Well comentes, over all its good, author making a little too much jokes though, which can be a little annoying, choices don't really matter, like even when asking the gender its not really giving two option making it more a reading novel, I feel a little pity for the mc he gets bullied left and right by almost everone, but that is also a bit fun, his body proportion are no bad but could use a bit of pólishing, might want to check twisted world for an idea of small guy with big dick model. The other caracters look nice. can use some work in the diualogues, and the introdution is a bit dumb, but promissing once the story started it got more fun~Good work