Ren'Py - Abandoned - Deserted Island Dreams [v0.42] [DeDagames]

I think this game has potential, currently it is full of errors.
These include spelling, mislabelled speech lines and a lot of bad English that make some of it hard to understand.
In regards to the game-play, your wife's emotional reactions in various scenarios doesn't seem quite right. She is either falling in love in a couple of days or has no guilt/ remorse when she is caught cheating.
I'd rate the renders a 5/10, could be much better.

1/5 - Bad game; Didn't get me off
~ 1 hour long (v 0.42)

Gameplay consists of making choices. Many choices do affect the game, but the effects of other choices are ignored. For example you can choose to say that you do not want your wife to cheat on you, and then a few moments later your character will say the opposite. After I won I went back and made different choices, but they all led to the same few scenes.
There are many bugs. One choice made my game crash. Some scenes played twice. Some scenes played out of order.

Story is decent, but writing is bad. Worse than HTML game level. This is made even worse by there being way too much dialogue. Dialogue often makes you want to facepalm. There are grammar mistakes.
Porn is bad. Descriptions are average, renders are bad, animations are average. But the problem is with the setup, where you don't really care about any of the sex because of the awful characterization.

I wouldn't recommend this unless you enjoy playing those awful HTML cuckold/sissy games. This is around the same quality.
And that would be fine if the game were to make up for it with choices and branching paths and render quality, but this game doesn't.

Pro:
1. For me, the game theme is clear, cuckold. I personally just like this type of game.
2. Providing various choices to let players decide what kind of relationships between mc and his wife. Also, there are plenty of routes.

The only con is the rendering quality. But it is acceptable for me.

Man, I am sorry.
You got a fantastic concept here, and it does take balls to openly create an NTR game, but, holy hell, the art is freaking terrible in this game. Not to mention, your assets look like they were designed on a Windows 95 Hewlett Packard PC.
I honestly believe you should start the art process over. Keep the dialog, and hell hire a proof-reader while you're at it, and this might turn out to be an honest to goodness game. In the meantime, it is sorely lacking in ton of departments.

Good game plot, graphics, characters, and content. There's always something new to explore and the author allows you to create your story the way you want while respecting the fact that some things are out of the gamers control. There's literally dozens of paths you can take and multiple ways to start the game and change your game once it starts.

There are a few cons though.
1. spelling errors
2. Faults with the images. While exploring some of the NTR paths the images kept going from one character to another while engaging in sex. It showed a black character in the wife then another separate man, then back to the black guy when only one character was suppose to be fucking her.
3. While I love the idea of a Stats page it seems that depending on which route you take in the game the stats page stops working. It's annoying.

Rated 0.25
I played it using every different start option and I always found something new and interesting to see. The Game Play is already really long.
If you take the netorase options it's one of the best game around.
The characters are (mostly) interesting, varied and can be further developed.
I like the graphics, but they have their own style not everybody will like.
There are some Spelling errors.

My Rating for v0.1 is:

Pros:
+ Nice Graphics
+ Nice Story
+ Characters Nice
+ Hot NTR Scenes
+ Long Game Play
Cons:
- Some minor Spelling Errors

Conclusion:
Long Game Play with hot characters on a lonesome island,and then with hot couples,who could ask for more?.
The Graphics are Nice but sometimes grainy, also you have some animation that is great for a first release.
There are some Spelling errors and sentences that don`t fit,but hey Nobodys perfect.
Really a Great game for a first release, with no grinding effect.

Overall:
A Hot story worth the Download.

Very well written and not so short story for a 0.1, you don't see that often with releases this early on. Lots of options, which is certainly another plus. My only advice to the creator is: renders and graphics should be improved, sometimes characters look lifeless and distant.

A nice story, clear choices and a lot of different pathes for every taste. And the (potential) lovers of the wife are not old and ugly or having gignormous cocks!
Still can't give the last star because of the renders and the errors in the texts, but I'm sure the dev will work on it.