VN Ren'Py Destined Dreams [v0.1] [Melwen]

[melwen]

After playing the first 2 minutes of this, I can confidently say: This needs a proofreader.
Other than that, ... I can't tell, it's been a few minutes. It looks good.
But I will wait a bit before checking in again.

Thank you for your feedbacks. I'm trying to improve everything one by one as i move forward.

 

[melwen]

If you want to download the game via Itch.io, i setup a page for that. This is my only Itch page for Destined Dreams, beware of the fake ones.

You must be registered to see the links

 

[Najn]

 

[Noxedia]

Thanks for dropping this here, looks like Jason’s about to have either the time of his life or a full mental breakdown - probably both. How much freedom do we actually get with his choices? Can he skip Uncle Thomas and just run straight into the city’s mess?

 

[melwen]

Thanks for dropping this here, looks like Jason’s about to have either the time of his life or a full mental breakdown - probably both. How much freedom do we actually get with his choices? Can he skip Uncle Thomas and just run straight into the city’s mess?

Right now, there is no option to skip Uncle Thomas as he explains everything about how the things work in the city and his business but there will be some choices that you will make as Jason to open up different scenes and relationships based on that choices.

And I would love to get a feedback from you, is the first part with Uncle Thomas too long? Should I cut some stuff out of it for the sake of the flow of the game.

 

[melwen]

Hello everyone,

I have been working non-stop since the release of the first version of Destined Dreams! I worked on multiple things such as drawing another LI for the part, making mini-games and fixing some bugs and making some QOL changes in the first part.

Here is what I fixed on the Part 1. This fixes will release in the future version with new content!

• Fixed a bug that happens during the hugging sprite between Skye and MC.
• Changed the animation of the bus in the opening scene.
• MC pose adjusted in various of places.
• Intro animation has been removed.
• Made mini-games skippable.
• Lily and Olivia full body scenes backgrounds has been changed. Added blur.
• Added various of effects during some scene changes.
• Fixed an sprite issue with Olivia’s bending scene.
• Added and removed dialogs for world building purposes. For example, opening monolog of Uncle Thomas has been reduced.
• Adjusted some audio and music.
• Changed Elizabeth workplace with the new purple one

Here is the new content that I made for the upcoming version.

• Added another mini-game to the game.
• Finished first LEWD scene.
• Wrote the dialog of most of the part.
• Finished sprites of the new LI by 70%.
• Finished additional backgrounds.
• Working on another mini-game.

I’m planning to finish the new version soon and you will be able to continue your story with the saves that you have.

Thank you!

 

[melwen]

Hello everyone

I’ve been working on the rest of the episode for the past month as I had a family matter to attend in September.

Now, I’m back on track and currently drawing sprites of a new LI, Zoey, as she has an important part in this episode. Along with that, I did some rework on some parts in the chapter that includes some bug fixing and adding additional sprites to some LI’s.



Right now, I’m embedding the game in Ren’Py as well meanwhile I’m drawing sprites. Working on couple of mini-games as well. Feedback I got from you made me more ambitious about making more simple but effective in story-telling games in Destined Dreams.

I’ll share more info soon. Thank you.

 

[katabasi]

may speed be with u