It was fine until chapter 6...
It's main focus is on getting revenge on Lera's at-the-time boyfriend (who becomes an ex off screen) for physically beating her. Well...
1. While they were together long enough to develop feeling, she was never intimate with him during the entirety of their relationship, as confirmed by her not denying at most he got a peck on the cheek.
2. He understandably cheated on her, with one of her models no less, as she refused to tend to his needs. She completely ignored his needs and when he got them met elsewhere, suddenly it's a problem. I'm not defending him, he's also a piece of shit.
3. She initiated the abuse. She admittedly beat him first, proudly at that, yet is painted as the innocent victim. What she should have done, and what would have been an opportunity to be sympathetic towards her situation is: she should have fired her model and broken up with him after he beat her. Instead of, you know, attacking him and her model.
4. Towards the end of the chapter there is a choice to either call it a night, closing of her romance path, or a sex scene. She's willing to jump on the MC's dick after throwing one punch, but refuses to kiss her boyfriend, whom she developed feeling for, on the lips...
The only good things from chapter 6 is Kaylie in a dress that makes her look even hotter than ever and a scene with Melinda. Clearly written by a SIMP with a fantasy of being Capitan Saveahoe, taking out her ex with a single blow. Chapter 6 has completely changed my opinion of this VN for the worse with it's horrible story.