i must say this is pretty good , a "runway girl" game with good art and a decent doujishi plot i rate this game good , too short and only last like 7 days ingame even so this is pretty much a flash game

the freezing bug aside, this is a nice little game
it feels a bit too short though
if they stretch the game to 2 weeks or 1 month and let us pimp the other girl too, it'd be perfect

but yeah, while it was a short-lived fun, it was still fun
7/10
rounded up to 4/5 since i'm biased toward pixel art animation