I absolutely loved it!! The text was snappy and not sappy. Melissa is totally believable and characteristically accurate, at least in terms of what I would certainly expect of a rebellious young girl's tone and attitude towards her Mom's, to her at least, oppressively concerned boyfriend.
The "corruption" if you choose to follow that route (which I did in a later play) was subtle, perfectly paced and lasciviously exciting its in execution. The dialogue was not just snappy, but both humorous and, in places, razor sharp too from both characters and the pendulum swing of power (offence and defence) throughout was both astute and consequently noticeably impressive too.
Visually, Melissa, the starlet of the show, is simply gorgeous in every aspect and a breath taking joy to look at. Her renders are crafted, as we have come to expect from RoyalCandy, with his signature loving attention to detail (earrings, choker, makeup etc) and everything absolutely impeccable and to my mind anyway, at all times incredibly erotic, meaning tastefully sexy. That first fully topless image of her in lingerie leaning back against the wardrobe mirror is breathtaking and so. so erotic.
I loved every second of this and although I realise this will sound (as the whole review probably does) gushingly obsequious, I am, regardless, completely sincere when I say I feel truly privileged to have experienced such immaculate and creative talent at work in this particular field (adult visual novels).
Anyway, enough...This tale, in my experience, is definitely worth 5 stars and more if only more were available to me to give.
PS/ Though I honestly can't afford to regularly sub this creator through Patreon I have bought the remaining two "Dirty Texts" titles on Steam. So albeit only peanuts, I have at least put a little money where my considerably larger mouth is, in support of RoyalCandy as best I can. My conscience is as clear as I can manage - hooray!!
I do urge everyone who is honestly able to and has enjoyed this FREE title in the series to do the same and pay a little bit in return for, what I feel sure will be, the immeasurable pleasure of enjoying the two remaining titles.