Story 4/5
Story is MC has split up with hes wife and for some reason they are still married even though they dont live together and the wife has boyfriends so that part dident make to much sense, but in any case the wife drops the 3 kids off at MCs house to let him take care of them, so pretty classic incest story.
The other part is about MC owning a company and sinces hes sick he needs to find someone to take it over so it dosent fall into the worng hands, so it will have to pick one of the daughters.
Its a pretty decent story really, it does lack in H-scenes so expect it to be a bit of a slow burn.
Theres alot of spelling issue like words in the worng place and if you rename the girls it gets really weird, i renamed them all and did stick with Lucy on one of them, at one point text box said Lucy and dialog was "you really shouldent be so mad at Lucy" something like that, 2 seconds later Sophia or whatever sits at pool and i renamed her to Zoe but MC text shows Sophia, it happens to much that your better off to not change the names or it gets really annoying, so there is quite a bit to rework in this reworked edition
a proofreader would be a good start.
Girls 4/5
I liked all of them, not much in diversity but thats fine with me since i like smols so it suited me just fine.
Animations 2/5
Yeah they need work, they are short and quality is nowhere near what it could be to day.
Music 0/5
Well cant rate something that arent there.
Content 1?/5
Yeah i really dont get the content in this one, i expected ALOT more, its 2.6 GB it has 0 music and 2 very low quality H-scenes, so i have absolutly no clue why its this big, it really feels more like a 400mb demo then anything else.
My guess is that its due to being a rework so they are using old files from a point where there was alot more content, which has been removed from the game, its the only thing that would make sense to me.
It does have a chance at becoming a great game but as it is right now (v.0.2) its a bit unreal how many 5 star reviews it has recived, it really isent anywhere near 5 stars
yet.
I will revisit this once it gets some more content and change my review then, but for now its really only a 2 star game even with a good story, quality is just lacking in to many other areas like the poor writting with to many mistakes, renaming girls which dosent work, to low quality with animations, no music and so on you get the picture and if you dont mind that stuff then go for it, story does make it worth playing.