Ren'Py Doors [v0.3.3 Part 2] [The Neuron Project]

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Overview:
The plot revolves around a complex group of people, their close-knit circle of friends, and an event that changes their lives dramatically. You play as 'Ethan', one of the tenants living in the same house. 'Doors' has a deep plot, detailed character development, and delves into subjects like betrayal, love, relationships, fantasy, and lots of dark secrets to explore.​

Thread Updated: 2024-04-08
Release Date: 2024-04-01
Developer: The Neuron Project

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Version: 0.3.3 Part 2
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English, German
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[TheNeuronProject]

This is my first ever VN, hope you guys enjoy it just as much I enjoy making it. Feedback is appreciated.

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

Well nice demo,
Story not starting just introducing character, renders good but no growing up in their
Looking forward to nxt update,
Best of luck

 

[TheNeuronProject]

Well nice demo,
Story not starting just introducing character, renders good but no growing up in their
Looking forward to nxt update,
Best of luck

Although there are numerous masterpieces that I thoroughly enjoyed, it was always bothering me that most of the VNs out there don't have propper/satisfying (for me) character development, just a few lines of superficial introduction that tells nothing about the people in the story. Just a little morsel of info about their personality, habits and so on can result in a more enjoyable experience as a whole in my view.

 

[LewdTheLolis]

well structured request, I can see no issues with it. The renders look nice and the game sounds interesting, best of luck with it. I just had a question, what is the Electral Love patch for?

 

[TheNeuronProject]

well structured request, I can see no issues with it. The renders look nice and the game sounds interesting, best of luck with it. I just had a question, what is the Electral Love patch for?

It is a synonym for incest. I once read it somewhere and I thought it would be kinda interesting to see the reactions it would get. :3

 

[LewdTheLolis]

It is a synonym for incest. I once read it somewhere and I thought it would be kinda interesting to see the reactions it would get. :3

you learn something new everyday it seems, even more excited for this game now. Best of luck with the development of it. Also as a heads up you can send a message to the admin/staff and they can give you a 'Game Developer' tag for your profile so that people can tell you're the developer.

 

[TheNeuronProject]

you learn something new everyday it seems, even more excited for this game now. Best of luck with the development of it. Also as a heads up you can send a message to the admin/staff and they can give you a 'Game Developer' tag for your profile so that people can tell you're the developer.

Thank you for the suggestion, I definitely will.

 

[rKnight]

lots of dark secrets to explore.

after playing so many Ren'Py games there is no dark secrets anymore,
"Join MC on his adventures as he creeps around the house, stalking his mother and sisters while they sleep, shower, ...."

note: those chars look nothing like the standard Daz3d models wandering around almost every game.

 

[torkenstiem]

The story sounds interesting enough to keep an eye on this. Also, looking foward to see who gets betrayed and what those "dark secrets" are about.

 

[PoyntFury]

Just looking at the screenshots:

The millennial girl in the first picture looks like she was born in a dark cave and has never left.

The fucking dude in the second one looks like Owen Wilson. WOW

The redhead looks cute until I realize that her mouth is a bit too big for her face an- OH GOD LOOK AT THE FOREHEAD ON THAT MONSTER. What has she got, like, six inches of space between her hairline and her eyebrows?

 

[Deleted member 1268799]

The highlight to me was seeing the Mustang Fastback bike! Man I wanted one of those so badly back in the early 1970's... I never got one though as parents probably thought I would become a hooligan with a cool bike. (This is probably was a childhood precursor that led to my love of motorcycles).

Anyhow who gives a shit about me...

I found the demo to be pretty good, I'm not quite sure where it is going though, as when you had to make blind decisions you have no idea of the ramifications to come. I also found that if you did not name the characters it just left their name blank instead of using the default values. I had to unpack the game and change everybody's name in the console to fix it.

I look forward to the next installment and may have to do a few playthroughs to shape it to my taste going forward.

PS. If that is Gina in the shower, I'm all in on that!

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I'm always cautious when i see family and voyeurism so I'm guessing there will be a obligatory "parents fucking" trope/scene right?
Also is the redhead a midget or "little person"?

 

[yihman1]

This is my first ever VN, hope you guys enjoy it just as much I enjoy making it. Feedback is appreciated.

There is not a whole lot there to judge yet, but I'll give it a shot.

Problem: Characters lack a default name. This part must be fixed.

Characters: The character models are fine. I like redheads and there are a lot in this game, and some are cute.

Drunk Driver: This guy has my greatest sympathies. Honestly, the biggest victim in this story.

Protagonist: Dumb 11-year-old kid that likes to dream, and walk into the street while looking at his phone not looking out for cars.

Dad: Seems like a good guy... so long as you tell him that you liked riding the bike without training wheels and him letting go was fine and you are all happy. If you answer with that you didn't like that... You know him asking the opinion of a child, and answer honestly this guy turns into such a shitty little bitch walking away all sour faced... Then protagonist is all like "how can I be so stupid I'm sorry"... So basically this guy seems like a good parent so long as you tell him what he wants to hear.

Big Sister: She is cute, barely know shit about her.

Little Bro & Sis

Twins? Highlander Syndrome? They got a syndrome that don't let them age, or just the borther does? Sister seems to get upset no matter what you say and is supposed ot be a genius.

Mom: You don't even interact with her. Apparently you are waking up and don't see dream of her, and she is like "OH MY GOD!" when your eyes open. Screaming in the face of the person who just got out of a coma...

Problem: If it's ever made possible to bone the younger redhead girls the game will not be allowed on this site. Apparently Loli is ONLY legal if in 2d not 3d here for some reason. So you can gangbang a bunch of 2nd graders if it's 2d, but you might get in trouble for 10th graders in 3d. Strange double standard. As a solution to this problem for you... Maybe make it so when you got hit by that car it put you in a coma for like 10 years... You would wake up at age 21. Your big sis, and little sis would be acceptable age ranges. Then you can have an excuse for acting like an immature horny preteen.

Exposition: You ramble on a lot about doors... With how much you talk about doors in this there better be some magical doors in this. By answering 2 at the one dream door you meat some hot centaur chick from some fantasy land. It appears almost everything in this version is a part of a dream state.

Problem: Sometimes it appears you follow character perspectives that are not the protagonist. For instance, you followed the perspective of the drunk driver that ran over the stupid 11 year old protagonist walking into the street while looking at his phone. You like follow his whole day... Guy goes into work. He gets fired... His co workers are giving high fives like "fuck that guy, glad he is gone..." So... He is like hell, I'll go have a drink to drown my sorrows.... Goes home from work early... Finds his life long best friend fucking his wife.... in the ass. Is not okay with this... Walks out the door gets back in his car... and if it was ever okay for a man to have a drink now is the time, so the guy goes to have a few beers instead of jumping off a bridge.... So he gets back in his car and then he is all eyes full of tears having the worst day ever and it gets even worse when some stupid child (protagonist) walks out into the middle of the street not at a cross walk, without looking anywhere but at his phone... Then BAM kid gets slammed into by the car driven by a drunk... a drunk that managed to stay in his lines the entire time kinda impressive. Also the car has New York plates so this takes place in New York...

That whole guys day should be removed. It's unnecisary and confusing information. Just show the kid walking into the street getting hit by a car. The driver did NOT need to be drunk, and this could literally happen to any driver, even a good sober driver. The kid is 100% at fault... but knowing how the law is this guy is now in prison getting raped in the ass by Big Black Bubba as a "Child killer"... The absolute worst thing you can do to ruin a story is to follow the perspective of someone other than the protagonist.This guy has it far worse than the protagonist. He lost his wife, job, freedom, best friend, and surely a lot of his money and resources and freedom, and it's not like he is shown doing anything bad or sinister so we can be like, "fuck that guy he deserved it." Protagonist is just having some dreams, gonna wake up all good after his coma. Personally I'm more concerned about the so called drunk driver.

Problem: Sometimes you use too many words, or too big of words like you busted out a thesaurus to get your point across. For instance, one line is:


"My first life ended whit the help of a mind-boggling balance between stupidity and bad luck."
"The adversity came in the guise of a drunk driver who drank himself to oblivion because he had a very, very bad day."

Instead of all that wording, it could have instead been written as something like:

"My life was permanently altered after a car accident that put me into a coma."

Not sure about this game yet. It could be very good, or shit. Time will tell.

 

[MajorDespair]

Good start ..hope to see more soon...

 

[Amadeus.]

 

[perheiro]

Looks interesting. I think it is at least worth a look and a click. The driver of that BMW cannot possibly see that kid walking out in front of him. Not with that poster of Granny Clampet pasted to his windshield. The pic looks like the kid is going to go for a spin.

 

[ronhowardeen]

Wouldn't electral love's etymology be based on electra complex, meaning a daughter sleeping with her father?

 

[jpostel]

It is a synonym for incest. I once read it somewhere and I thought it would be kinda interesting to see the reactions it would get. :3

Wouldn't electral love's etymology be based on electra complex, meaning a daughter sleeping with her father?

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[leeyaoyao]

what is answer?