VN - Ren'Py - Family Comes First [v0.2] [VVeydris]

this game rly has a lot of potential.
the chars that have been introduced are interessting and cute. the family dinamic has been established early on ( a hudge plus for pplslike me).
and there i a horror/mystery element that rly whant´s you to know that is going on.
it´s so sad that it stopped after the first release. def had something rly promising here

Too soon for a five star review. It does come off as original-ish, basic incest route being laid out (sister-brother). Big plus is no tenants or roommates to ignore. Down side, this is just an intro. Leaves much to the imagination, which could be a great thing if developer delivers. As for the writing, very easy to understand with no odd words in places that they should not be. Worth watching for future updates to see if this will go anywhere. Good luck to the developer.

Love the design of the little sister 10/10. The teasing is off to an amazing start I hope it keeps that same vibe for a while until a massive payout. Also, the kind of blue-Ish lines on the thighs when she bends over? A1.

Great start =). Don't over-worry too much about going back and fixing every little error, especially considering it is your first game and a vast learning experience. Rework is a good way to burn yourself out. You've done a great job of giving your MC and both sisters actual personalities with very little dialogue or exposition. Some games take multiple updates to accomplish that haha. Looking forward to 0.2