RPGM - eNTRusted Everwhite [v0.5.8] [PickyPockety]

In summary, the game is fun, but the bugs are a bit annoying. I can also see that you really like writing, because some scenes are a bit too long (for me). There aren't many games of this type (femdom/ntr), so I hope you'll persevere and finish it. I also hope you'll finish Trisha S Route. Because I'd like to see a more cruel ending. The game is 8/10 for me so far, because of these freezes.

As a big NTR fan i really wanted to give this game 5 stars, but simply can't. No offense to the dev but aside from the very bland AI CGs the game is very buggy. The dialogue in the sex scenes still hot though. So i hope it improves so i can change the review to 5 stars.

[Review of the version 0.5.3, that is as of writing still Patreon only]

Well this is a weird one

One one hand this game is a half broken mess, it is very easy to get stuck
thanks to the many, many game breaking bugs (this is a problem especially
early on in the game), it is easy to move out of bounds and walk on top
of trees etc., the art is incredibly inconsistent and let's not mention the grammar and prose...
On the other hand, despite all of the above I found the game to be incredibly engaging

I need to unpack why, so essay is incoming

Some strong points of the game without spoilers:

- has a quite a bit of content for what is pretty much a prologue to the real story

- quality of scenes goes up with every update

- the girl getting the action in the prologue has a let's say a quite interesting feelings towards mc, she is a breath
of fresh air when it comes to NTR heroines

- in NTR it is important to properly build relationship between heroine and protagonist, this game is very good at that


Unneccesarily long review bellow

Very hot premise. NTR with hot females and a bully character...

If you like NTR, at least keep following this game imo. It's still very early in production, that's the only "drawback".

Also (as far as I know) the first project for the developer - the scenes are pretty good for this. Can't wait for whats coming in the future.

As for v0.1.0, This is one of the most perfect introduction of a game. no bullshit you already have a choice immediately although it only have 1 route for now. Seeing there's other route is cool. There's some bugs here. Which make sense it's 0.1.0 and not full game. Story is already interesting i hope the story quality don't degrade overtime.
Ngl i want a route where screw the childhood friend or gf. I wanna be hero shit and don't care. But you do you. I hope this succeed.

Only at v.0.1.0 as of this review, but it's already quite good. Kind of a slow paced opening, but that is really necessary for a proper NTR game, and that's what we get here. There's sort of 3 scenes so far (2 are variants), but they are really excellent; well animated, with sfx, good writing and hot situation. The writing is consistently quite good all throughout, other than a few minor spelling mistakes.

This has been a surprise start to a NTR game for me. I wasn't expecting much but if it continues down this path then it will be a good mystery netorare game.

I was definitely annoyed right at the start because its a long cutscene where you can't control the character. A big factor into that annoyance is the preview images. I thought I was still in the intro part of the game for a while since it seemed like we were being shown some backstory before jumping to the present. But once I realized we were gonna play through the whole of his school days before seeing the black-haired and white-haired girl it got better.

Great art and animated scenes. I do hope the other girls aren't blackmailed since it is not good NTR in my opinion, but works for the childhood friend in the story setting. I assume we will have the friend corrupted fast as a way to establish the bully as someone who has stolen the MC girl before, for when we jump to the present with the main girls.

I look forward to seeing this one updated.

Played on version 0.1 Rating: 4.5/5

This game initially looked to me as though it might be a cheap-ish netorare game. Giving it a shot anyway, it turns out I was wrong.

Pro:
- Good setup, seemingly good production value
- Music is picked well and so are the respective timings
- Writing is good, sex scenes are hot*

Neutral/Minor annoyances:
- Art is a mix between 2-3 styles with some definetly being done by AI (Characters are still consistent, except for the girl having big boobs in an animation when she's more flat than anything)

-Game is sometimes a bit too cliché in it's writing/setting, BUT it is still executed well.

*Currently only 2 sex scenes with one having a variation.

I will point out that I'm biased and like this genre and archetype of storytelling, nevertheless this is done well and I'm giving it 4.5 for its future potential, based on what I've seen so far. Looking forward to the next update!

Edit: Grammar