Others - Onhold - E-Thots: A NTR Game Set in a 100% interactive PC Interface [Ch.2 v2.6] [Archipote]

at first i thot its anouther dry ntr phone like game but after a try it turned out to be one of the best written erotic games i have tried it have main hero who is an absolute asshole and aa couple of love interests

Amazing game, and the storytelling gets better as you go along. The story could be a bit better, as it is a bit hard to follow with regards to some tales that are sprinkled in. The girl that gets NTRed is also not my favourite, and she is a complete waste of space imo. But i guess that is what the writer wanted us to percieve it as, and she seriously pissed me off haha.

Didn't really plan to write a review for this but since I played most of it and was very disappointed I might aswell so that people know what they're getting into. As usual a rating for every category and a global rating at the end.

Art/Graphics: 5/5

This is probably the reason why some of you might be considering playing this game, and indeed it has really high quality renders, I think it's among the best I've seen in any game on this site, really solid stuff. Just see for yourself in the teaser images.

Music/Sounds: 0/5

No music or sounds at all except generic message notification sounds. Not that big of a deal though, that's far from being the biggest problem in this game.

Gameplay/UI: 2/5

The UI is just a Discord knockoff essentially, a little bit more original that other VNs out there I guess but it doesn't really add much. You have some mini-games that allow you to unlock a couple extra renders for each character but it's a bit tedious, a lot of clicking without any real gameplay so I just started skipping those at some point and it's not relevant to the main story anyway.

Story/Writing: 1/5

I can't put 0 stars in good faith because it doesn't have any major grammar issues and it's not AI generated but boy is this bad. So here are the main issues and if none of those bother you then I guess maybe you should play this game, otherwise stay away. Here we go:

- The MC is always aware of everything that his girlfriend does because he's hacking her account to read her messages. This is a very important aspect because virtually all NTR games involve a mystery aspect to it, and here it's just nonexistent. And the MC is not encouraging it so it's not NTS or cuck either. It's in this weird place where the MC doesn't like her cheating, is fully aware of everything, bitching about it to other people constantly and yet also does not confront his girlfriend about it. No clue who would enjoy reading that but at least you're warned.

- like many people who reviewed before me mentioned already, the MC is an absolute troglodyte, unlikable and insulting the other characters for no reason. I'm really not sure what the idea is here, maybe this is supposed to be a parody of how young people talk? Just being obnoxious for no reason? And it's not funny either btw, there are some games out there that are mostly comedy and pull it off quite well but this is really not it.

- 0 choices. Like actually 0, not even "cosmetic" choices where you at least get to choose you dialogue lines even though it leads to the same outcome. No option to skip certain scenes, or reply to questions, nothing at all. You're really just reading a wall of text the entire time, which could be bearable I guess if the writing was good but as mentioned above it's clearly not.

Conclusion: 2/5

Honestly such a waste of time, it's a shame because the characters really look gorgeous but the "edgelord teenager simulator" aspect of it really becomes unbearable at some point. Maybe just look at the renders by skipping through everything if you decide to play, but honestly i'd advise to just stay away.

Preface I hate NTR with a passion. Usually you are forced into the role of some limp-dicked cuck, and nothing ever happens beyond that bum ass genre.

In this game the main character is not a complete loser and actually has the balls to throw the cheater into a dump.

Characters are exaggerated but still fun and with personality and somewhat consistent actions. The models are insanely well done, 10/10.

Gameplay is okay, better than most VNs that try to be a game but at their core are VNs lol. However, the pace of gameplay and story do not match currently, having you just skip the gameplay, read a message repeat.

Wow, It's been a really long time since I played a game that well written. I've laughed, been saddened, excited by the writting. Almost played all of the game in a single swoop just because I wanted to know what would happens next. I must say good Archipote, your writing style for this game is particulary on point. Thanks a lot for this gem.

There are so many missed opportunities in this game. I really enjoyed it, but damn, it blue balls the fuck out of us. The scene on the subway during the convention could have been hot. It wasn't hiding at all what she was doing, but we get a PoV where you can't see a fucking thing. Blue balls. Lucas joins her at the convention, one screen of her holding his dick, then they "close the door." Blue balls. There are a bunch of renders of Morgane sucking someone's dick, but there's only one scene that involves a cumshot, and it's the premature ejaculator gloyhole scene. Double blue balls. The format of the game is interesting, but it necessarily leaves out a lot of interesting action we could be seeing. Blue balls. The concept of not knowing everything and edging is hot for like the prologue and most of Chapter 1, but at some point, as the player, we want some actual fucking pay off.

TL;DR Developer should change the name of the game to "E-Thots: The Blue Balls Masters."

I couldn't really get past how completely unlikable the player character is. Like there's a bastard character and then there's a complete psychopath... Didn't play a ton of it, the CG's looked spectacular but again, yea, next level evil MC...

Never have I encountered a game on here that I want to like so much, yet ended up severely disliking...

First of, if the dev reads this: please don't take this as a personal attack! You're clearly putting in a lot of effort and it's ultimately your game; you should make it however you want to. This is just the opinion of one random person on the Internet.

That being said... Never have I played a game with so many obnoxious characters at once. I've played through all available content, up through the convention, and not once have any of the characters seemed remotely likeable. Maybe that's the point, I don't know, but it severely hampers my enjoyment. Why should I give a shit about anything that's happening, when no one in the story does?

It comes across as what a 50 year old thinks a bunch of 20 year olds talk like nowadays, and it's not flattering. I get that at least some of it is meant as humour, but it's too much. It's nonstop noise, completely masking any vague attempts at characterization. No one is consistent, nobody seems to care, everything is played for laughs to the point of parody, and as such, I find myself unable to get even slightly invested.

It's such a shame too, because the UI is great, the renders are great, and hell, most of the minigames are pretty decent too, even though there are arguably too many of them (and I found the convention a tad overdone. I think we could have done without the card packs, didn't feel like they added anything.)

I hate that I have to write something so negative, because I love the concept. I want to love this game so damn much, but it just won't let me. It's a game all about the characters and their interactions, and unfortunately, those interactions are pretty abysmal.

To end on a positive note, though: Thank you for making this game, dev! Even if it's not for me, I'm still happy it exists. If nothing else, it at least got me so passionate that it made me write my first review.

This has been on my radar for a while and I finally got around to playing- frankly I only have the barest idea of what the hell I'm doing, but this shit is cracking me up. Grade A writing, absolute bastard of an MC and every character earns the title of "God's Favorite Idiot." I'm not that far in so I haven't gotten to much of the sexy stuff, but what I've seen so far has been solid. Legit one of the games I'm playing just as much for the writing as the porn.

EDIT: 2.6 was confirmation for all the fears I've had for the game.
Nothing's been done to address the main issue: the writing is still obnoxious and self-serving and there are still no dialogue options which means zero player agency or role-play capability.

What's different now, however, is that it has become clear that the reason the main character was written in such a vile way was to set up a pandering revenge power fantasy story as a subversion of what's perceived by a vocal minority as 'harmful' NTR genre tropes.

2.6 made it clear the dev is overly involved with the community and its discourse which has shifted his focus, consciously or not, to appeasing the mob rather than making a good game. This alone renders the project completely uninteresting to anyone wanting to experience a sincere story rather than some cynical subversion made for people with contempt for the genre.

On a less important note, the mini-games are still scattershot: ideas that you can clearly see are decent and could've been better developed and implemented into the game are left untended as pointless lightweight distractions.

There's obviously talent on display here and it's a genuine shame for it to be wasted on this thing.


Difficult to rate. On the one hand this is no doubt one of if not the best phone NTR game:
- The abrasive naturalistic writing starts to grow on you after a period of acclimation as the characters really do begin to feel like an existing bunch of vile discord dwellers instead of the usual crowd of lifeless walking stereotypes you get in these games. The balance of CRINGE/IMMERSION should definitely be tweaked though.
- Honey Select models are uncharacteristically attractive here: I'm not an expert but of all the HS games I've played this one has by far the hottest models.

On the other hand, the game lacks basic RP functions:
- Instead of being able to choose your responses to the cast's shenanigans you're forced into the skin of a truly unlikeable, miserable cunt who's written in such a self-indulgent way it's genuinely impossible to imagine yourself as him for even a split-second. This is one of those examples where LESS character development would be a good thing.
- This being an NTR game, you'd expect to at least be able to choose your outlook on Morgane's cheating but you instead get the main character's bizarre contrived response. It truly is puzzling as to what the dev was even going for with this one. Did he want to self-insert with Avar and a response that makes sense such as caring to any extent about his girlfriend cheating on him would make the character too much of a "cuck"? No clue but the damage is done as a lot of the immersion achieved through the way the love interests are written gets undermined by how oddly dehumanized the MC is.

The game is very unique in how it tells the story and the characters behind it aren't your usual run of the mill VN characters that you met a hundred times before. They can be quirky, silly , lovely, blunt and sometimes just weird, but it's actually very entertaining to read since they don't feel like just another set of NPCs. Of course there's also clichees and your usual porn logic (it's a porn game duh), but it feels like a lot of heart behind the writing, which not many games actually achieve.

When i first played it was actually quite skeptical about the UI and narrative form, and was close to dropping it, but it definately won me over after a bit, and I can just encourage people to give this game a shot even if you don't initially like it. It's an amazing one.

The weakness of the game is imo just the climax. There's a lot of setting up, teasing, fleshing out characters, silly little entertaining titbits etc. but once you actually come to the most interesting parts, it's just over too quickly. And I'm frankly not sure why. Both art and dialogue/story telling is amazing, but the actual'scenes' could easily be made quite a bit longer and would make it even much much better than it already is.
But I've seen some improvement in that regard in the last update already, and the game is still quite young and already pretty steamy, so I'm very hyped for more.

I can't bring myself to go as low as one star, but this game came highly recommended and I couldn't find anything to like about it.

Your world view is the desktop screen of a guy's computer. You read discord messages, then do a card game where you pick left or right for several cards, then you end the day and do it again.

I expected the game to pull back from the computer after a few days, but it didn't, and the repetition started wearing me down. There is 3D CG of some scenes, but for non-scenes a lot of AI art is used, for example in the discord user profile pictures.

You have three girls you have to manage right away, so there is a lot of chat to take in every single day, and most of the exposition being done through discord chat quickly ended up feeling more like answering work mail/messages than anything that got me interested.

I'll give it points for an original idea and there clearly being work put into this, but I couldn't find any enjoyment in this game.

A lot of text, but It's excellent and funny to read. Awesome characters and renders, cool gameplay! Hope to see more updates in future, one of the promising projects I'm constantly checking. If you are looking for something you can quickly jerk-off, that's not the right game

very good game I love the way it works and the story is amazing. I highly recommend everyone should give it a chance you wont regret it.please share with friends and lets make this game thrive.

yea, this might be the best NTR and game out there right now. the cg's are clearly top tier but the characters themselves are actually really fleshed out. yea, there's some cringe moments in the texts and sometimes it takes way too long for any sort of sexual interaction to occur, but it's eventually worth it.

One of the more interesting games to play. Different from a lot of others, an emphasis on dialogue and characters. But the dialogue and characters are really well done!

The game is on the more light hearted side when it comes to the dialogue, and how seriously it takes itself. The characters are wild, but interesting. The characters/women are very attractive!

Love the updates that have been made as well, a lot of really interesting scenes and developments.

This game is still early in development, and every update so far has introduced more goodness.

The NTR is high quality, and is so far more of a netorase type than netorare. This could change, but for now that is how it seems to be.

Looking forward to more developments, but so far it has gotten better and better.

I think where this game really nails the premise is the fact that Morgane has zero idea that Avar is aware of her antics, legitimately believing she is getting away with what she's doing. So many NTR games attempt this, but so few actually get it right, or there are zero consequences until the very end. In this game, consequences are unfolding alongside the activity, with Avar and Elaine's deal.

I can confidently say that getting Morgane's 'phone' call actually made something stir in my chest, which no other AVN has managed to pull off. Is it the very familiar interface we're using pulling us in? Is it the characters having actual personalities, or motivations?

One thing for certain, I'm actually looking forward to the potential story branching down the road, to have a say in how Avar will react once Morgane goes all the way (it's a porn game, she's going to eventually).

In short, E-Thots is shaping up to be one of, if not the best NTR game of this style.

Wtf is this game?

Nothing makes any sense. Feel like I'm having a stroke playing it
Normal dialog in this game:
You: "Hey, how are you?"
Girl: "Hi I'm good!"
You" SIKE fuck you, stupid bitch"
Girl: "Aww "
You: "HAHAHA you think I care, dumb whore?"
Girl "Do you wanna eat together ?"
You: "I would rather eat glass than be with your fat ass"
Girl: "You don't love me?"
You: "Nobody loves you, slut HAHAHA"

Maybe you're thinking "oh, the girl has done something wrong!" NOPE. This is how the main character talks to everyone, even people he met 5 minutes ago

This is a NORMAL conversation in this game, and it's 99% dialog. It's this over and over, it makes you feel like you are going crazy because nothing makes any sense

Then there is going to your job, which is a card "game"? You pick 2 different choices, and its the same shit like you are on drugs:

Girl: "Boss! Do you think I worked hard today?!"
Option 1: "You never work hard anyway, dumbass"
Option 2: "No, you have no talent anyway"

What sort of insane person made this game? Why do people like it?

At one time, you can look at your sister's DMs. First thing that happens is they send nudes to each other (what?) and instantly says something like "imagine if you sent this to your brother lol UwU"

Most confusing game ever, like an insane asylum from opening the game

Gets +1 star for graphics I guess

Overall a good update.

The story line continued fine and I am currently happy with the direction things are going. I am also happy about the construction of the gallery. I was on the edge of my seat with each chat box popping up wondering when it would be the end and all the new content being uploaded.

Onto less happy news, the gallery or more specifically the work gallery. Every time I did a job it added it the the gallery so I had a minimum of at least two or three repeated scenes in the gallery, for every single character too. Also it seemed one or two scenes did not get carried into the gallery. Morgan and Lucas car scene and the Morgan and Lucas Party kissing scene was not available even after a couple of re clicks.

I am aware that the reason the work scenes are probably not being further updated right now is because you are waiting for that final push in the story to let them progress onto even more perverse stuff.

The missing Thomas character is actually kind of a bummer to. He seemed like a nice support character even if he was overall a gateway into the rest of this stuff and I wish he had a comeback. I feel like this next update will be the one that pushes into the next level and having Thomas make a surprise comeback with a different attitude would be pretty cool. If she doesn't have sex with Lucas in this next update, I fully support her getting it back on with Thomas as a surprise. I also have a few reasons.

One of my biggest reasons is because of who the other two people are, a well known playboy and a married man who's wife secretly fully supports this. Thomas has neither. Before Damian went alpha and over protective and made Morgan push him away, though she did ask if he was still ignoring her and he ignored that to, I believe it might have went further. Out of the three in total, Thomas was the one who she helped grow as a person and that had a profound impact on his life, having that image shattered of her should be another major turning point for him. While Lucas and Damian had hidden intentions veiled behind false mask, Thomas genuinely wanted her friendship more, he just made it well known he found he attractive and though asked for dates and whatnot, it was to spend actually time and not to just to get into her pants, unlike the other two that are using other means to make her like them, Lucas with offers of well paid jobs and Damian with material items. He did offer though, but only after he learned about it.

That's really all I have to say on the matter. Overall good update, fix repeated gallery scenes from work, and have Thomas make a killer comeback. Though the last one is optional I feel the return of him might surprise some people since he seems written off now. I mean outside being told to humiliate him and enjoying it Morgan did seem like she liked Thomas as well so, maybe it feels stretched, but Thomas fucking her first would be so fucking awesome.

I never post reviews for games, even if I love them. But this game so bad I had to.
I do not think this is a porn game, Just clicking and text. Please add the text based tag to this game. Boring slop, no scenes just endless brain dead dialogue. What is this?? Does not deserve the rating it has, other games which have 3 stars are better than this slop. Wasted my time -_-