I usually don't write reviews for games I neither think are great or awful, but this guy is being robbed in the reviews.
Art:
Take a very good look at the vast majority of games on this site. Dead plastic Das 3d & Honeyselect dolls, or bland, carbon-copy anime art that looks like it would appeal more to Sailor Moon fans than adults on a lewd game site . Or alternately, drawings with the art skill of the average horny 11 year old boy. None of them are the least bit erotic and I can't understand how most anyone could get off to them other than having rock-bottom low standards.
The art here is one of a small handful of exceptions. The eyes are a little carbon-copy, but facial expressions, body curvature, style and general erotic appeal of the art is top-notch compared to what you'd regularly find on F95-Zone. Even if there isn't much content yet or much of "muh animationz".
The writing also, compared to 85% of games on this site, isn't terrible. Though it's not very good either. There's definite room for improvement and it's not quite up to the standards for the few games I can stomach on here. But compared to some of these stinkers getting 3.5+ stars, it's practically TV quality (maybe a WB series lol), if only because the bar is so low.
For me, the writing, the lack of meaningful choices and the everyman-yet-unrelatable MC (who has sort of a douchebag vibe) are the main detractors. But I think the game deserves a lot more credit versus other games with a 3.5-4 star rating.
There is definitely potential here. Add more choices. Meaningful ones that make us feel invested, as if we're really controlling the character. Sharpen the writing up. Make us care about MC and his situation. Plus make MC at least somewhat more likeable. (He can still be a slacker. That's fine. But the douche 'bro' vibes are off-putting... personal preference). I also don't buy that this guy would get laid so easily. Either make us work for it or make that all more believable. Otherwise, great art and I wish the game success.
Edit: On the douche-bag vibe: Started right away with the girlfriend that "already came". I just don't buy it. Not from this guy. Seems like the story is told from the perspective of a guy who is full of himself yet completely unaware of how inept he is. That would be fine if the dev/writer showed us that intentionally. But it seems like this was written as if he really did have this "problem" with wham-bam-thank-you-sir 30-second-lay girlfriends, so we'd root for him.... 'Yep. The ex-girlfriend just comes in like 20 seconds and then she's done. So greedy! Girls, amirite?!? heh.' The implausibility in his further female interactions continue throughout the game so far. I don't think anyone is buying it, considering the MC the writer has created. Might either want to lose that angle or make it all more plausible that he'd actually have this sort of talent. I mean, he just lays there. Doesn't come off as so dynamite in bed and looks like a pretty average chump all-around. (Starting off as a chump is fine. Even preferable, especially if you can work yourself up meaningfully through your choices. Leisure Suit Larry is a classic, after all. But if you're going that way, you've gotta make us work for it a little or the believability goes right out the window along with our interest).