VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Endless Summer [v0.23] [MrPinkCookie]

the story looks good but for a porngame need a loot of contet because i so poor in erotic content and the escenes are extrange and i don´t like the quality of animations, the female trainer is one of the most escenes have but she is the more ugly women in the game, i only like the photo sesion with the streamer, the rest escenes have strange anmations, i prefer static images well preformed than that. The animations are ot necessarily better if they have bad performace. I think this is another case where the developer of this game wanted to do more than he could and ended up quitting the game out of frustration and lack of time.

Well what can I say? I loved it!! The women are HAWT the story is amazing and i love the pacing, its just perfect. And the animations are getting better and better. I feel like this is the one i want to support and become a patron. There's not many stories that can get me to commit and become a patron and this one did it. Keep up the good work i wouldn't change a thing. Also the dialog is great.

I liked it, the character models are attractive and the animations are above average though the sex scenes don't really last very long, I'd suggest to the Dev to maybe include more still renders during sex scenes with different poses to make them last longer, something else that I could suggest is maybe have some relationship building happen before the women just fall in love with the mc and also make each Li a little more diverse in personality, last thing I would suggest is to bring more structure to the story and writing it was not so much confusing but weird how the mc has broken up with Sophie but now they are working it out As an example, the trainer just does anal with little build up, that's something you'd want to uh..... Be prepared for....

All in all As I said at the start I liked it and think it could become a hit with harem fans, the female mafia boss storyline will be interesting and (I'm assuming) the virgin daughter (prays to god) will be a cool little three-way struggle and the potential of taking over by being the new husband to the boss but also the new daddy to Bella

Anyway I'm talking to much and getting off track, good luck MrPinkCookie, I'll put you on my sub soon list, better known as my sub when I ain't broke list

(No ntr or sharing with other dudes, noice )

Well, while this game does many things good

Renders are nice, girls are sexy

it feels a bit inconsistent in the writing

My biggest problem: you cannot keep faithful to your girlfriend back home. No matter what you do or what you don't do, you end up kissing others girls. If the writing were top notch it SHOULD be possible to become friends with most of them without doing anything romantic.

In that same line is the writing and/or missing options with the girls. To many things are railroaded and - I didn't play til that point - but it feels like the foreshadowing of desaster when all the girls you are forced to make out with feel betrayed later.

Some parts should be rewritten or at least be fleshed out better.

Still a solid 3/5. But I don't think this will ever reach top notch here. Which is sad, because some parts are really good.

ill give this one a 3.5/5, but round up as its getting a bit much hate here in the ratings.

this one has some promise but probably needs a redo as the pacing is atrocious especially all the relationsthat advance WAAAAY too fast, girl spends half a day working with you and is in love, your boss gives you work for one workday you are like "we are bro's for life i gotchu man" and such but other than that it seems to juggle a few fairly interesting ideas and the renders are well done. so all in all not the best game i played on here but def not the worst.

There is no much to say about the story. This story is something for a horny reader... and I liked it. No really long (and most of the time boring) character development and too long (useless) dialogue.
But what I really really liked was the render quality and the body decisions. The male and the female bodies look insane good. I'm hyped to see more of it.

Kudos for the quality of the art... that's it I think...

Writing is unbearable and I stopped it, it is so bad, boring and fast paced.
You are not able to stay faithful and have to cheat. Story makes no sense if you don't play like it is intended.

Despite avoiding all romance I suddenly love that Isabella..
Sex with her was the beste I ever had... 2 frames and just in and out.. wow...
Luca talks at night to me and suddenly he is like a father, after what, a few days.. lol
It is just making no sense it hurts...

It is a shame because with the quality of art you could make a good game with more in-game time and much better writing..

Regards

This is a paint by numbers VN with the added benefit of having some of the most juvenile writing I've ever seen. While the art style is good and the girls are attractive I couldn't get over the complete lack of anything resembling rational human thought process or plot consistency.

Couple examples:

MC goes to gym, fails to do a bench press of 70lbs. THAT NIGHT while on the first day of his new job that is delivering pizzas as a group (No shit, 3 people in a car delivering pizzas) MC beats up a dude.

A few days later, having worked at this place for a grand total of three days or so. The owner takes him into his confidence and asks him to rescue his wife. "Of course, we're family." the MC replies. He met the guy THREE FUCKING DAYS AGO and has perhaps talked to him two or three times at this point.

I can usually say "Well, at least the girls are hot." but in this one, it doesn't matter. The writing is just that bad.

Stay away.

TLDR Ratings
Overall appearance: Good
UI: Crap. Had to install a mod to be able to read the text without squinting.
Renders: Average
Animations: Lacking. Very short clips with no variation. Rarely matched dialogue (I.E. "Can't believe I had sex!" after a blowjob.
Story: What story? It's just bad.

Chapter 3 review of version 0.23 from 1/16/23

This continues to be hilarious, and anything but boring. Very glad that I continued this. Please, keep at it, it's a lot of fun.

Also, I need to compliment your art here, it is so damn good! I think you're quite talented! I also continue to really enjoy the music that you chose to add, especially a couple of the songs with lyrics you chose!

Chapter 1 review from Sept 13 2022

This is so bad, but it bad in a way that is so damn entertaining. I especially love how bad the whole one sex scene is. Intercourse is maybe 2 minutes, tops, it's all in the same shot too.

I really like looking at people in this game, I'll give you that, and the game never annoyed me, it was pure fun! I also really like the music. Seriously, thank you so much for including music.

Yes, that's right people, this game has audio. Music is pretty good too.

If I can give you some constructive criticism, maybe go over the script with someone that has more experience writing. Although quite frankly I'd rather that you just keep going the way you're going, because again, this is really fun so far.

Renders = 4.00 / 5. Almost renders in very good quality.

Story = 3.75 / 5. Maybe a little fast with Milf Gym.

Animations = 3.75 / 5. Good start and good way.

Characters = 3.75 / 5. We can know some similar Skins from anothers games, it's not bad at all, but the dev can do new chars especially for his game mixing more assets.

Some lines by the MC and other characters are switched. varied characters.

I know it's a first release, but this game needs a ton of work. The girls are all quite attractive, but the writing is horrendous. The dialogue and inner monologue all seem like they were written by a child. I always try to give each VN a legitimate chance, but I found myself skipping through all of the dialogue after a few minutes because of how awkward and cringe-inducing it all was. The story is nonsense, and the interactions between characters are unnatural and bizarre. I am confused as to how anyone who has actually read what the dev has written can give this game a favorable review.

This is a brand new game, in fact at first I did not expect much from it, but when I tried it, I found that this is really my favorite style, living with a MILF, the girls are very beautiful, which really surprised me, I look forward to the release of more content!

Renders are good and story is good and easy to understand. Each girl has its own personalties and i like that in a game,there is some choices that can have some impact on the story and in the relations with the girls,hoe in the future we can see more choices with more impact on both sotry and relations with the girls, hope there is more choices to choose (instead of 2 to have 3) in the next updates, i think sasha face needs some work because it seems she has a squaree face (its my opinion), hope that the girls arent all slutty and hope that the game has more girls. The game has potential but the dev cant loose what he wants in terms of the story and the girls too.