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Azienda is one of the few NTR studios/dev teams that plays at the top level. Their last game Turning the Page had great production value, amazing art and animations, great writing and consistent updates. The corruption pace was very good and the female POV was also great. It fell a little short at the end though and there were some other shortcomings as well. The male POV (mystery NTR) was mediocre, the story felt too soft and the corruption of the fmc felt way too easy, taking away from the overall NTR experience (the corruption pace was great though!). Personally I prefer darker NTR stories with real struggles, drama, the story moving back and forth,...
Now here is the new game from Azienda and the premise couldnt be hotter/better/more aligned with my kinks (strong, emanicpated female character acting like an ice queen, standing up for whats right, independent and smart VS. a cunning but lazy, bully chauvinist who is mostly an egoistic opportunist and who sees women as mere objects).
Overall there are a lot of things done greatly - such as the art, the new - very simple but nicely integrated and optimized - gameplay features, the dialogues, the storytelling, the world building. Overall the production value is insane, everything is on a very high production level compared to other NTR games.
Apart from all that - this was just the start. There are still a lot of possible pitfalls. Here are my hopes for the games future development:
- Stick to everything that was great in TtP (their previous game), e.g.
- a lot of art even for transitions, a lot of clothing changes
- set up of lewd scenes (length, number of CGs, implementation, dialogues, dirty talk,...)
- corruption pace (the corruption speed and process across the story) - it was done very nicely, though it could use some unexpected shake ups and a little more back and forth
- focusing on the right things (e.g. not too many characters. a lot of details,...)
- I loved some of the scenes especially from the beginning up to the later stages in the game (following H scenes come to my mind immediately: School showers, gym, playing social games, while MC is presenting something in class, sex in the room next to the class room,...)
- work on TtPs shortcomings
- while there were cool scenes I felt some of them were not fully utilized (e.g. having sex in the room next to the classroom - while MC is giving lessons in the classroom next door and beeing irritated by the sounds,...). This is closely connected and brings me to:
- The way the scenes were staged was a bit to linear. I would love to see more split screens, more timelapse lewd scenes, the use of pop ups (as in Navigating the Rift or Survival Mission Z), the use of maybe online forums, something like only fans, web cam calls, phone calls,... Maybe I am going a bit over board here but there is just so much that could be easily implemented. Obviously this is also closely connected to making the Male mystery NTR POV more viable:
- more mystery NTR scenes
- lean into darker more dramatic plot pieces
- make the struggle real and not something that just falls into place
- give us some unexpected story twists
Overall Mrs. Pages corruption was IMO just way too easy. That was why especially in the end I lost a lot of interest. That might be something to keep in mind for FUNS.
Thats my cue - for switching the focus from TtP to FUNS and stop the comparison. The demo and first update of FUNS were very promising. It surely sets high expactations - thats always tough to handle as a dev team but I try to keep mine in check. I want to elaborate some of the thoughts I have on it.
- I absolutely love small details such as that the antagonist calls the FMC by another name (Nova) cause he does not care - and the FMC`s reaction is great - it drives her mad. More of small things/details like this please!
- already some groping/harassment scenes - I would love to see many more - it plays into the mystery NTR (you can easily make scenes out of it) and jealousy of the MC as well as it suits the downward looking way of the antagonist. Also it really shows the corruption process (how did the fmc react to harassment in the beginning vs. middle vs. end?). Personally I never get enough of such scenes and I feel almost all NTR games underdeliver in that category. And yet it is logical - the first third of the corruption process is always the most exciting - precisely because of such scenes.
- !important! To raise tension make the FMC (and also the male MC) fight back in a smart way as well! IMO here you are already falling a bit short (same mistake as in TtP). The FMC is not fighting and challenging the antagonist on a believable level (even if she is defiant and offended like a little child). If you stay on that path IMO things will get boring after a while. The FMC should be more engaged, she could give the antagonist a slap in the face for example, if he is too pushy, giving the story more turning points and ups and downs. Make more smaller steps (e.g. "accidental groping" which the antagonist lazily covers as an "accident" making her more and more used to it over time). All this foreplay will make the final NTR much more satisfying and juicy...
- play with the contrast between the characters (feminist vs. chauvinist/political correct vs. radical/...), its a perfect playground for humiliation, mocking and bullying
- extend and make more use of gameplay elements you already implemented (the status screen)
- implement new smaller gameplay elements (pop ups for mystery NTR/male POV as in Navigating the Rift or Survival Mission Z, make use of web cam calls (e.g. Sword Art Online), phone calls, heart rate monitor, web cam calls, monitor suite, drones, bugs,....) to make up for great mystery scenes or interactions (involve the player!!)
- surely a codex/compendium is great for world building and such - still I am not quite sure if its wasted energy here. There are far more important or in the context of a NTR porn games useful elements that could be implemented such as the ones mentioned above.
- I am also no fan of this cliche small sized penis of the MC. It makes things too easy again. I find that HangoverCat did it very nicely with Harry`s best piece. The FMC`s felt a difference but it was more in their mind after all, not in the real size. IMO, if you make a difference, you shouldn't make it so comically absurd. Just a small difference sometimes goes a long way
Listening to the feedback, this really might be worth a patch...
- Overall I do hope the male MC wont be a total douchebag/softy and he will actually also fight back in a smart, maybe even cunning way (giving Vargas reasons for Luna to see Aiden from a different maybe not so positive perspective)
I know there is a lot of advices and critical points in this - but only because I think Azienda`s work and the game itself are really great all in all and I really want to see them succeed. Thats why I am focusing more on what has to be done to make it successfull instead of lamenting about everything that already is awesome - if it wouldnt be I wouldnt waste that much time on this. And obviously I want to selfishly experience the next NTR MASTAPIECE. The foundation for such have been laid, still - now the real work begins.
However things will progress - A very big THX to Azienda for their hard work on all the games they have done and will do in the future. They are playing a very important role for the whole NTR community worldwide and I wish them all the luck they need to succeed. Let the FUNS begin!
Cheers!