VN - Ren'Py - Echoes of Destiny [v0.1.2] [Purrfect-Pixel]

I was not going to review this game as its relatively new but I saw that the dev comments and react onreviews section so I want to gives the dev something to think about for the future updates.

Story. 10/10 For now there is not much in term of story. Its pretty short but intriguing nonetheless. Looking forward on future updates.

Graphic. 9/10 The characters face model isn't perfect but passible. The MC body and face is weird. Either make him looks older or make him thinner and has less vein or something. Right now he's pretty weird looking.

Love Interests. 9/10 I will give them 9 for now. Nothing is special about them. Maybe make them talk less or change some dialogue and it could be better.

MC. 8.5/10 THIS is the biggest turn off for me. At first I feel like he's dense or something. Then later on I feel like he is a retard. He was like constanly mentioned that he has laid before and he has seen girl naked. I don't know why he keeps doing that. Its weird as hell.I know its an AVN but good AVN doesn't need the MC to be a horndog all the time. Just let him think and act like a decent ADULT human being.

Gameplay wise. 10/10+0/2 Just typical gameplay for any VN game no additional points will be given.

Overall 46.5/52. Not a bad start but could be better. Need to has less meaningless dialogue (MC thinking that girl is beautiful and all that narative). You doesn't need 10 full sentences to describe the surroundings and how the girls look like. We can be the judge of that based on the renders itself. Also turn the MC from a horny kid who act like he just got laid into a likable human being.

Story 4/5: simple yet very effective and good
Writing 2/5: way to extensive internal monologuing and narration
Renders 5/5: best aspect of the game
MC 1/5: in the overview he is described as: having a tough exterior, humorous, raw personality and sharp witted. This is not a fitting description. he is stupid, obnoxiously humorous(his humor is very bad imo), judgmental, thoughtless, has a stupid looking face, arrogant, a bit slow, overly horny and has a love for whining at the tiniest of inconveniences.
Girls 2/5: so far there are two girls: one is decently likeable, and the other is extremely dislikeable.
Choices 2/5: it's hard to say how significant the decisions are. they might cause a stat difference, but a lot of the time it seems to multiple ways of achieving the same result, making the choice insignificant.

the final score is based on my overall enjoyment, not the average of the scores above.

i like this game about an MC that gets Isekaied into another fantasy world but keeps his original body and doesn't have any of the usual powers either (that we've seen anyway). after only two updated its added alot of lore already. i enjoyed the story so far and i like the 1(2?) LI's we've met so far.

Pleasantly surprised! I had fun playing so far, the music and SFXs are there, the writing feels pretty natural, and the renders are of good quality.

I gave 5 stars but if I could, I would have given something closer to a 4.5 instead because I feel like the narration can sometimes be too verbose - I speculate that it may be AI enhanced, but I could very well be wrong, as the other writings such as the dialogue flows smoothly.

This game seems to only be recently released, so I hope more people gets to enjoy it!