VN - Ren'Py - Family Island [v0.1] [Kryos]

Hmmmm? What can I say about this? Ummmm. It sucks ass!

The MC has to be the near biggest pussy in a game you will find on this site.

There is barely any sex in this game at this stage and .....you guessed it. You can watch but it aint you getting any.

The story makes no damn sense what little there is of it. So just skip your ass off. You are not missing a damn thing. Most definitely not sex. Cause he aint getting any.

Even a damn Bobby game is better than this. The Tyrant at least the MC was a terd who got laid.

Version: 0.1

Not gonna bother with my customary review, this "game" is simply not worth it.

Pros:

• Models look nice, at least the LIs do, albeit totally wrong for premise.
• General visuals and render quality are pretty decent.
• Attempt at animations are not bad, but very short and have no angles

Cons:

• Story is utter nonsense and has really little thought going into it.
• MC looks like a solid Beta if there ever was one.
• Characters all look like they 20 even though the MC is the uncle, the one woman is the mother etc... complete bullshit.
• Added to the above, many models look like clones which just compounds the laziness in designing characters.
• General synopsis is also stupidly random and nonsensical with the "grandpa" having set it all up for some perverted/twisted reason, but mostly probably because he could (dialogue/story is written that way)
• Dialogue is also in need of revision as well as for grammatical and typing errors.
• Scenes are short and have no kink or sexiness to them, the MC gets sucked off and still looks like a child who had to flush his favourite gold fish.
• Woman end up naked for no reason, yet are family? Where are the inhibitions, the corruption, the tease, the kink...nah thats out the window, but don't worry I called her mom so its got to be legit and kinky right...FML....
• the MC is always perving on someone if he isn't feeling sorry for himself, he looks sorry for himself. The game feels more like some cuck, NTR shit coming at you from a mile away, and even if thats not the case, the player will never want to relate to such a weak MC.
• This AVN is also very short, and end abruptly also, giving you that clear vibe from the developer of "fuck it, im throwing this out there as is, I could care less"

TLDR: While making a game, coding and such is not necessarily easy, and you don't need to be great at it, but you show your disregard for your audience, when you give them this half baked attempted of a game and then, expect them to give you a glowing review, let alone support your project financially? This is not me getting personal at the developer either, I am stating what I believe and giving my honest opinion.

I have no idea what the dev was thinking to release this kind of AVN, if they took the time to look around at the best rated games here they, would know why those games often are on top and they would think again before releasing content like this...With a bit more work this game could actually have worked out fine.

Version 0.1 reviewed

Where to start. There isn't much of a story here, at least one that makes sense. The story starts at a family gathering where we learn, through broken dialogue, that the MC is socially awkward and that his family is bonkers. During the gathering the father announces that he is taking his family on a holiday to a tropical island resort. The story ends once they reach the resort.

Pros:

1- Some decent renders.

2- The females are cute for the most part.

3- The sex animations, although too slow, looked pretty good.

Cons-

1- The story is poorly constructed and outright silly at times. One scene has the MC walking down the hall and every door is open with a naked woman inside. Later, when he's walking around on the yacht, everywhere he goes people are having sex or sunbathing nude..

2- The narration text is awful and looks more like a production note than a description of the story. One line actually said "He looks in first person view".

3- Assuming it's a machine translation, the dialogue is quite bad and there are grammatical landmines everywhere.

4- Missing renders and error messages.

5- It's a game about a family but there are no options to rename the characters, so it is difficult differentiating the "mom" from the "aunt" from the "niece".

6- Adding to the above noted confusion, the characters also looked similar in age, which made it even more difficult discerning who was who.

7- The MC is a classic "beta" boy. Not a great choice considering some readers dislike particular character models so much that they won't even consider playing the game. This model is one that gets under the skin.

Final thoughts-

Not really worth a look. If this is the devs first effort it shows some promise from a visual perspective but as is the case with most VN's it falls apart with the story and dialogue.

I would suggest that the dev seek help with the writing and dialogue going forward.