TL;DR The game has a cool concept, two female protagonists, and you get to see things from their perspectives. The idea can be taken far by having each one enjoy a different set of kinks, and bond over their lust. However poor spelling/grammar, a paywall and a messy story lead to something that has potential but hasn't quite lived up to it.
I'm going to be blunt, paywalls are for later in your game creation career. You need to build an audience and reputation before adding in paywalls for content. I would strongly recommend taking down the paywall until either 0.5 or the next game. Allow yourself to become someone people don't mind paying for, your currently untested.
The render are solid, nothing groundbreaking but a good use of models with enough variation to make it worth playing through. Lots of scenes already, so that is a massive plus, as you really get a sense for the direction of the action. That being said, The scenes seem to be a bit much/ missing connecting scenes (needs a bit of refinement)
The spelling and grammar need to be tightened up, some things like uperCUT being one of the more glaring ones, as there little text around it making it feel more obvious.
This is however a good start, and with some fine tuning, and a focus on building a supportive audience this could be a very good addition to the lesbian category!
