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Ahahhahahha ❌Probably because :
- I have a background in corporate jobs hahahah
- I ran out of ways to convey my gratitude 0__0;;;
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Ahahhahahha ❌Probably because :
- I have a background in corporate jobs hahahah
- I ran out of ways to convey my gratitude 0__0;;;
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Hey <- non standard emoticon ...Hey dev I'm curious how many people working with this project?
If it's not personal then please gimme an answer, and dw if you can't it's totally understandable.
Also my friendly advice those gave you and will going give you 5 start or 4 star rating then please like their reviews I'm their will appreciate it!
Hahahaha--*ahem*
Dude you literally use this emoji too much.....Here's the weekly progress post from my patreon
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TLDR :
The post is public, but i'll put the included sketches here anyway
- unfortunately, not much done on the writing part (only +316 word for yesterday). I don't really want to be thought as sympathy farming or anything, so I'll leave out the reason in patreon , and beside, its not that interesting anyway
- The renders that are acceptable and doesn't need more adjustments are still at 63 (minus 1), + several rough poses and camera angles (i think there's about 7 main poses done that i still need to adjust the background and lighting. these usually grow by a factor of about 1.5 because these main poses usually gets expanded with minor pose change to punctuate the dialogue)
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Thanks!
Dude you literally use this emoji too much.....
T HANKS....
ahhahaahah its because its very short to type and my hand doesn't need to reach for my mouse
but as a special service, i'll use another one
I "finished" the current content and this is one of the most impressive work i ever seen here. Wonderful aesthetic, characters, lore building, story and mechanics. Good job.
Wdym by m(_ _)m?Thanks for still giving it a very high score despite the inconvenience m(_ _)m
m(_ _)m is an emoticon representing a person bowing in apology; a dogeza.Wdym by m(_ _)m?
No. There is talent right there. I know because I would not be able to do much of that with work alone at all. This is really well made and thought out. Are you writing this alone or is there someone helping you with all the ideas in here?Unfortunately, I don’t have any formal training in art, and neither the real talent for it. I think I have improved a lot since my first drafts, but hard work will never be able to cover for talent
Yup, yup, and yup!Oof. That was one hell of a first update (and for a first VN no less).
First and foremost: That intro was absolute fire. Pure cinema. The effects and how the scene slowly develops and escalates is an excellent buildup for suspense.
The style of the 'hub' is quite interesting. We will see how intuitive it will be when there is much more content though.
Still a few seldom typos (and I think I saw the font color mismatch once, will have to go back and check that out again) but overall quite well written and constructed.
It is quite easy to immerse yourself in the world with how much the 'divine beings' try to distance themselves from any semblance of humanity. The idea with the extra lines of writing for the dialogue is perfect for that. Really liked that.
If I had to criticize anything, I think a bit more soundscape could help overall, not just with the intro. Everything else was so meticulously worked on that it really surprised me how little sound there was. This for once can of course help suspense in the 'horror' aspect, but I think some effects would still do the immersion good. A good example would be the neck snapping right in the intro, just something I personally thought would fit.
No. There is talent right there. I know because I would not be able to do much of that with work alone at all. This is really well made and thought out. Are you writing this alone or is there someone helping you with all the ideas in here?
You know a first update is good when you can already theorycraft around it.
The way we can't be entirely sure if we are a divine being tainted by human essence or a human corrupted by the divines is interesting and to me a fresh take on cosmic (or 'lovecraftian') horror, even if it already sways more heavily in one direction for the reader. But it might still be very interesting to see how the characters' development will go along and how this will affect them on that journey.
TLDR: Great first release. Really excited to see more of this. Keep up the great work
OOF!! Wow... I'm ...speechless to be honest to get such a wonderful response.Oof. That was one hell of a first update (and for a first VN no less).
First and foremost: That intro was absolute fire. Pure cinema. The effects and how the scene slowly develops and escalates is an excellent buildup for suspense.
The style of the 'hub' is quite interesting. We will see how intuitive it will be when there is much more content though.
Still a few seldom typos (and I think I saw the font color mismatch once, will have to go back and check that out again) but overall quite well written and constructed.
It is quite easy to immerse yourself in the world with how much the 'divine beings' try to distance themselves from any semblance of humanity. The idea with the extra lines of writing for the dialogue is perfect for that. Really liked that.
If I had to criticize anything, I think a bit more soundscape could help overall, not just with the intro. Everything else was so meticulously worked on that it really surprised me how little sound there was. This for once can of course help suspense in the 'horror' aspect, but I think some effects would still do the immersion good. A good example would be the neck snapping right in the intro, just something I personally thought would fit.
No. There is talent right there. I know because I would not be able to do much of that with work alone at all. This is really well made and thought out. Are you writing this alone or is there someone helping you with all the ideas in here?
You know a first update is good when you can already theorycraft around it.
The way we can't be entirely sure if we are a divine being tainted by human essence or a human corrupted by the divines is interesting and to me a fresh take on cosmic (or 'lovecraftian') horror, even if it already sways more heavily in one direction for the reader. But it might still be very interesting to see how the characters' development will go along and how this will affect them on that journey.
TLDR: Great first release. Really excited to see more of this. Keep up the great work
Hmm, thank you very much, but I think my art score on my old report cards would beg to differ ahahha But, I do admit, I have an very active imagination and the curse of being overly perfectionist. My knowledge in art is limited to "put the objects on those thirds line", "dutch angle makes people feel uneasy" . Personally, I think, more than talent, its that curse that give Divinity some edge.No. There is talent right there. I know because I would not be able to do much of that with work alone at all. This is really well made and thought out. Are you writing this alone or is there someone helping you with all the ideas in here?
I'm really glad you enjoyed that part 0_0 it is something that i tried to emphasize (with difficulties), although sometime i think i put in too much hahaha thinking about how to solve the question of "those divine beings aren't human! they won't nod to say they agree...make them do something else!" is something that is both fun, but also nerve wracking in making sure they are all consistent when i polish them hahahaIt is quite easy to immerse yourself in the world with how much the 'divine beings' try to distance themselves from any semblance of humanity. The idea with the extra lines of writing for the dialogue is perfect for that. Really liked that.
I rarely make early reviews. Especially with some experimental things in it. The first update under at least a little pressure is always a good indicator on where the dev takes it and how they roll. Not meant as a slight against the VN itself. It's just how I prefer to do things. Rest assured I certainly will write a review for this. Likely with the next update. I like to see some more development to make my judgement. Seen many changes especially in first works and I like to include such things.Yup, yup, and yup!
You're absolutely right my friend!
What not write this as a review?
No probI rarely make early reviews. Especially with some experimental things in it. The first update under at least a little pressure is always a good indicator on where the dev takes it and how they roll. Not meant as a slight against the VN itself. It's just how I prefer to do things. Rest assured I certainly will write a review for this. Likely with the next update. I like to see some more development to make my judgement. Seen many changes especially in first works and I like to include such things.
Cheers =)