Ren'Py - Abandoned - Deviant Discoveries [v0.50.0] [Jan The Spider]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    mrbombadil

    TLDR: Tricky rating since I enjoy the corruption, DP, anal focus and drugs. Significant negatives pull rating down. Especially the misunderstood "sharing" where MC isn't in control, only gets sloppy seconds, or isn't even aware the girl is with other men. Girls are mostly unattractive and after transformation looks way worse. Few renders. No story to speak of.

    Positives:
    • Corruption of teenage school girls and other hotties.
    • A2M. And ass to other girl's mouth.
    • DP (This is surprisingly rare in porn games.)
    • Quite well-written dialogue. Dirty talk and degradation.
    • Male dom. But not perfect due to MC's hesitation, passiveness.
    • Proper deepthroating and emphasis on swallowing.
    • Exhibitionism and making the girls were increasingly slutty outfits to school, showing off pussy, etc.
    • Anal focus! Training, stretching, gaping, fucking anal virgins.
    • MC is not an idiot and he's muscular. Both points are rare for porn games.
    • "Harem" in the sense that none of the girls are exclusive from each other. A couple FFM threesomes.
    • Filming some of the girls.
    Negatives:
    • Girls have sex without you and outside your control. E.g. you're seducing a girl but then you don't see her again until you catch her giving blowjobs to random people. WTF? This is not sharing, it doesn't even involve MC. Then you catch her sucking off a dozen guys in a gloryhole, again without MC.
    • Outdated character models and rendering.
    • Extremely few renders. So scenes are mostly just text and then 2-3 renders.
    • Before transformation some of the girls don't look great but acceptable. Some chubby and with huge plastic tits.
    • After transformation the girls look terrible! Giant silicone breasts, fake butts, tattoos, worse hair, everything exaggerated too much. Transformation required to progress.
    • No story, basically. Just an initial set up and then corrupting the girls.
    • Relatively few scenes with penetration given that it's a fuckfest game. And sex scenes are short.
    • Blueballing. E.g. horny naked girl is asking for MC to fuck her but MC just fingers her. (Dev wants "progression" but it's poorly done in such cases.)
    • MC isn't always great at being dominant. The dialogue makes the submissive girls be in control and leading the action, while MC is too passive and hesitant.
    • Guy fucks your girl (without MC). The other dude may take your girl's anal virginity. At least it's optional if you let them to go all the way. (But sharing should be under the control and direct involvement of MC.)
    • MC is just referred to as "Player". Can't change name.
    • The cum scenes are too short. Should be more emphasis on the orgasms, cum, swallowing, and clean up.
    • Femdom. No warning, no option. Not my thing and doesn't fit in this type of maledom game.
    • Sandbox format which doesn't add much other than unnecessary clicks. Have to earn money, buy items, etc. A minor grind.
    • No animations.
    • With a couple of the girls MC only gets sloppy seconds. E.g. during the corruption process the girl first sucks off other guys and only after that MC gets it. Really stupid. MC should be the main guy, in control, and only after having fucked her in every way and only if we choose and are directly involved then we might share the girl.
    • Consequences of choices are completely unclear, surprising. E.g. including a girl in exercise makes other guys fuck her face (no options).
    • Missable content. If you progress to a new stage with a girl before having found all content you'll permanently miss it.
    • No scene gallery.
    Number of scenes:
    • Vaginal: 18 (Of these, scenes without MC: 1 )
    • Anal: 12 (Of these, scenes without MC: 1 )
    • DP: 1
    (Version played: 0.50.0 Abandoned)
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    Linkolek

    Typical VN centered around "corruption". Honestly, unless you read some dialogue as implication that MC has some passive "trust me" aura, girls are pretty much OK with most sexual stuff from get go. There is bimofication through serums MC invented, but that's about it.
    Music - ?/5 - I don't listen to Game mmusic most of the time and this was no exeption.
    Gameplay - 3/5 - standard "sandbox"VN. You can change order in witch you get the girls or scenes... to an extent, but choices rarely matter aside from "you need X to be this obedient to proceed". Little grind for when you need more "points" to get to nest scene, but have to few secenes, forcing relaying one or two.
    Story - 3/5 - Middling, bot not in "meh" style, but rather as many ups and downs that aren't extreme enough to say skip that part.
    Art - 1~5/5 - Crux of the game. Desingns are very hit or miss depending on your attitude towards bimbofication. Not my cup of tea, but I've to admit that quality is high.
    Overall - 4/5 - Remove up to 2 stars depending on your opinoin about character designs (and their bimbofied forms).
  3. 2.00 star(s)

    spacezombie

    Pretty boring.

    The story is okay nothing special.

    The dialogues are pretty boring.

    The transformations are pretty okay if you like bimbos.

    The sex scenes have no animations and don´t look good, they are just over the background which looks very cheap.

    The gameplay is a little bit grindy and not interesting or fun.

    The worst part is obviously, no music no sounds, makes everything feel boring.

    But if you really like transformations with bimbos you can try it.
  4. 4.00 star(s)

    Londonerxxx

    Solid corruption game that's not too grindy. I think it would have been better if they kept the MC looking less attractive though like the start.

    I love the diversity here with Asian, Latina and Black girls. I'm not the biggest fan of bimbofication though and the game could do with animation during sex scenes.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 2378794

    Honestly I was kinda put off from the rather thicc female characters in the previews years ago when this was released, and it was only now that I gone through someone else's recommendation of this, I gave it a shot.

    Holy shit, boy did I regret not playing this long ago. The characters and their corruption was tip top off the hook, straight up to the min max bimbo class. There are no animation, no music, no sound effect, but jesus, the scenes are so good so raunchy, that I don't need them (given that previous experiences I really need moans and other fx to jack one out.

    Play this if you like corruption, bimbofication. Don't put this off cause of thicc female characters or non-animated scenes. You won't regret it. This is my longest review so far, to date.
  6. 5.00 star(s)

    CapnJellyBones

    A game I did not expect to enjoy as much as I did. Very well written, slow corruption, great models, it has a lot of very good points. It's also clear that, unlike a lot of other games, the developer does not have an underlying hatred for women. Which is refreshing.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    WilleVodka

    Super hot game. It is so rare to see bdsm whithout rape as well. The bimbofication is not to over the top as well as they often do. Well done corruption and story progression. Not grindy at all (unless you call the corruton grind for sex). No animations but a lot of angles veraity in sex scenes making them insanly enjoyable if you like bondage and bdsm.
  8. 3.00 star(s)

    _Utakata_

    The girls renders before they transform are good

    Sex scenes are good

    I had to get use to the new way to get money But once you teach and train frankie few time you get easy money

    Only things i actually like in this game

    I don't mind bimbofication But my problem is the woman look older once they transformed
    They no longer look like they go to highschool

    My favourite is harley and once she transformed she no longer looks like a goth girl
    I had no bugs
    Never play with music
    Game originality : I think it's not bad only game that i know of that's like this is the lab rats game
    Giving it a average score
    Game is not bad
  9. 3.00 star(s)

    libracane

    fluid gameplay and the story fits nicely. not a fan of bimbofication even though the model are nicely made part bimbo but full bimbo is not my fetish area. The MC is relatable but the grind to gather ingredients or inject hypno drug (or whichever is called) is very repetitive and demotivating (unless you use cheats, which I say way to go!)
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    ghostmaster

    0.49.6
    This game is rather simple corruption/domination story without any complex elements.
    So why excellent?
    Because porn is plentiful, non-stop and varied with clear step-ups in progression and doesn't require a complex walkthrough to get it all.
    Now for couple grains of salt:
    - Game is still in development, and its development rate is slow as hell. Author adds more girls and more routed for those girls, and quality in good, but waiting for it to be completed is pointless - play it as-is, there is enough.
    - Bimbofication of girls in this game is rather drastic. I consider mid-game models to be the prettiest, but hey, each to their own.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    Rakja

    LOVE THIS GAME. I like the plot, the transformations and the desings very much, specially the 3 main girls.
    Plot & Writing-->5
    Desings-->5 (Love transformations into sexy voluptousus girls)
    Sex Scenes-->5 (Really Exciting)
  12. 3.00 star(s)

    KainAlex

    Well this is the second game i ever finished ( i mean that i finish the content the game as) . It is a good game but not the best i played for now . Will i replay it ... maybe but i will keep it for now. Heres the pro and cons ;

    Pros :
    - The kinks ( or fetish ) are good for my taste ; Anal , bdsm , atm (some) , submission , ect .
    - The grind is not too much or barely exist for that kind of game
    - The corruption is really great !
    - The graphics are good
    -The writing is real good in the 'scenes'

    Moderate ;
    - The models are ok for my taste but Yuki is really great
    -Not much of a story here i find.

    I would give a 4 stars easily but there was a big downfall for me ;
    - no animations not even 1 second , not much explicit image just average to compensate there is no animations
    I guess some will pass over that but not me so this his why i give it a 3 star
  13. 4.00 star(s)

    JinMaoLa

    If you like corrupting innocent minds and have nothing against bimbofication, then this game is definitely for you!

    Art is quite mediocre, animations, what animations? because there is none. So it sums up that from graphic perspective there is not much to deliver.

    So why I give this game 4 stars? Because dev did a quite good job for building a game around bimbofication fetish in somewhat believable story and character progression and if game is right for your fetishes you are for sure gonna enjoy playing it.
  14. 3.00 star(s)

    JimmyJazz69

    Although there are no animations here, the renders are great and the girls and scenes are *really* hot.
    The concept/story is also a good one (as perfect a "corruption" game as it can be!).
    I'm not going for 5 stars because...
    1. The game should REALLY have a gallery, since there is a LOT of content that you cannot access anymore when you progress into the story.
    2. No music, no sound effects...
    3. The updates are few and random; sometimes, the game feels "abandoned", which is a pity...

    Edit: The game was indeed abandoned. Original rating downgrade from 4 to 3 stars because of this.
  15. 5.00 star(s)

    Doorknob22

    What this game doesn't have in flashy animation or crisp renders (early on) it has with abundance of erotic tension gradually building (without making you feel grinded), believable and sexy characters, great dialogs and perfect flow. The developers neither attempt to milk their backers with a never-ending crawl towards pussy nor throw random cunts at your direction, but rather pace the game perfectly towards sex, which is very rewarding once it takes place.

    Highly recommended if you love perfect pace, dominance and sexy girls.
  16. 4.00 star(s)

    staroyster

    I'm positively surprised of this game, yes it's a simple game but easy to understand what to do and how to get there. I want to give this 5 stars, but I simply can't, not of lack of porn scenes or bad gameplay, but a combination of lack of animation (It would be the cream on the cake if it had animations), can't name the protagonist after myself (lol), I miss music, sound effects, moans and I like gameplay with more advanced systems.
    I love the game theme and fetishes, I can't find any other game who has these kind of fetishes I like in this play style, so it's very unique and well put together and again SIMPLE and SEXY game!
    Maybe I'm a little narcissistic, but only in games where I make my own choices and play as me xD
  17. 2.00 star(s)

    taler

    A creepy old MC creeps on a bunch of young girls, and they're all okay with it due to mind control. Boring setup as mind control isn't really used to completely change circumstances, and the MC still acts restrained and like a generic creeper rather than a mastermind.

    The writing is very poor, no kino nor pathos. The majority of the text is spent on describing sex acts in motion. To pace out the sex acts the game throws in a ton of repetitive grind to waste your time and make you frustrated instead of having things like narrative or character development. All your relationships all seem to be very similar, where you're in a position of mentorship from the start and then escalate creepiness.

    The art is ugly.

    There's a good bunch of porn here though.
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    APMaster

    Well, this is one of the best BDSM based games I've found yet.

    The story is pretty decent. Odd enough to be unique, but not nonsensical. Lots of content, and not too grindy.

    Renders are excellent, as are the female models.

    The only downfall is the lack of animations. Quality animations would make this game a solid 6/5 game. Without them, I'd rate it an easy 4.5/5 rounding up to a 5 as a tip-of-the-hat to the Dev.
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    guy2front

    This game kept me busy all night long. I can believe how much stuff/girls there is to do in this at 0.47.2 versions of the game. The models are pretty solid and the premise is great too. Do wish you had more control on what the green serum changes to their bodies so they dont all end up big breasted bimbos but atleast each girl had different personalities and objectives making them different to play around with. Hoping more fun can be had in the park and tattoo parlor. Also hoping for many more girls to corrupt as well. Keep up the good work dev I will be watching and playing every update going forward!!
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    tyuiasdf

    Great game. One of the best. Lots of girls pretty girls becoming very hot. Tons of content and its all fun and well written and the art is great. I have mentioned this game on a lot of threads you should try it.