Ren'Py - Evelyn's Story [v0.45] [Rabbit Haven]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    ThisUsername5

    The stuff that needs worked on imo:
    Absolute slog, seems like nearly everything is connecting so you can't avoid content you are not interested in. My progress has stopped after the finding Jimmy in the Slums quest Did actually get through that, absolute nightmare btw, and not doing the school/company stuff. I cannot progress because I do not want to do the last tutor request nor deal with the boss. While I can understand that people enjoy different things, its just rough locking story behind stuff that people can find understandably detestable. This should not be considered a true sandbox with how railroaded the player is in all of this. It feels like the player has no options in the story - only that they can avoid it (and lose out on lots of content). Having a walkthrough to tell what you need to do and what all is interconnected so the player can plan to do everything efficiently would help this a lot. especially considering that the Quest tab is infuriatingly vague and even wrong at times.
    How was I supposed to know to run away from the gangs in the slums as opposed to fighting them, both feel very mechanically the same and all the Quest tab says is "Find him in the Slums" which is insanely vague. That 1, implies that it is location based in a maze like area (which it isn't); 2, does NOT imply that it has to do with any interaction in the slums; and 3 (or 2.5), it gives no inkling of which action to do. Reading the discussion I saw stuff relating to the Punch option in the slums (an issue that should be addressed, even though its content I won't get to), and so when I saw that you had to interact with them (again from the discussion), that's what I assumed what it was - which wasted far too much time. If the slums were removed/heavily reworked (to keep the content, but lose the mechanics), nothing would be lost

    All the problems are vastly compounded with how clunky and unintuitive the UI is and having to click so much to go through each location. The way location is handled is very disorienting, especially in the slums - both in general and when you have to deal with an encounter. While you can buy a literal "magic shortcut", it only goes one way and mechanically is there to avoid encounters - its not for moving location convenience, this is obvious because you have to use the location back button to leave these spots. You still have to manually click back each step. The amount of clicking this game requires is unironically absurd for both moving and any 'sandbox' features - oh you get to decided how much time you get to sleep in your own bed, the starting bed. The options are literally only 2 hours and 4 hours. The two other locations I have found that you can sleep offer 2,4, and 8 (which seems like it should be the default), and one, in the slums (an odd place mechanically) you can sleep for 5 or 7 hours. You will be forced to home typically at Midnight, then the earliest you can leave your house is 6, so you have to go through multiple waiting/sleep cycles per night with your regular bed.

    The time system of the whole game just feels bad - you never know how long anything is aside from sleep. There is a wait button the game never tells you about and it is set for only 1 and a half hours. You have 0 fine control over minutes - the smallest safe/repeatable options being 15 minute baths and 10 minute showers. There are things that will throw that clock off to a minute scale, so not having that minute level control is terrible. Why? The clock is absolutely broken, especially when the minutes are off from 5 minute points. Not to mention that many (if not most) quest events are time based, alongside side most general option being time locked. The clock also gets covered by notifications (+1 stat, for example) so if you're trying to pass a specific amount of time while boosting a stat/getting money it becomes very obnoxious.

    There are also just many spots of odd jank - sound is very weird with this. The only music is in the fully backed out map, nothing else has it (outside of one cutscene) which makes this very jarring, the game might benefit from having it off until more places have music. The only other location based sound is the gym, which has odd ball/sports sound and is just extremely awkward. The ear piercing sound + volume of the office phone is also horrible.


    The Goods:
    All those issues are a real shame because the models look very good and the animations are mostly smooth. I really wanted to like this one, I have put many hours in but have had very little on return. I have the patience to sit through a bad slog if there is good content at the end and for me personally that good content is mind control stuff - my disappointment when finding out its pretty much non-existent (as far as I can tell) is immense.

    This game has immense potential, if only some of the most common complaints were dealt with to make it actually playable. That is the most frustrating part, I really wanted to like this - it looks so good, but I can no longer suffer through the hours slog for the hope of finding something right for me. If it wasn't so long to get through I would still have patience to hope for what I'm looking for but right now this seems like a never touch again (though I hope I'm wrong). This is the furthest thing from wasted effort, but I hope that future effort will go into the games playability (and also my interests, but that's a lot more selfish a request.


    tldr; Horrible slog for both story and UI reasons, arguably should not have the sandbox tag (story wise it isn't one IMO), and really shouldn't have the mind control tag to my disappointment. Has massive potential to be great though.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    binkbonkdinkdonk

    If hell exists, there's someone there condemed to playing this game for eternity.

    Story- Sucks. Would literally be better if you removed ALL of the text and just looked at the renders.

    Sandbox- Clicking Simulator Hell. To sleep until the next day you have to do the following:
    1. Click on apartment
    2. Click on front door
    3. Click on bedroom
    4. Click on bed
    5. Click the "change into sleeping clothes" option
    6. Click the amount of time you want to sleep in 2 or 4 hour increments
    7. Fast forward through the image of fMC closing her eyes
    8. Repeat for as many even-hour increments you want to sleep through
    9. Click on back arrow
    10. Click on back arrow again
    11. Be told you need to change out of sleeping clothes to leave the apartment
    12. Click on bedroom
    13. Click on closet (just looks like the fucking wall btw)
    14. Click on the correct outfit for the task you want to do
    15. Check quests
    16. Realize you have the wrong outfit
    17. Click on closet again
    18. Click on correct clothing option
    19. Click on back arrow
    20. Click on back arrow again
    21. Click on back arrow a third time

    Don't waste your time; plenty of other games in the genre to play.
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    tianyu990505

    In my opinion, this is an excellent game. Since everyone's interests and hobbies are not exactly the same, developers should focus on their own development and not take it to heart! I believe that through your efforts, more people will come to like this game more and more, and it will gradually conquer everyone.
  4. 1.00 star(s)

    CelebAndHeroineLover

    This game has 0 reasons to be sandbox. Most of the quests requires to complete another quest. Half of the gameplay is click around to change clothes. If it was a kinetic novel then I would have fun but at this state it feels like waste of time and mouse lifespan
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    Don't Ask ME

    Guys!
    this game is very good, I read each mission and it's very interesting, then each character has its own story relationship. i really like the female boss character in the club/bar (the design is very good). the story presented is also very interesting and there is gang involvement here? wow!
  6. 1.00 star(s)

    AGreen289

    It's a disgusting game. No freedom of choice, no user-friendly interface. Why make a sandbox if you still have to follow quests that you can't give up??? In fact, this is kinetic, only with a lot of mouse clicks.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    InfamousWanker

    I love the game for simply the fact that it has rich story. The content is also a lot but in terms of the corruption it seems like it is rather forced at first but then slowly coming from her voluntarily which is awesome. I was kinda disappointed at first that more scene are locked behind codes or paywall but I understand where the dev is coming from by doing this. Its necessary if you want to support the dev but it’s a bit ridiculous that scenes are locked just like that. I just hope the locked scenes are not that much integral to the story otherwise we would be missing out on a lot but yeah overall the game is great and the low ratings it got in this site is so overexaggerated like really guys? Yall hate sandbox that much? Lol. I paid for the patreon tier sub right after I played the 0.37v and its worth it. For a 3D honeyselect type games this one is top tier for sure. I hope the dev ignore the hate bait and focus on developing this game until its done.
  8. 3.00 star(s)

    Mercedes

    Well, I already wrote a regular post about the game in July '24. Now I'm starting a new one.
    On the positive side, some quest lines have received more content.
    On the negative side, the poor time management and the countless unnecessary clicks are still there.
    I'm also just noticing the poor pay at the company.
    You go to work at 7:00 AM, get called to the boss for a handjob, and leave his office at 6:30 PM without any financial gain.
    The next day, MC is called back to the office, this time for a handjob, a blowjob, and sex all in the same amount of time (okay, 11.5 hours is actually plenty of time for that), but it's already the second full day without pay.
    Or the tutoring sessions.
    MC sleeps 2 x 4 hours at night, goes to the boy's at 6:00 AM, sleeps on his bed, gets harassed, and leaves the house at 7:00 PM???
    My plan was to tutor the boy for maybe 2-4 hours, then go to work, bypass the boss's time window, and earn some money to get closer to the required €5,000 for the laptop.

    I have no idea how I would rate all this in a review. Considering all the negative criticisms, I'd actually have to deduct three stars. On the other hand, the game does pique a certain curiosity about what happens next, even if much of it is extremely clichéd.

    I hope the developer doesn't abandon the game because of all the negative reviews. On the other hand, I hope even more that the developer finally addresses the many negative criticisms from many players and tries to make the game more accessible in the foreseeable future.
  9. 1.00 star(s)

    theraphosa

    Well, that was quite an experience.
    You just start the game, no idea what to do or where to go. Every step you take requires several clicks.
    Go to bed - change to nude - sleep for 4 hours - go to bed - change to nude - sleep for 4 hours - go to bed - change to nude - sleep for 4 hours - go to bed - change to nude - sleep for 4 hours.
    Immediately afterward, you go (via several pointless steps) to walk a dog, fall asleep, and therefore get less money. After fucking 16 hours of sleep!!!
    Since there's only empty spaces waiting for you after that and nothing else to do, click, click, click your way home - go to bed - switch to naked - sleep for 4 hours - go to bed - switch...
    Next day, tutoring a boy, pointlessly click your way home, click your way through the night... and you're standing around aimlessly again. The quest log is empty, two character overviews say "walk the dog" and "tutor the boy," and you can't accept either job.
    So, work at my desk until the end of the day, idiotically click home, idiotically click through the night. 16 hours later, to the gym, on the treadmill... nope, too tired!!!

    Delete folder "Evelyn's Story" click - delete roaming, RenPy Evelyn's Story click - F95 ignore thread Evelyn's Story click.
  10. 4.00 star(s)

    oceanbobo4

    Although I agree with many of the concerns noted by those who give this game one or two stars, I have to disagree that this is a one or two star game.

    The world is unusual, and the variety of events is inventive. There are a few ingenious surprises in the story.

    And the model herself is lovely.

    There is a gem of a game here, and the mechanics of playing it are improving.

    It is still somewhat grindy due to having to change clothes and due to the many clicks required to sleep and to work at the office. And many of the quest directions are unclear.

    But if the player can go beyond those problems, the game itself is good because of its variety and inventiveness and world building. The sexual situations are strong. The models are excellent for a comic of this type.

    So, overall a good game and worth 4 stars. Could be in the top twenty percent of games and worth 5 stars with improvements to playability.
  11. 2.00 star(s)

    alwayssslutty

    The game looked promising with similar themes to Tomie Wants To Get Married, but I now understand why it has been rated so poorly. When I first started playing the game I had no idea about what to do because there was no tutorial or guide to tell me what I should be doing/where to go to actually start playing the game in terms of its quests. If you get stuck on a quest, the hints given are straightforward sometimes but also really pathetic sometimes. However, there isn't a proper quest screen or anything, and you have to look at your contacts list thingy to try and figure out what you're meant to do next.

    The game is INCREDIBLY REPETITIVE, and you spend a lot of time doing the same things over and over again (not NSFW) to try and progress/unlock the next scenes. You have to do so many things to just go to one area (explained in another review about the gym) and the sleeping commands are so annoying because there's only options to sleep for 2 or 4 hours and not through the whole night. It is so time consuming and just not worth playing as a NSFW game.

    A positive is that the actual model is pretty cute.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    bigtonkat324

    The story is very rich content, it has many different things. Extremely fun to explore throughout, hopefully more content for many things sooner especially for the school and jobs, also the games frequently updates even if they are small it proves that the developer does love the game and willing to focus and make the community know that its a game that is developing.
  13. 1.00 star(s)

    Rake Tyler

    This game has a very bad rating, huh? Why is that? I rated it bad because the game doesn't have a tutorial to explain the story and what you should do in the game. It just starts and throws you onto the map. You're like an idiot looking for what to do. That's why I don't like map games, since most of them are poorly made.
  14. 1.00 star(s)

    ValeriaEx

    Game is super terrible. You would spend all the time just clicking, clicking and clicking. UI is super bad. The developer is trying to fit so many functions and features all at once even though the game is still in an early stage. Map is all over the place, when the content was just one single place only. The game becomes a chore, you know? A chore! Listen to your critics! Do something about it! The idea is great, but the UI and mechanics are super terrible! Wasting time! Did you play and test your own game?! You like what you've created?
  15. 1.00 star(s)

    wildride69

    Extreme Clickfest. One of the worse UI's I have ever seen in a title. Anything and I mean Anything you want to do requires an insane amount of clicks.

    Want to go to the Gym after work? First you have to click back to the world map 3 times, then when you are on the world map, you would think ok click on the Gym...Right? WRONG! What you actually have to do is
    Click Home - Click the front door - Click into the Bedroom - Click on the Closet - Click on Gym Clothes -then- Click the back arrow Once, Click the back Arrow twice - Click the back Arrow a third time to get back to the world map!! Then you Click on the Gym!

    So am I nitpicking lets look at sleeping, If you want to sleep you MUST put on Sleep Wear every time. Most games have an option to "Sleep until Morning" but not here! Evelyn's Story gives you a sleep for 2 hours or a sleep for 4 hours option ONLY. So you need to click two to three times to get to morning. You say screw it let's go out at night and explore the city... WRONG, It's to late and you can't leave your house until you finish sleeping!

    QUEST - most of the time when you see a QUEST button, you click on it and it gives you at least a clue what to do next and/or it keep track of what quests your on... NOT here! You get a list of Friends, Family and Others and at least initially no damn information as to what to do next. So you repeat days randomly until something changes.

    Did I mention the horrible CLICKFEST you go to work, Click on your Desk, the Click to WORK, the Click again to Work, then repeat Clicking on WORK a few more time until the work day ends.

    The Dev should pay us for this! Maybe we are training and AI model for them but it's wasting our time.

    They need to hire someone to work on the user interface ASAP.
  16. 3.00 star(s)

    Fiksel

    - translation's quality
    - navigation and travel
    Possible improvements
    adding locker at the gym to change clothes
    auto change of clothes when going to bed

    +- events feel bit forced, not enough tease and temptation

    + Cute Asian model
  17. 2.00 star(s)

    joe1299

    Exactly the kinda game I like, high quality 3d and corruption. Hopefully it focuses less on lesbian content in the future as I have no interest at all in it, and it really makes or breaks it. Of course very unfinished but has potential to become something like tomie wants to get married.
  18. 2.00 star(s)

    Joe Steel

    Version 02.

    Not ready for release. There is a map, but it isn't at all clear how to use it. The MC will go to various unlabelled places and it's unclear whether anything should happen or its just filler. It takes a lot of clicking around just to discover where the MC's apartment is. There's a quest button but I never saw anything listed as a quest.

    Visuals are totally average. Story seems non-existent. Gameplay is confusing and irritating. The dev needs to decide what they want to players to have fun doing in this game, and then make it possible for them to do so.