V.Ep.1
i am sitting myself right on the fence with this one.
we have a scene where the MC is at a crime scene and a rookie officer is holding him at gun point. the writer makes the point of intelligence on the MC's part and nervousness of a rookie officer riding solo.
so why then does the MC go completely against how he is written to that point by giving the dumbest responses to an armed officer and in another weird twist why does the rookie NOT shoot him? i actually shouted at the screen, such was my bewilderment at the inconsistent characterisation.
then it was all back to previous character.
following this was an option to report the rookie or not. i chose to not but it happened anyway like i had next day, so that was another nice fuck you.
visually this is good. it will be enough for some, awesome sauce to the fivers who think a slideshow or comic are also Visual Novels, and fall short for those wanting the full animated experience. for me, i prefer a VN or a vN.
this delivers a decent enough opening to a developing plot that shows promise. unless another u-turn happens, i see no reason not to like this.
with a few tweaks this could be a decent read, which despite this sites ratings for such things, is what a visual novel is all about. decent visuals makes a fap game. decent writing makes a franchise a la fate/stay
i strongly sense i may adjust my rating up a star once we get really underway, but for now i am middling it. But not for long as this fence is the spiked type
i am sitting myself right on the fence with this one.
we have a scene where the MC is at a crime scene and a rookie officer is holding him at gun point. the writer makes the point of intelligence on the MC's part and nervousness of a rookie officer riding solo.
so why then does the MC go completely against how he is written to that point by giving the dumbest responses to an armed officer and in another weird twist why does the rookie NOT shoot him? i actually shouted at the screen, such was my bewilderment at the inconsistent characterisation.
then it was all back to previous character.
following this was an option to report the rookie or not. i chose to not but it happened anyway like i had next day, so that was another nice fuck you.
visually this is good. it will be enough for some, awesome sauce to the fivers who think a slideshow or comic are also Visual Novels, and fall short for those wanting the full animated experience. for me, i prefer a VN or a vN.
this delivers a decent enough opening to a developing plot that shows promise. unless another u-turn happens, i see no reason not to like this.
with a few tweaks this could be a decent read, which despite this sites ratings for such things, is what a visual novel is all about. decent visuals makes a fap game. decent writing makes a franchise a la fate/stay
i strongly sense i may adjust my rating up a star once we get really underway, but for now i am middling it. But not for long as this fence is the spiked type