I like this game and I'm curious how and in which direction it will develop.
I like the images and the author has quite a good intuition for interesting view points and angles. Not every scene meets my taste, but overall I like it.
I would give it 5 stars, but there are some technical issues - which mostly exist because of the RPGMaker engine. I wish there would be:
* instant text. These slow text writing is sooo annoying.
* rollback. Certainly not possible in RPGMaker?!
But these issues could be resolved:
* if on the map do not move the mc automatic to give the possibility to save.
* Often there are 2 scenes in one event. Split it up. Make it two events, the 2nd the next day or so.
* The Scenes are too long. These should be shorter and not the same loop over and over again with flashing and wobble effects without thepossibility to skip. This gets boring and exhausting very fast.
* Generally: In the scenes the flashing and wobble effects are overly abused. Less is often more.
Personally I would prefer if the story would refrain from the "magic" and "monster girls" theme. But that's my personal taste and doesn't account for my rating.
This reads like a lot of critics but are meant as hints to make the game even better.