VN - Ren'Py - Fake Father [Second v0.4 Full] [Netero3009]

TL;DR
Control freak fantasy. Weak H-scenes. Poor story.

Story: 1/5
The mafia plot is ridiculous and makes no sense. The writing is inconsistent — constantly switching between “You feel…” and “MC feels…”, like the writer couldn’t decide on the perspective.
The MC is poorly written. He’s supposed to be a 45-year-old man but acts like a horny teenager who stares at every woman he sees. All his 'daughters' MUST be obedient, virgin girls whose only purpose is to be deflowered by him.

H-scenes: 1/5
Some reviews mention the slow burn. I usually like that kind of pacing, so I gave it a shot. But this is the worst kind — nothing feels natural. There’s no buildup, no corruption, no romance. Just an old guy groping girls randomly, and they go along with it like it’s totally normal, which makes them seem brain-dead.
The scenes are short, emotionless, and have no tension. There’s maybe one decent scene with the oldest daughter, but that’s it. Animations are short and unimpressive (2/5).

Renders: 3/5
One of the few incest games that at least tries to make the characters look related. The different body types are a plus, but it’s full of overused assets you've seen everywhere else.

i really like this game. some people give low score maybe because of the slow pace of the story. but what will come will come, the story is slow but it will bring more satisfaction.
Although there are some things that are not very reasonable, for example Alice, she cursed her father in the beginning of the game very badly, what kind of child would talk to her parents like that.
overall it is quite good, the graphics are getting better and better with each update
10\10

Love this game so much, especially the interaction with elder daughter - Dora.

True, I feel the pace of this game is really slow, but maybe because of this, it tells the story so much better.

As a father, take over the elder daughter step by step, instead of suddenly elder daughter want to have sex with her father without any qualms.

Watching the story, can see how the elder daughter goes from having no sexual fantasies about her father to falling for the right reasons and wanting to have sex with him even though she knows he is her father. Especially when finally gets to have sex with Dora, I am so involved and excited.

Now the story comes to the second daughter, feel the beginning of the story with second daughter is arranged without any abruptness, and now I am looking forward to the story of him and his second daughter.

But I still don't like the story of him and his youngest daughter very much.

I hope that the story can still continue to interact with elder daughter such as she came home for holidays to make love with MC and etc.

Wasted opportunity. In essence no player choices to make the player feel engaged with the story. Here's an opportunity to make the main character navigate wisely to mimic and take the place of another person. This AVN is mainly kinetic so all that is squandered.

Two daughters are highlighted, one daughter is pretty much ignored. The wife is ignored. Most of the first chapter is a female yelling at and insulting the MC. This is not appealing. The second chapter doesn't carry over the few choices one can make in the first chapter and there's even less choice in the 2nd chapter.

Too many times the dialogue stopped being English and turned into Spanish. Those bugs still haven't been fixed, this is poor quality control and attention to detail.

Two stars, this feels like a half-hearted effort.

It's an exciting story with beautiful visuals. The characters look amazing, have diverse personalities, and are packed with emotions. The Corruption aspect isn't rushed and is very well done overall. I'm hooked on that one, especially because decent corruption games are not frequently created. 10/10 would recommend

I was, at first, reluctant to play this game. Initial reviews were poor, but the premise was intriguing. Finally thought, ”What the Hell“ and gave it a go. It proved pleasantly decent. Story is rather unique for the genre. While there are some logic holes, what story doesn’t, it was just as plausible as most. Renders are decent and animations quite acceptable. It is a slow burn, but really picks up at the end.

The Dev seems to understand the best assets of the LI s and dutifully accentuates them in frames and during sex scenes. I mean how many times are you disappointed with a half baked sex scene of only one position with two angles? The LI has a righteous ass, but you only get missionary? Welp, no spoiler, but this Dev goes all in. I appreciate that in a slow burn. If you are going to build tension and tease, better have an epic payoff.

The latest update seems to now focus on the next LI. Saw that coming. Probably going to slow burn that one for a few updates. Rinse and repeat. I’ll wait for a few updates before picking it up again. Regardless, if the tags appeal to you give this one a go. Get through the slow burn for the payoff. It’s worth it in my opinion.

VERSION: Second v0.2 P1

TITLE: Better than expected

PROS:

1. Beautiful models and renders, a bit dated, not as fancy as some but still above average IMO.
2. Animations are nice, short but good.
3. Story is actually not too far fetched and could be somewhat believable, plenty of thought and effort went into it.
4. Slow burn story initially, but not too bad, gets spicy eventually, but...See CONS
5. Written fairly well considering the developer is not a native English speaker, but...See CONS
6. Sounds are good, but...see CONS

CONS:

1. Slow burn is very close to being too slow IMO, but works to build the characters and story.
2. Sentences need some revision, I have found areas that are still in Spanish, areas where the MC names is changed around with person he is talking to, so some revision is needed here.
3. Game sound adjuster doesn't work, at least on second part, so sounds are very low, this is something the developer should look into, the sounds are decent and provide good immersion to the game.
4. No gallery for second part and option to unlock entire gallery would be nice.
5. Very little content currently in latest release, I personally would appreciate a bit more progression in updates, as things ended on current content, it feels like the MC is back to square one again which just reminds the player that it will be a while before there is any action again...

Overall, its a pretty decent game, I would say 3.5 stars but feel its closer to 4 than 3 so. I believe this developer deserves the support for a decent game with a fair amount of content, I hope he completes this title and keeps the story and standard high

At the beginning I arrived because of the morbidity, I stayed because of the story and the morbidity hahahaha, I have finished 0.11a and it is a brutal cliffanger, I want to continue reading
For now I like all the girls, the only one I like the least is Chloe, I want to correct her very strongly.

this is terrible game, NO sex.. Single choice, why bother ask what to choose? terrible.. waste story or recycle story pathway, going sleep with girl but no sex or opportunity to do anything and next repeat same story.. i think MC penis is not been made yet..

Well, this vn is empty, I dont recommend playing it in v0.10, wait for the V9 or something.
The actual game covers the events in the span of 15 days, but this is not a game but a kinetic novel where the developer got tired after making 2 choices available and decided to cut it back a little. You are still presented with the option of allowing or closing paths at ´"key moments", but thats it.
As a porn novel it barely reaches the category cause there is nothing besides a couple of kisses and some groping , and that despite the fact that this game is one of those where the girls are completely oblivious walking porn tropes and the guy just tells them shit like the typical sexual predator predating on kids basically using their innocence and ignorance in his favor. Still he gets nothing.
There is nothing of quality that stays for more than 2 seconds and that destroys any possibility of the game performing well in other aspects and fitting in another category like "erotic" or "wholesome". Maybe if the dev expands those things in later scenes, but right now it is too green.

This one needs a couple years and a lot of work

Review on Fake Father [v0.10b]

Such a shame, this had potential. Sadly it wasn't executed that well.

The game is a bit of a mess, the story is lackluster, and choices are non-existent. Then there are the issues with the grammar of the English version, it's pretty bad and can be off-putting.

There is also not a lot of sexual content yet, but I don't mind that as much.

The biggest reason for my low rating is due to the protagonist that we play. A delusional sexual predator who thinks he's not, while he grooms, molests, and manipulates those around him.

For me, that was extremely off-putting, and I nearly dropped the game there. I did finish the game till the end, for me, it did not get any better.

But give this game a chance yourself. Maybe you experience this game differently, it's not a bad game, it just wasn't for me.

The Dev spends his time and effort to make this game, regardless of how I feel about it, I appreciate his efforts, and wish him the best with his future game development.

I happen to enjoy the premise of this game and the pictures (those that criticise the pixels and methodology of presentation need to get a life or just leave the site), but the thing that COMPLETELY kills it is the shite English and grammar. I have tried to ignore it but FFS how hard is it to get someone to proof read and tell you that, for example HIM is not HER???? As to the more subtle errors of grammar which are equally easy to identify, it makes my brain scream trying to ignore the shite thats written!
It's no excuse if the author doesn't have english as a first language, this is something easily fixable via someone checking it

[Version 0.9a]

Story ★★★✰✰
The story is kind of unique in a way. It's not very realistic but it's something that you don't see often. I also like how by using the "double" idea, you can fully enjoy the sense of taboo without it being real incest(?) I guess.

The only sad part is the dead-ends (under-developed) paths of the game that ends your play-through unexpectedly short.
As of this version (0.9a) I recommend playing nice with the daughters. Trying to go for obedience will end your play-through prematurely and also cause you to miss over half the content.

Characters / Animations ★★★★✰
Characters are interesting and pretty cute. Corrupting them felt nice, not forced.

Scenes ★★★✰✰
There isn't much yet. A lot of teasing, but I think once the corruption ball is rolling, we'll get to see a lot of well-made scenes.

Coding/Script ★★★✰✰
Bugs and crashes-free.
But perhaps the biggest downside of this game is the English translation. Will need to get a proper translator, or quality check more thoroughly.

TL;DR / Overall ★★★✰✰
I almost skipped this game, but I'm glad I didn't, this is an interesting game to keep on radar, and I look forward to what the future brings to it.

I have zero clue what the other reviewers are smoking, cause this is honestly a 3/10. The models are decent, the concept is nice, but the writing is crap, the characters are unbearable, and it's amazing how the dialogue manages to drag on so long when barely anything of importance happens. I mean the biggest plot point in the story is over in like a minute and rushed as hell, but everything else is incredibly meandering. It's so bad, how are people giving this 5 stars????

It's an exciting story with beautiful visuals. The characters look amazing, have diverse personalities, and are packed with emotions. The Corruption aspect isn't rushed and is very well done overall. I'm hooked on that one, especially because decent corruption games are not frequently created. 10/10 would recommend

Good renders and writing. Very grounded dialogues, the LIs have realistic personalities and reactions, and the MC approach to the situations also seem plausible. That made "corrupting" Lily very satisfying - slow corruption fans will definitely like this game.

This is an interesting and fun game. Little twist on the normal AVN, but still a bit predictable.
The graphics are a step below the high end games, but they are not bad. The animations are the same way.
The story is more interesting than most, but not at the top level as very few are, when it comes to avns.
Still I would rate this a 4.5, if I could.

Great game. I always like games that look believable and where the plot develops gradually and organically.
At the beginning our hero rescues his twin brother (Indian music plays in the background), they get acquainted and the MC's brother offers to take his place while he takes care of business (starring James Belushi, Charles Grodin).
So our newly minted millionaire arrives at the house with the ghost of his wife and two beautiful daughters and... Trying to repair the broken family ties! Nice isn't it, but where's the catch?) We're still on F95 planet and should realize that the protagonist's 18-year-old non-daughters will be awakening more than just family cravings in him. Our unfortunate one will be constantly drawn to one and the other while complicating the hero's life will be a strict time limit - the brother plans to return and ruin all progress (really, you shouldn't have saved him in the beginning). So, the MC has a very limited amount of time and what's a man to do? That's right, spend more time with the beauties! We have a special approach to each of them: the younger one deserves support and confidence in her abilities, the middle brat is constantly asking for money and requires a spanking, and the older one is such a cutie pie who should be kept close and not given to anyone. It's with the older one that we're making a lot of progress. Dora's gentle, leisurely sexual upbringing is probably the best thing about this game so far. There's the cutest discussion of the permissibility of female pubic hair length, awkward simulations with a rubber friend, and learning to play with a little vibrating pink tamagotchi. At the same time Dora herself behaves very naturally and believably which can't help but win you over

So, version 0.7 doesn't contain much content, but everything in this game is done with a lot of care and attention to detail. This game could definitely grow into something more than just another incestuous craft the project has its own soul an interesting story and especially three different heroines that won't leave anyone untouched.
Subscribe, like and wait for more updates! Great job developer

The game's ok but it suffers from a few issues of polish which hold it back.

The pacing is also an issue. Given the context of the story it makes sense as you've only got a short amount of time but on the other hand it means there's little time to digest what's happening on screen. Furthermore because everything is crammed together then it makes some situations seem absurd. You are meant to be this aloof bastard of a father and you turn on a dime to be actually quite chill but all the people you interact with kind of just accept this about face as the norm. There's little in the way of questioning what's going on and given, as a stranger, you're basically pushing these characters into sexual situations then it makes it feel all the amore odd.

Beyond that it's ok, renders are ok. It suffers from that issue common to quite a few different games where the lighting is sometimes a bit off so scenes are probably darker than they should be. There's also little in the way of playability. There are a few options to do A or B but more often than not the need to click an option comes up needlessly. In the latest update you're driving a go kart round a track and you have to click (Speed up) to progress the scene. I get it, just let me play.

An all too common sight in the AVN community: the waste of a premise.

The only things I liked were the renders and the animations, and they're really only average. Everything else was pretty bad. Numerous grammatical errors, constant pacing issues, single choice prompts (always a bad look when not thematically appropriate), and worst of all: a wimp MC who's canonically 45 years of age yet acts and thinks like your average teenager main character i.e. a bumbling idiot who can only think about how he wants to fuck every woman he meets.

The inconsistency on the MC's part is especially aggravating. One minute he's almost panicking about how he'll be killed if the people who know about the switch find out about him doing things he's not supposed to, the next he's thinking about how he has to meet the eldest daughter because she's the hottest... The only thing that's consistent is how much of a pussy he is. Even when I tried my best to play him as assertive, he still lets Chloe and whatever the middle daughter's name is walk all over him without a single retort despite the fact that he's not only impersonating the man of the house, the father figure, but he also has the actual guy's future by the balls. I don't know if it gets better as the story progresses but I can't stomach any more. I mean, this is coming from a guy who had the stones to fuck a fellow teacher in a classroom on the daily. Please.