Yeah there are a few bits here that feel a little awkward but as far as writing goes this is SO GOOD, and that's saying a lot. I remember playing this through when it was only the first chapter, I'm glad I revisited here (v.0.6.1), it was definitely worth it.
Anything I could pick out to criticize would be pretty minor... Social and political issues around duplos mirror trans issues in real life, which feels simultaneously in place and out of place in a world full of futas. I think it's handled a bit awkwardly, it doesn't detract much. I could say the word-building is a bit weak? I'm grasping at straws to find something to be constructively critical about.
Some of the photography, especially early on, falls into the familiar trap of doing constant dutch angles in order to get more into the frame, but this improves after the first couple of chapters.
See what I mean? There isn't much to criticize.
Choices make a difference and the game is clear about what your choices mean. I love the little hints that show me which choices I only have access to because of my earlier choices.
Honestly the writing and pacing carry Eruption Imminent quite far. It's rare to go through a VN on this site and have it be worth playing.
Anything I could pick out to criticize would be pretty minor... Social and political issues around duplos mirror trans issues in real life, which feels simultaneously in place and out of place in a world full of futas. I think it's handled a bit awkwardly, it doesn't detract much. I could say the word-building is a bit weak? I'm grasping at straws to find something to be constructively critical about.
Some of the photography, especially early on, falls into the familiar trap of doing constant dutch angles in order to get more into the frame, but this improves after the first couple of chapters.
See what I mean? There isn't much to criticize.
Choices make a difference and the game is clear about what your choices mean. I love the little hints that show me which choices I only have access to because of my earlier choices.
Honestly the writing and pacing carry Eruption Imminent quite far. It's rare to go through a VN on this site and have it be worth playing.