Others [Development Thread] pleasure full dungeon (my first game)

[Matlej69]

Hello, I’m new to the forum and came here based on a recommendation from a friend.

Currently, I’m working on a game called Pleasure Full Dungeon. It’s a dungeon crawler that revolves around random encounters with various female opponents. The combat system is based on minigames, and each opponent has her own unique minigame.

After defeating an opponent, players will have the option to either gain strength points or “have fun” with her, which will heal the player slightly and unlock an NSFW scene.

It’s a simple concept, but since I’m new to creating games of this type—and because I also work a regular job—progress has been slow. On top of that, I’ve revised and modified the project many times. I even scrapped two months of work and decided to rebuild the game in its simplest form to ensure I can finish it.

I hope that once the game is released, someone will find it interesting enough to play. The game will be 100% free.

My dream is to create simple NSFW games like this one, so after completing this project, I’d love to hear any suggestions for future games!

As for the art style, I’m currently doing all the artwork myself. Previously, my girlfriend helped me, but she doesn’t have time anymore. I know my art style isn’t the most appealing, but I’m learning and improving as I go.

I’d greatly appreciate any feedback or responses! :3

 

[yawit]

Your art is actually not bad op, but a couple of adjustments would make it even better. Let's take the white-haired girl as an example. Her lineart is pretty even overall. You'd want some variation in line weight. Some should be thin, some should be thick. A good rule of thumb is thick for outlines, thin for details.

I'll assume that the scratchy lines is part of your style(correct me if i'm wrong). But you'd also want more variation on that part because from what I see they're mostly shorter lines joined together. Try incorporating overlapping longer lines especially on longer parts like the hair, or limbs.

Goodluck op!

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Matlej69

Love the direction that your game is headed into

The art style actually has a nice charm to it IMHO - reminds me of another game that I played on the Zone a couple of months back...

Two Faceless Adventures - that was the one!

But yeah, I love the dungeon crawler and minigame aspect to your game. Seems quite intriguing. How many heroines do you plan on adding to the game anyways?

 

[Matlej69]

Your art is actually not bad op, but a couple of adjustments would make it even better. Let's take the white-haired girl as an example. Her lineart is pretty even overall. You'd want some variation in line weight. Some should be thin, some should be thick. A good rule of thumb is thick for outlines, thin for details.

I'll assume that the scratchy lines is part of your style(correct me if i'm wrong). But you'd also want more variation on that part because from what I see they're mostly shorter lines joined together. Try incorporating overlapping longer lines especially on longer parts like the hair, or limbs.

Goodluck op!

At first, I planned for that kind of art style, but now I’m improving and trying to draw better. Thank you for the comment! I just drew a new enemy, and she looks better than the others. I’m not sure if I should just redraw the two old characters before releasing the game. Below is an image of the new character

 

[Matlej69]

Matlej69

Love the direction that your game is headed into

The art style actually has a nice charm to it IMHO - reminds me of another game that I played on the Zone a couple of months back...

Two Faceless Adventures - that was the one!

But yeah, I love the dungeon crawler and minigame aspect to your game. Seems quite intriguing. How many heroines do you plan on adding to the game anyways?

Probably 8, but I’m not sure. I’m planning for this game, once it’s released, to be shaped by the community. New characters, mini-games, and mechanics would be voted on by both patrons and regular free players

 

[Matlej69]

btw i added my game on itch.io im waiting until mods post the game on this site

 

[Matlej69]

here is the link to the request post: Request post <---

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

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btw i added my game on itch.io im waiting until mods post the game on this site

The art looks good fam Love the hand-drawn aspect of it

I like the anime-style aesthetic with the girl. She has a banging body

 

[Matlej69]

The art looks good fam Love the hand-drawn aspect of it

I like the anime-style aesthetic with the girl. She has a banging body

man thanks Love from small working weird man from poland

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

man thanks Love from small working weird man from poland

Keep up the great work my friend, godspeed

~ Signed: Your friendly and supportive Canadian Spiderman

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

At first, I planned for that kind of art style, but now I’m improving and trying to draw better. Thank you for the comment! I just drew a new enemy, and she looks better than the others. I’m not sure if I should just redraw the two old characters before releasing the game. Below is an image of the new character
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Does this girl have a certain battle-class profession? I.e., like a battle mage or warlock, sorceress, etc? Seems like she's an "ice mage" of sorts given her overall aesthetic

 

[Qara Ay]

Very cute art!
I noticed that your lines are a little shaky. If you want to make your lines smoother and cleaner, most graphic editors have some type of brush stabilization.
For example in Krita it's Brush smoothing in Tool Options