I checked this game because i saw not many reviews about the writing of the game, as the visuals didn't stun me i wanted to know if it was worth playing.
First of all, i have only "played" this visual novel for less than 40 minutes and here's why.
The Story opens up with you arriving at a wall with an entrance, you talk through a blue barrier with Zoe, who's not happy you're send here to become her magic apprentice. After opening the gate, that means a vagina is depicted in the blue barrier, you enter with the connotation "*smile* This portal reminds me of something". Shortly after introducing to Zoe and handing her your letter of recommendation she tells you to pay, since you have no money you're being forced into kissing her asscheek, licking it and afterwards she grinds her behind on your Face.
Seconds later you fight with her, which ends with her sitting on top of you and then sending you to get your food and bed ready. Scene end.
At the Inn you meet the moonelf, after offering you a meal you request a beer (because everyone loves beer right?). She tells you to either pay up or drink her piss to get it.
This is already where i ended the game the first time, the scenes are lacking any kind of erotic buildup and when they had me Zoe sits on top of you after your lost fight, it just ends. The Story feels jumpy and random with a weird sense of humor i don't get.
i checked couple of other scenes from the linked save game but it didn't feel like much changed throughout the progression of the game.
To summarize, if you're fine with a game that forces you to submit to girls you just met and them awkwardly lacking any sense of shame then this might be a game for you. If you like an erotic buildup and dynamics / progression in relationships you're wrong.
Disclaimer: as mentioned at the top, i only played this very shortly, maybe im doing the game injustice but it was enough for me to be offput by it.
First of all, i have only "played" this visual novel for less than 40 minutes and here's why.
The Story opens up with you arriving at a wall with an entrance, you talk through a blue barrier with Zoe, who's not happy you're send here to become her magic apprentice. After opening the gate, that means a vagina is depicted in the blue barrier, you enter with the connotation "*smile* This portal reminds me of something". Shortly after introducing to Zoe and handing her your letter of recommendation she tells you to pay, since you have no money you're being forced into kissing her asscheek, licking it and afterwards she grinds her behind on your Face.
Seconds later you fight with her, which ends with her sitting on top of you and then sending you to get your food and bed ready. Scene end.
At the Inn you meet the moonelf, after offering you a meal you request a beer (because everyone loves beer right?). She tells you to either pay up or drink her piss to get it.
This is already where i ended the game the first time, the scenes are lacking any kind of erotic buildup and when they had me Zoe sits on top of you after your lost fight, it just ends. The Story feels jumpy and random with a weird sense of humor i don't get.
i checked couple of other scenes from the linked save game but it didn't feel like much changed throughout the progression of the game.
To summarize, if you're fine with a game that forces you to submit to girls you just met and them awkwardly lacking any sense of shame then this might be a game for you. If you like an erotic buildup and dynamics / progression in relationships you're wrong.
Disclaimer: as mentioned at the top, i only played this very shortly, maybe im doing the game injustice but it was enough for me to be offput by it.