I really wanted to like this game, but it seems like the dev has made questionable choices at every. single. turn.
1. The premise is fairly simple, and could even be fun if it had been executed better in Unity, or just...done simpler in Ren'py. I get it, I get what the dev was going for, but it seems way too ambitious considering that everything is buggy and the poses are wonky. Here are some examples:
- The character's dick does not align with the stepsister's mouth or vagina in any pose. Instead, you just get "close enough" and the sound effects start playing, the pleasure bars start filling up. Why did it have to be like this? Could it have been executed better if the characters were locked into fixed positions when a pose was selected? I would think so, considering you can only initiate poses in specific places anyways.
- Sometimes the poses require you to press space to fill up a pleasure bar, sometimes you have to move your mouse, it's so inconsistent and never clarified.
- Some poses flatten the stepsister's breasts until they're like cardboard pancakes on her chest, etc.
2. The animations aside, even the dialogue is so unbearable. First of all, it's written in such a dry, cringey manner that is really off putting in so many situations. Let me give you an example: "Ha-ha, your nick name will now be 'sweet cum boy' because your cum is sweet. Now go before I change my mind." - MC's stepmom. Not only are there AI voices, even the writing seems like it may very well have been done by AI.
3. The spelling is so off in multiple places, and it just seems like something that could've been easily remedied by getting someone to proofread the script. But honestly considering all the other issues with the game, this is probably one of the milder complaints I have.
4. The AI voices. I'm not going to go into some righteous spiel about how AI is bad, or how you should pay actual voice actors to read lines etc. Even ignoring all of that, the AI voicing in this game is just such a turn-off. The delivery of every line is so dry and monotonous, emotionless that it would have been better off not voiced.
5. The instructions seem to suggest that you'll have to do some sort of "resource management" by keeping an eye on the stepmom's awareness meter to avoid getting caught or whatever, but there was absolutely no need for the mechanic in the game, it may as well not have existed. The stepmom was no real threat, and every stage was pretty much like having sex on a timer. 12 minutes on the clock, go fuck your stepsis as much as you want, then put on your clothes and get ready to hide or talk to your mom, depending on the situation as the timer approaches zero. That's all.
In conclusion:
I really like the simple idea, and the character customization. However, I think this game suffers majorly from an overambitious developer. If the dev had:
- made it in a simpler engine like Ren'py instead of overcomplicating it with Unity
- left it unvoiced instead of using AI voices
- either just made it a sandbox clicker sim, or actually focused more on making a fun gameplay loop where the player would have to alternate between fucking the stepsis and hiding using different strategies
;I think it would've ended up as a better game. But as it is, I'm afraid it's really not something I'd recommend.