VN - Ren'Py - Ephemeral Desires: A Ghostly Seduction [v0.2 Beta] [ArchimedesCompany]

The writing is very peculiar, it is almost as if the writer put together a series of bullet points for each scene and then tried to form that into sentences without thinking about how it all flows. This results in characters that seem flat and disconnected from the reader.

Renders are fine if a little oddly proportioned, but it's the characters clothing choices that are completely and utterly immersion breaking - the husband looks to be wearing a victorian-style tailcoat in the opening scene, the wife looks to be wearing a bin-bag and don't get me started on porky the vampire ghost pig.

Nothing here, absolutely nothing, some clicks in dialogue, but otherwise nothing.

Not sure what the developer was thinking releasing this...its shoddy at best. Take it back to the drawing board, put some serious hours into it and I mean everything. It all needs to work, you have stiff competition on these sites...