Story 4/5: simple yet very effective and good
Writing 2/5: way to extensive internal monologuing and narration
Renders 5/5: best aspect of the game
MC 1/5: in the overview he is described as: having a tough exterior, humorous, raw personality and sharp witted. This is not a fitting description. he is stupid, obnoxiously humorous(his humor is very bad imo), judgmental, thoughtless, has a stupid looking face, arrogant, a bit slow, overly horny and has a love for whining at the tiniest of inconveniences.
Girls 2/5: so far there are two girls: one is decently likeable, and the other is extremely dislikeable.
Choices 2/5: it's hard to say how significant the decisions are. they might cause a stat difference, but a lot of the time it seems to multiple ways of achieving the same result, making the choice insignificant.
the final score is based on my overall enjoyment, not the average of the scores above.
Writing 2/5: way to extensive internal monologuing and narration
Renders 5/5: best aspect of the game
MC 1/5: in the overview he is described as: having a tough exterior, humorous, raw personality and sharp witted. This is not a fitting description. he is stupid, obnoxiously humorous(his humor is very bad imo), judgmental, thoughtless, has a stupid looking face, arrogant, a bit slow, overly horny and has a love for whining at the tiniest of inconveniences.
Girls 2/5: so far there are two girls: one is decently likeable, and the other is extremely dislikeable.
Choices 2/5: it's hard to say how significant the decisions are. they might cause a stat difference, but a lot of the time it seems to multiple ways of achieving the same result, making the choice insignificant.
the final score is based on my overall enjoyment, not the average of the scores above.