(Review of v1.1)
The premise is at least original but the execution could be better. For starters the basics are already weak, with a text box where you have to guess what's dialogue and what are thoughts from the MC, as both are rendered exactly the same way. Some scenes with music playing in the background but no dialogue or thoughts are described as "Music play", literally. And some proofreading is necessary here.
In the first crime scene the MC is holding a weapon with her bare hands, why? Also her facial expression makes you think she's crazy. The next day she's using a different gun, so if the former was a piece of evidence she shouldn't be holding it that way, don't you think?
The MC drives a car with the steering wheel on the right side, yet she drives on the right side on the road?
This is also one of those games where you win a game over screen if you take the wrong choice. Anyway, the current version ends two scenes after the first choice that can go wrong so it's not like you're missing much. Total gameplay is about 10 minutes at most, maybe 0.1 would have been a better version number. Also 400 something MB is a lot for such a minimal intro.
A very average game for now, and there's no sex content whatsoever in case you're wondering...
The premise is at least original but the execution could be better. For starters the basics are already weak, with a text box where you have to guess what's dialogue and what are thoughts from the MC, as both are rendered exactly the same way. Some scenes with music playing in the background but no dialogue or thoughts are described as "Music play", literally. And some proofreading is necessary here.
In the first crime scene the MC is holding a weapon with her bare hands, why? Also her facial expression makes you think she's crazy. The next day she's using a different gun, so if the former was a piece of evidence she shouldn't be holding it that way, don't you think?
The MC drives a car with the steering wheel on the right side, yet she drives on the right side on the road?
This is also one of those games where you win a game over screen if you take the wrong choice. Anyway, the current version ends two scenes after the first choice that can go wrong so it's not like you're missing much. Total gameplay is about 10 minutes at most, maybe 0.1 would have been a better version number. Also 400 something MB is a lot for such a minimal intro.
A very average game for now, and there's no sex content whatsoever in case you're wondering...