For me this one ranges between like a 2.5 - 4.0 and this confuses me so about somewhat kinda 3 stars because I am honestly struggling to accurately turn my feelings about this project into a score lol
There is plenty about this that is Good!
There's plenty about it that is Ok
There is a good amount of Roughness, some of it worse than the rest
Da Good!+
+ I like the models! Even though normally I do not go for the more exaggerated proportions there is just something here that I really enjoyed! I think it is because characters didn't just have huge tits&ass but overall had more weight to them, more thickness, a little more realism even with the insane proportions lol. Good to see some older, bigger, women with some cellulite! not just perfect smooth but featureless skin
+ Some of the animation are quite good, feel really smooth and spot on. Though it is really just Some of them
+ Story, It did actually grab my attention and I wanted to know what was going on. Now the story is nothing ground-breaking or mind-blowing but that is also not something I look for in Porn Content. Interesting things are just cool to read lol
+ Plus for me for the MC not just being a fucking moron, or a huge dick, or fucking Both!
The Neutral=
= Maybe this could be seen as a negative but all the characters personalities are fairly standard for AVN, stuff like; Sweet Girl, Introverted Girl, Bitchy tough/butch girl, Protective or Prudish Girl, Disinterested or maybe Disconnected Girl, Horny Girl, um... idk more lol. The character are Not Bad! Just maybe not the most compelling and/or unique
= No option to skip any scenes or content, now I don't want this to be a "negative" but it is something that I just don't like at times. I like some feet stuff but I don't like feet licking or toe sucking so I just skipped through the section(s) that had that cuz it's not for me. And sometimes I wasn't as into a character and just didn't really care about another sex scene with them*cough* Neighbor lady *cough*
The Bad. . .
- Grammar mistakes were noticeable, and I know That is common with lots of these Projects as they are being translated but here was Noticeable. Some of it was just the common stiffness dialog can get when translated into English, such as certain words being used that are not incorrect but just are not really used conversationally or the structure of sentences not being quite conversational more just like "Technically Correct English" (at least as an American)
- Still Grammar lol! The wrong Pronouns were constantly used at times, and I wish I would have thought to save some examples but the most common mistake I saw was people being refereed to as "it". Think like; mc thinking "Girl sucks dick so well, I love when It uses their tongue", a real basic example but that's all I can think of
- Missed Translations started to pop up as I got to the newer parts of this VN, I think it was only 1 to 3 sets of text that were still in Spanish somewhere past the halfway point of Ep4
- Some animations are Rough, as said above that some animations are really done well but some are stiff and just Janky almost. If MC is meant to be grinding/rubbing His dick against a gals pussy the animation just doesn't match up, there will clearly be no contact between Dick and Pussy lol
- Transitions! Main thing with this that I noticed was sometimes when transitioning between different viewing angles of an animated scene it would flash the last shown Still Image, which was a little weird.
- The Flashbacks, simply in my opinion there are too many and they are too long. Yes it is important story stuff for Us as the viewer to know but they just drag on sometimes, and it's generally fairly grim shit...
*Now I don't know how many of my negatives are just due to this being a "Remake" of another project, I dont know anything about doing any of this lol
2.5 - 4.0 so... I guess mostly a 3/5
Sometimes I'd hit a point or section and just think "FFS How did this get through any proof reading", but It sure didn't stop me from jorking it lolz X3
There is plenty about this that is Good!
There's plenty about it that is Ok
There is a good amount of Roughness, some of it worse than the rest
Da Good!+
+ I like the models! Even though normally I do not go for the more exaggerated proportions there is just something here that I really enjoyed! I think it is because characters didn't just have huge tits&ass but overall had more weight to them, more thickness, a little more realism even with the insane proportions lol. Good to see some older, bigger, women with some cellulite! not just perfect smooth but featureless skin
+ Some of the animation are quite good, feel really smooth and spot on. Though it is really just Some of them
+ Story, It did actually grab my attention and I wanted to know what was going on. Now the story is nothing ground-breaking or mind-blowing but that is also not something I look for in Porn Content. Interesting things are just cool to read lol
+ Plus for me for the MC not just being a fucking moron, or a huge dick, or fucking Both!
The Neutral=
= Maybe this could be seen as a negative but all the characters personalities are fairly standard for AVN, stuff like; Sweet Girl, Introverted Girl, Bitchy tough/butch girl, Protective or Prudish Girl, Disinterested or maybe Disconnected Girl, Horny Girl, um... idk more lol. The character are Not Bad! Just maybe not the most compelling and/or unique
= No option to skip any scenes or content, now I don't want this to be a "negative" but it is something that I just don't like at times. I like some feet stuff but I don't like feet licking or toe sucking so I just skipped through the section(s) that had that cuz it's not for me. And sometimes I wasn't as into a character and just didn't really care about another sex scene with them
The Bad. . .
- Grammar mistakes were noticeable, and I know That is common with lots of these Projects as they are being translated but here was Noticeable. Some of it was just the common stiffness dialog can get when translated into English, such as certain words being used that are not incorrect but just are not really used conversationally or the structure of sentences not being quite conversational more just like "Technically Correct English" (at least as an American)
- Still Grammar lol! The wrong Pronouns were constantly used at times, and I wish I would have thought to save some examples but the most common mistake I saw was people being refereed to as "it". Think like; mc thinking "Girl sucks dick so well, I love when It uses their tongue", a real basic example but that's all I can think of
- Missed Translations started to pop up as I got to the newer parts of this VN, I think it was only 1 to 3 sets of text that were still in Spanish somewhere past the halfway point of Ep4
- Some animations are Rough, as said above that some animations are really done well but some are stiff and just Janky almost. If MC is meant to be grinding/rubbing His dick against a gals pussy the animation just doesn't match up, there will clearly be no contact between Dick and Pussy lol
- Transitions! Main thing with this that I noticed was sometimes when transitioning between different viewing angles of an animated scene it would flash the last shown Still Image, which was a little weird.
- The Flashbacks, simply in my opinion there are too many and they are too long. Yes it is important story stuff for Us as the viewer to know but they just drag on sometimes, and it's generally fairly grim shit...
*Now I don't know how many of my negatives are just due to this being a "Remake" of another project, I dont know anything about doing any of this lol
2.5 - 4.0 so... I guess mostly a 3/5
Sometimes I'd hit a point or section and just think "FFS How did this get through any proof reading", but It sure didn't stop me from jorking it lolz X3