VN - Ren'Py - Donna [v2.0.5] [HoneyPhantom]

The game has potential. It can be very cute but there are definitely darker story beats too. It's really just that the machine translation is horrendous, but I think when the dev sees that people enjoy the game, they'll find a better alternative.

At the 2.0.5 moment there isn't a lot of content, around 20-30 minutes, but overall i like what i see. Taking in a dog-girl and choosing to care or abuse like it's a Teaching feeling type of game is nice, Donna is beyond adorable and the style is cute.

So far you only get a tiny bit of "trainer" part at the end of current story content and it doesn't look particularly good, but it's there.

The elephant in the room is an atrocious machine translation (dev says in the game that it was one) that make dialogues at times barely comprehensible. For example the choice of "Reprimand" or "Tranquilize" confused me for a good minute until i realised that "Tranquilize" is actually "Calm her down". Which is, considering she is a dog-girl, a bit of an awkward phrasing.

Overall i hope this game will do well and will wait for it's full release, but there will need to be a better translation.

Renders are mediocre at best.
English is a catastrophe, most likely machine translation. Pronouns are a mess, words are a mess. Mixing of thoughts and speech. Following this one isn't worth the effort in my point of view.