The story is cliche, and the images need a lot of work. Also, for as short as the current content is, 928 MBs zipped is an insane size. May come back to this after there's more content, because I do enjoy the cliche sometimes, but work on the images and reduce the size. Most of us have 1080 or 1440 monitors, any more is wasted MBs (though those with 4k may disagree with me there).
VN - Ren'Py - Devil Is a Liar [v0.0.1] [WGX]
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Hawkeye3d
Okay, the game has potential, a lot of potential. What I think is holding it back is how the script is read, no emotion, thus no connection to the characters. The pictures are grainy and dark. Now I am not a developer, but I have heard enough to know that this can be fixed with either better equipment or knowledge.
If this is the developers first game, then it is a very good start, the problem is it feels recycled. With the story being a familiar one, boy gets big penis and can do whatever he wants with it, in order to float above the others, will take either better pictures or writing.
It is short, one episode but you get the vibe of what is the target audience/players.
Good luck. I think the developer could make this into something, with time and maybe a extra writer (to put emotions behind the words).