RPGM - Abandoned - Disorder [v0.3.1] [Gawbo Coppersnatch]

A rare pearl set in a original world, well written, with very good art, an interesting story and good characthers development. RPGM is a overkill as usual but it is not not annoying as in other games where Ren'py would be a better choice. I hope the dev will continue the development of this beautiful game.

Amazing game! One of the best, if not the best game on the site featuring sharing in a mature way. It's clear that the dev has experience in real relationships and understands the psychology behind sharing your partner with others.

It's about exploring your sex life together in a mature and trusting way, enhaving your sex life and just overall having a good time.

This game NAILS IT, while on top of that, creating an amazing build up, pace and scenarios that all make sense.

The addition of making it fantasy characters within a real world setting is also a very cool twist on things.

If this game was to be completed and come out on steam I would buy it right away.

A very interesting story, vastly different to what I'm used to on this site. The game has a fantasy twist on modern day life, where a couple who supports each other through thick and thin go through an evolution in their sexual relation and overcome financial burdens that almost all of us know about. Unlike other games where there's usually some major corruption jump, and where usually one spouse is the loser, this one shows a more wholesome relationship between the two.

Artwork is nice, and yes, it's basically a kinetic novel. Pretty good overall with lots of potential.

I really like this game.

The artwork is good, there's music that's nice and relaxing and the story is not too rushed. It worried me at the start but it actually builds character development over time, which is very important to me in any adult game.

Also, usually I hate NTR style games but this feels a lot different. It's about two young adults exploring different things and having a good time together, and overall it has a good vibe to it even though some of themes usually give the opposite of that in other games.

I'd give it a solid 10/10, and I really hope that it continues to be developed over time.

Great artstyle, great writing, the RPGM engine usage is non existent but dev said that he is learning renpy so it's all good.
What I really like about the art is that it feels natural, flowing, the game isn't just an art collection with words linking pictures for you to fap, it develops in a cohesive manner, as it should.

I had to give 4 stars

Even though writing story the world build and rpg elements seems like 5 stars, this is a porn game after all and all the adult scenes are just one picture, this is a big blow for me just a tiny example i hope developer adds more variety to adult scenes

overall one of the best rpg games for me so far

Disorder is a time-management? VN set in RPGM following a married human and elf and their explorations into filming and sharing.

It's kinda strange to describe it as time-management, but technically the story is scaffolded on a time system, with work in the morning and activities in the afternoon. The game is only a half-step from a true VN and the only gameplay is walking between the scenes.

I guess it's fine, but I do wonder if the game wouldn't have been better off in Renpy. It's generally inoffensive though, as much as I hated the three or so days in which the MC went to work, went home, and went to sleep. It's seconds at most, wasted though they may be.

Regardless though, the story is pretty great. There's an excellent (though shockingly dark) backstory between the two MCs and there's a strong, wholesome relationship that's well portrayed. I'm digging the progressive corruption spiral that Lilith has slowly been drifting down and I'm looking forward to how much further it goes.

I hope Maverick gets a little more focus than as a wholesome sideshow to Lilith's sluttery though. I appreciate the constant reassurances between the two, but a little agency for Maverick to go with Lilith's would be appreciated.

Also, totally didn't anticipate world building and hints of a deeper plot beneath everything else. I'm looking forward to more.

The art and sex scenes are just stellar. I'm a big fan of wholesome swinging, voyeurism, exhibitionism and happy, horny girls. This game just about checks all my boxes with a bonus point for ELF. If you like the art in the screenshots, you can be sure there's more set against a wholesome backstory.

Overall, I'm a big fan of Disorder. It's pretty unanticipated honestly, as RPGM is an obnoxious system to interact with. Fortunately there's no grinding or obnoxious scene finding to be had here, just a wholesome romance, a slutty elf girl, and an hour or so of a great story so far.

Disorder (v0.3.1) by @Gawbo Coppersnatch is a pretty nice game with a well-written, intriguing plot and characters. And the exceptional art is really nice to look at that does a good job of carrying the story along. I love the fact the MCs -- Mav and Lily -- really care for and stick up for one another. They're fleshed out with their own quirks and interests, and they've already overcame a lot by the start of the game (which hits a bit close to home), but I suppose that's why it's so gripping... Thankfully the game has a nice balance of light, funny, and happier moments to go along with some truly dark, low points for the characters involved and how they interact with the rest of the rich cast. Plus, the dev does an excellent job of employing interesting narrative devices such as foreshadowing woven into his story (as evidenced in that first preview image, heh). But man, talk about blueballing a certain orc and minotaur as of v0.3.1, lol. xD

I love that the main couple have a history -- both of good times and heartbreaking ones -- and that they're dedicated to one another. They've already experimented around and have done some kinky things including some light bondage and MFF threesomes. They've toyed with the idea of exploring and pushing their boundaries more in the past, but the things that happen in the story become a real catalyst for them to go even further. And ngl, I'm all for positive sharing (which isn't present in the game as of yet) so I can't wait to see where this game will go in the future especially after seeing this line from the :

I believe v0.4/v0.5 will finally be the updates that we've all been waiting for in terms of the juicy build up that I've been creating up until this point.

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I'm very appreciative that the male MC isn't a pathetic, wimpy bystander letting others walk all over him. Mav is an upright, outstanding guy that will defend his woman (or will even dominate her when she playfully pushes things too far). See https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/03/2511332_F95_Back_-_Disorder_-_Mav_the_Prince_of_Hel.jpg. Likewise, I like the fact that Lily isn't just a braindead bimbo that goes cheating behind her lover's back either at the first opportunity. Their shared journey into debauchery should be an interesting one for all us players to watch!

Best of luck to the dev and for the success of this project called Disorder! Cheers!

This game is perfect, just this Word can describe it. The pace is the best possible, lily isn't some crazy whore, she's a normal woman who loves u and has real problems, when u progress through the game something blooms in your heart and the experience gets even more exciting. Congratulations gawbocoppersnatch, this game is something omfg

One of the best adult games on the market, hands down. Well-written dialogues, intriguing characters, original plot, exceptional art. I hope the author will get recognition and receive more financial support to continue this project.

Reviewing v0.3.1

Disorder is a kinetic VN developed in RPG Maker with a focus on the main character, Maverick, sharing his cute elven girlfriend with other men/elves/minotaurs/orcs/etc. If that thought revolts you, this isn't the game for you.

If you're still reading, Disorder gracefully explores the themes of sharing and swinging in a gentle manner that should titillate anyone with a cursory interest in the genre. While the game's opening seemed to warn me that the author wasn't scared to explore some dark themes in this story, the actual game thankfully remained at the lighthearted level that better suits games that revolve around love, trust and sex.

As of v0.3.1, (barring the intro) there are no sexual scenes between Maverick's elven gf and others, though both of them are certainly warming up to the idea. There's enough here for about 1.5-2 hours of gameplay, provided you actually read the (well-written) dialogue.

5*, looking forward to future updates

What a pleasant discovery . This Game has what all porn game should have: Good Plot, deep Characters, Great Art and Beautiful women.
Plus, what I loved about this game is that, although this is a Rpgm, there aren't useless, boring, annoying battles or a frustrating immense map with millions of places distant kilometers from each other that kills every fapping desire.
Great idea, good realization, good luck to the dev.

I don't usually review games, but there is something about this game that made me break the silence. I plan on updating this review as versions/content come out as an experiment to see how my feelings change overtime.

version 0.3

Without going too much into story details, This review is from the prospective that this is going to be somewhat linear VN experience as stated by the dev, they have a story in mind to tell one which the intro makes very clear where its headed.

As for the concerns about It being made in RPGMaker, I don't see it as much of an issue since the map size is pretty contained and with v0.3 moving to multi prospective style of play for certain scenes it could lead to some interesting interactions down the line.

I rate this pretty highly since it seems to be maintaining the right kind of balance showing a relatively health relationship between a the protag couple though it still early days; the flash forward seems to give some hope of maintaining that dynamic.

As for the Art there seems to be 3 slightly different art styles in play. The "busts" or avatars are detailed and clean ;major sex scenes during dialog seems to follows a similar western, clean style. The last are the "comic" sections during some story beats to break up longer dialog section, these seem to be more anime inspired. The change is style is by no means jarring though that might be up to taste to a degree.

It would be interesting to see where the story goes in the future since v0.3 seems to be introducing more of the world backgrounds, I am particularly interested in the tavern and possible supernatural/magical hints that might exist between.

Also the story does lean more towards swinging/sharing in the 'hot wife' category, I wonder if there will be any sextual interactions between Mav and other characters beyond involving Lily.

I think the Author is doing a good job based on these early versions. I shall update the view as things progress.

I don't usually review games, but this one is great when evaluated on pretty much any level. It's currently fairly VN-y (not a whole lot of choice, some cruft going day by day), but I see the framework of how it could be expanded out to add a bit more player agency, and what's there right now is well written, well illustrated, and well scored.

great writing and great art which is a rare combination
it seems like swinging/polymorphous relationships will be a main topic in this game so that's a plus if you're into that
it's early in the development but i am eagerly looking forward to upcoming updates

In short
a very well written netorase (different from netorare in that the MC is a willing partner) RPG Maker game that, despite its fantasy elements, is somehow one of the most nuanced and realistic depictions of sharing I've seen in an adult game. If you are into seeing a couple slowly and believably become more sexually adventurous and experimental, this is a must follow. Even if that isn't your thing, the sex scenes are hot and the renders are very well drawn. Extremely promising game.

More in depth

Story
You play as a human MC dating a gorgeous, stacked elf named Lilith. The game is set in a universe where fantasy races such as orcs, minotaurs, goblins, and demons live with humans in a modern day urban environment. There are some magical elements in the plot, however, the vast majority of social interactions are believable, familiar, and help fully immerse you in the world of these characters. You live in a small apartment with your girlfriend and two roommates/coworkers, who mostly sit around and play Elden Ring (relatable). You live paycheck to paycheck, and an unfortunate series of events leave you strapped for cash. This is where the main hook for the story comes in, as you both agree to open the universe's equivalent of an Onlyfans account to make up for lost income and support a family member in need.

Now, this is also the point where a lot of people's tastes may diverge. This is not a cheating/humiliation game. The way this development is written emphasizes it as an empowering choice between both partners. Nothing the girlfriend does is without the MC's consent, and it is always emphasized that the two love each other. A lot of people may be shocked by the intro to this game, which certainly goes from 0 to 100. The girlfriend is stuffed in every hole, getting gangbanged as the MC and her talk dirty. This is certainly a far cry from where the GF begins, but it acts a filter, in a way. That sex scene is ultimately where this couple's sexual adventure will lead to, and if you can't stomach it, the game probably isn't for you (and that's okay!).

Even with something as depraved as the MC's GF getting filled like a thanksgiving turkey, she emphasizes that the MC is her partner and this is for both of their enjoyment. I know that sounds obscene to a lot of people, but for those with this kink or experience in this kind of relationship, it's a realistic and welcome departure from the typical games of this nature, which usually completely ignores the male partner's agency. That's what makes this game half-corruption, in a way. Both the MC and his partner slowly become more open to sexual experimentation, on their own terms, but no one is technically betrayed.

Art
Characters models look great, and the sex scene renders look fantastic. There is typically only 2 frames per scene, one of the sex act and one post ejaculation. One thing I would have on my wishlist for this game is a little more variety in these scenes. Not necessarily needing an entirely new render, but just a change in the face of Lilith as the sex act progresses would add a lot to my enjoyment. Other than the intro gangbang and a small tease early in the game, most of the scenes as of 0.2 are between the MC and Lilith, but your two roommates are very clearly attracted to her and could be involved in the future. Surprisingly, this is done in a well written way. If you're used to this kind of game you won't be offended by them, they don't act like evil assholes the way a lot of characters in NTR games do.

There are also some comic-book style drawings for certain story developments. These are welcome as a change of pace and help liven up the story, however, when they delve into sexual content there is a little bit of a dissonance since you're so used to seeing Lilith look a certain way during sex scenes. Still drawn well and hot, but personally I'm more into the sex renders made so far.

Gameplay
This is your typical RPG Maker game where you control the MC, walk around a map, enter buildings, and interact with objects and people to drive the story forward. You need to build Brownie Points (BP) with your girlfriend by doing chores and going on dates in order to convince her to progress through the game and her comfort with lewdness. Thankfully, the creator is pretty straightforward with what you need to do and where you need to go to progress, as my biggest hang-up with RPG Maker games is frequently getting lost or not knowing where to go. You wake up, go to work, do some chores, and possibly interact with someone. The grind can get a little monotonous, but I suppose in a way it emphasizes why you need to open the Onlyfans, since you're struggling to make due. There are game over instances if you don't make enough money, which I personally haven't encountered, but can be reached... so save often.

There is a jester in the top right corner of the map that gives you an item unlocking the gallery. This is pretty easily missed since there isn't really a reason to go to this area. In the future, I hope the map is kept relatively small and important items/characters that should be interacted with for content are highlighted. I would prefer not to play with a guide open in order to not miss content like I do with other RPG Maker games.

Thanks for reading this wall of text! Play the game and support the creator! He's a cool dude and loves hearing from the fans.

https://www.patreon.com/gawbocoppersnatch

Incredible art with a cool mixture of fantasy and a modern setting. All of the characters are basically fantasy races, e.g. orcs, elves, demons, etc, but the rest of the setting is basically a normal modern city. This is the first release so obviously there isn't a ton of content yet, but what content is included is top notch. Highly recommend trying it out and I can't wait for the next release.

Super promising v1! Character designs are great. Story is tantalizing albeit cliche. It manages to keep it exciting. Reminded me of the first few releases of The Adventurous Couple. Looking forward to the next update.

This is my favourite sort of game - involving swinging and exhibitionism without a hint of the usual blackmail or corruption overtones!

The game is still just a prologue of sorts - but it already has three sex scenes.
The game is not too grindy (though its far too early to say, really), the artwork is pretty good, the English used has no real errors - though there is the problem of text often dropping off the screen.

If you are into NTRS you will like this. HOWEVER, it has barely any content right now. Come back in months/years. But if the creator keeps it up, it will be amazing. It has a great intro that is about a couple who want to spice up their sex life by having the gf expose more skin around the apartment to their male roommates. Cant wait to see what happens next.