VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Eryka [Ep. 2 v0.5] [Narudogamer]

The game is... weird.
1) two stories are presented, but from your choice, you jump in it and... it seemed like a joke introduction. So bad introduction in the game and what is that idea to have 2 games in one? are they really 2 games or 2 branches coming together? i don't get it.
2) game is in a language which tries to be english. But is not. I don't mind occasional errors or mistakes. But here, there are so many errors that it doesn't feel like you are playing in english. And menus are not in english.
3) from this comedical introduction and language, i couldn't get anywhere.

So voila. A bad game introduction killed the game.

Graphics are very good, but the story is in very early stages. I will be happy to upgrade my review score if the story advances significantly. There are also a number of serious translation bugs still to be ironed out.

As of Ep.2 v.05 the English and plot are so bad it makes the game neigh unplayable. I don't expect greatness from porn games, but I do expect the language and grammar to not physically assault my eyes.
The main girl is beautifully rendered, but the other assets and characters are clearly from an earlier gen and don't come close to matching her, reinforcing the fact that this is a game and dragging you out of immersion every time you see her in glorious HD while the background and other characters are barely 480, if that.
The premise seems fine, pretty standard fair to be honest, but the game is clearly missing a few tags like male dom, humiliation, and possibly rape. Not complaining about that content being present (quite the opposite), but the game should be upfront about what you are getting into so people can make their own choices about what kinks they want to search for.

Ttoal waste of a decent looking girl. The gamegoes like this:

Real world. Accept accept accept>Main menu
refuse refuse refuse > Main menu

The game can last from 10 seconds if you refuse and skip, to 2 or 3 minutes if you read and watch all the scenes.

Goblin world. The introduction thing with the battle is the most detailes scene you will see in this game. Sex scenes happen witout transition and they end the same. Dialogues are non existant which is realsitic for goblins, but she is a person.

The game is terrible, a 0, ZERO.

This is just..... terrible.
Man i don't wanna go harsh on this one but its very difficult to not be.
The renders seems good yes, but thats it, there is nothing else.
No actual story, no gameplay, and you'll be constantly seeing game over screen cause you picked a path that leads nowhere for now, so its over.
And the scenes, well, the screenshots on the op are the only ones basically, thats all.
Sorry dev, i really wish you a good luck with your project and i do hope you manage to bring something good and prove me wrong, but till then, i gotta protect my brothers in this platform and advice them to stay away from this one. Maybe give it a shot after 2 or 3 years.

Having the privilege of being a programmer and being able to make games with nice graphics, good movement, very beautiful girl, that's very good.
investing all this in a silly story is what I do not understand,it's like having a great football player and playing football in the neighborhood team.
please write a story about the problems of a young and beautiful girl who is alone and without money in a city in the real world.is this so difficult?
the two stars are for the ΜC which is very beautiful, for the story I would put half a star.

This game had potential but it is very short and the renders are very blurry for some reason so you can't really see much of what is on screen. I think the dev has the 3D camera focused wrong and somehow has not realised this? Basically depth of field is being applied to the entire scene rather than just the background.

In terms of the rest of the game beyond the blurry h-scenes. The game is just too short and too linear to really say much else positive about. You have two linear paths to choose one with fantasy monsters and one in the real world setting.

I might be able to rate this game higher if the renders weren't so blurry.

With the notable exception of nice art, this is a total trainwreck. You jump into a scene with no backstory or character development, you're immediately stuck in an endless loop, and if you break out of that loop you get trapped in another one. There is no beginning. There is no story. There is no end.

Im giving this 4 because 1 is too harsh for a first relrase with such a hot Female MC, shes maybe the hottest and also perfect proportioned girl in these type of games.

Has animations with sound which are pretty decent on my phone and the double bj and the monster scenes are great for me.
This one has good potential and hope the dev improves with each update as there is alot that needs work, one main thing being full translation.

Renders? passable background, sometimes a bit blurry, decent models
Story? 404
Gameplay? making it a slideshow would be an upgrade
Content? barely any. 4 random scenes that make no sense.
Bugs? found one crash on an unfinished route that leads nowhere

Calling this a game is already ambitious, its an arrangement of pointless loops that slap "next" and "go back" buttons in your face every 3 seconds.
Calling it a v1.0 is malicious and a waste of everyones time.

Wow, the premise had so much potential and the execution is just appalling.

Characters look good, overall renders are super blurry. Obvious set up for lesbian incest goes nowhere . Actually anything lesbian themed seems to go nowhere bad english, bad translations no idea where the story is supposed to start or end. Just wow.