VN - Ren'Py - Elf's Journey [v0.1] [Danterence]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    yeetermcgee123

    This needs a lot more time in the oven before its ready to be released. Current game play is a couple minutes if you skip grind mechanics, but you dont even know the name of a single character beyond what you name the MC.
    • Why is there no dialogue? There are probably 20 written words (on sheets of paper) in the entire chapter.
    • The puzzles should be implemented later if you really want them in there, the first chapter should be introducing players to the MC, world setting and a couple characters
    • Too many animations, not every scene needs to be animated
    • The models have rough edges



    I would pass on this one unless you like silent movies, as there is literally no story.