Others - Completed - Debt Ridden Me Picked Up An Obedient Runaway JK [v2024.06.03] [Kebab Reverie]

the freezing bug aside, this is a nice little game
it feels a bit too short though
if they stretch the game to 2 weeks or 1 month and let us pimp the other girl too, it'd be perfect

but yeah, while it was a short-lived fun, it was still fun
7/10
rounded up to 4/5 since i'm biased toward pixel art animation

In short, this game have potential but can't use most of it

While the arts are ok and above average CGs, it just that and nothing too crazy or creative

The part the game waste actually the plot and story, not that I say it bad, it just waste the really good set up the game have.

You guys can read other review for detail because I only want to write a fast review from my perspective

Gameplay Hour: About 2 hours.
I didn't go through all the dialogue choice so I may not know every consequence.
I just go through ending 1,2 and 4, so might missed.

It was super promising, both Female characters are attractive and have distinct personnality.
The premise is also good, and the CG are way better than I expected.

But everything else fall flat.

The Pixel Art, while good, have no variation. That means there's only one variation for each scene, and you'll see that scene one time only (aside from free mode).

The game give you the illusion of a progression system with money and "Justice", but that's all that is: an illusion.

Money doesn't matter, you'll get what you need depending on the choice you make.
Justice is just a "cheat" that show you what choice you should take for the different endings.

This game would have been a 5 Star, easily, if more polish and more thought would have been put into it, and more content.

What a shame. Oh well, that's how it is.

TLDR: Great game for short fap, one time only, no replay value. Great CG, everything else is mid.

After playing through the 4 endings, I gotta say this was underwhelming, the sex animations are single looped and kinda boring, the game is way to short and a lot of content is not expanded upon as well. The story is also a little ridiculous as if you chose to do the the video for the mob the mc all of a sudden just becomes and asshole to everyone on that route including the convience store girl for literally zero reason (even when she offers to help with his debt with money which is literally the whole point). The rest of the story isn't really logical either as in the good route the girl just suddenly is allowed to have money to help the mc even though when she left her parents blocked her credit card as she said and more.

Overall it's decent for a quick fap but thats it. If this game dropped the convenience store girl (who has literally zero story beside she likes the mc and wants to be his pet for some reason) and focused entirely on the main girl and the debt and streaming etc and made the game longer while expanding on those premises it would of been way better imo.

On the one hand, the basic gameplay and story are decent. The pixel art is about what you'd expect for pixel art. And there are a couple of CGs. Not a lot, but an okay amount for a game that's predominantly pixel art.

The biggest issue is the controls... They decided to make it a keyboard controlled, WASD game. Which by itself is fine. But, there's nothing for you to do with that. It's a very linear game with near-zero map reason to interact with the map except when explicitly made to interact with the map, but you're forced to slowly walk around.

What could be 5 seconds of clicking to go from apartment to the store for your mandatory part time job is instead a solid 30 seconds of moving the guy there. Then after the brief bit of conversation with your coworker, 30 seconds slowly making your way back home.

Basically, the game makes you feel like you're moving the mouse cursor with your keyboard instead of the mouse. Which is just really bad design.

A solid 4/5 story and art for the short and simple game it is. But needless dragged out by bad controls that drags it down to 3/5.

The game itself is not bad. I can see the potential of being a longer story line, but the game made relationship of MCs so weird and awkward. Because of that, the game are extremely short. The scenes is quite broing because they are just a loop animation, also very few, and no CG. If you come to see a long game and enjoyable story, this game not suitable for you, at all. But as a instant-noodle game, it quite playable.

I like the game, it's well done and has awesome "pixel" art.
It's a pretty short game, but you have few choices that you can explore to achieve different outcomes. For the short playtime it's good enough.

My main critique points are:
- Scenes aren't very sexy, it's always single movement loops and you barley see the scene duo to it's small size
- I personally find that MC/men as "placeholder"/"crash dummy" weird and it destroy a bit the atmosphere for me. I find generic characters better
- Forcing the player to run left and right while there isn't really reason to roam freely is a waste of time and basically the main reason why I don't want to replay the game to see all endings

Play being a good person, the good ending is worth it. It's a simple and quick game. Basically you just have to go to work and come home... And of course make choices. I beat the entire game in about 50 minutes and I can say that it is cool, the scenes are few, but they are beautiful and the characters are good.

Pretty good game. Haven't finished it yet but the art style is really good if you liked NTR Legend or Ntraholic you will like this one too. There is no grind and the dialog is decent no unnecessary bs.