Good story set up for scenes. The scenes are good, but nothing substantial yet (v0.3). I like the art style. The grammar, for the English version at least, is quite bad.
Somewhat overly complicated set up for the player character but I feel like it manages to land towards the end of chapter 1. Otherwise I feel like the story is paced alright and interesting and good enough to reach the h-scenes.
I might be a bit biased, but I like the more cartoony style, and exaggerations. Of course there is better and worse pieces, but I feel like the good outweighs the bad.
The dialogue is probably the weakest point of the game, mostly hampered by the poor grammar. Which is sad because it does pull the story down with it. The way the characters talk feel quite stilted, not natural. I found that I would have to fill in missing context, and replace words with the correct ones, to understand what was happening. I also feel like "hehe" came up too many times in the dialogue, some other ways to show glee from the character would be needed.
In summary:
Story 3/5, dialogue 2/5, scenes 3/5
It needs polishing, and some more content, but there is a good game here with an enjoyable art style.
Somewhat overly complicated set up for the player character but I feel like it manages to land towards the end of chapter 1. Otherwise I feel like the story is paced alright and interesting and good enough to reach the h-scenes.
I might be a bit biased, but I like the more cartoony style, and exaggerations. Of course there is better and worse pieces, but I feel like the good outweighs the bad.
The dialogue is probably the weakest point of the game, mostly hampered by the poor grammar. Which is sad because it does pull the story down with it. The way the characters talk feel quite stilted, not natural. I found that I would have to fill in missing context, and replace words with the correct ones, to understand what was happening. I also feel like "hehe" came up too many times in the dialogue, some other ways to show glee from the character would be needed.
In summary:
Story 3/5, dialogue 2/5, scenes 3/5
It needs polishing, and some more content, but there is a good game here with an enjoyable art style.
)) It is worth hoping that the author will continue to create 2d art with an equally beautiful image, but with the largest number of scenes ^_^. So far everything is fine!