VN - Ren'Py - Fate Won't Separate Us [v0.5b Patreon] [Raising Phallus]

I put off playing this game for a while because it's in v0.5b and wasn't expecting much content. But after playing for more than an hour on a single path (so linear choices, currently don't know if other choices have an effect or are just other scenes), the content is more rich and of quality than expected.

The story itself is well written, no fast NTR but a gradual inclination towards it. The dialogue between the characters is very hot (cuck povs). We have a ginger who's a slut that wants to f her bf, but walmart merlin cast a spell on him to have bbc ntr tendancies in order to get hard. The bulls who are all black are stereotypical thug types, and our MC has a spine (tbh this aspect doesn't matter too much imo).

Next are the scenes which are well thought out to be as sexually suggestive and provocative as possible towards the cuck.

Finally, I think that walmart Merlin is actually our MC's schizophrenia acting up and indulging in his dark desires from his truma of Samule (bbc bull) fing his mother (PEAK).

Overall this is a solid bbc netorase (or ntr? idk I'm not finished yet) game.

Extremely entertaining. Some scenes genuinely made me laugh aloud.

There's an excellent level of erotic tension that sustains itself throughout the game and it has a good variety in the scenes with some creative foreshadowing. (Big black dildo).

There's also very good use of audio and visual signals to denote the protagonist's declining mental stability. It can verge onto a mild horror at times with some very light jump-scares, but these aren't overused.

Strongly recommend giving this one a try.

Version 0.5b

Story does create nice encouragement for the MC to keep playing this sick game. It is also nice that there is more women, than the girlfriend, who create twisted sexual situation for the MC. Overall the light in the tunnel gives a nice goal and a reason to endure all these perversions.
The magic man and goofy humor do reduce the emotional intensity of the story. Caricature style characters don´t help either. Overly emotional MC does try to create some kind of seriousness to the situation, but everything else does aim to "it´s just a joke bro".

Writing does make the story flow with good pace. There is even some funny lines, if you can see the MC as comedic relief character and not playable MC. MC and his girlfriend relationship is lovely at the beginning of the game. It even feels kind of bad to destroy it.
99% of time MC is unhinged raging maniac, but when the story needs, he suddenly whimpers and acts against everything he stands for in his normal mental breakdowns. MCs girlfriend is reasonable and loving at the beginning, but will turn to complete slut before you can say "What did i miss?"

Visually game looks great. Women glow with pure sexiness. There is lots of suggestive pictures and eye candy to make the journey enjoyable. Sex scenes look really good.
Men fucking are 100% stereotypical black men. Sex scenes are just one part of the big joke and not that sexy. Atmosphere in them is as sexy as farmer fucking a cow, while his wife yells at him to stop it.

Trash. A cringe-fest that the developer decided to tie with BBC fetish. The game would’ve been better off without this nonsense about an old man wielding a dildo instead of a magic wand, setting the tone for the story. There are three routes, and honestly, the developer should’ve just stuck to one. The cuckold route feels completely forced. The revenge route? Nothing to say about it yet because there’s barely anything there. The cheating route is the most interesting, but it’s not without flaws. Specifically, the way dev desperately avoids progressing the story with the main character’s girlfriend. Instead, we’re flooded with scenes featuring Daniella and the sister, which are just flat-out unengaging. They come out of nowhere. No buildup, no corruption arc. The impact’s lost. These two side characters exist solely to let the developer milk his patreon subs for as long as possible, because if he focused on Freya’s content, then he probably burnout and run out of ideas entirely. On the bride side, the renders and animations are solid. But what’s with the tip at the start to play with sound? There’s no audio in the sex scenes. The few sounds that do exist are just random, jumpscares from nowhere.

I really like the design of the main girl. The theme of progressive corruption makes the game very enjoyable, especially with the boyfriend being the one who becomes paranoid. I appreciate when there's a well-paced, step-by-step descent for the female lead, like in this game, where the corruption isn’t sudden but happens gradually.


It also makes sense within the situations presented, and I like that the game doesn’t take itself too seriously. That’s something I really appreciate, especially considering how many wannabe directors exist in this genre trying too hard to be deep or dramatic

great writing, humor, graphics, plot and dialogue. this game gives you what you're lookin for on all fronts, even as it slowly teases the 'main event' of the story. giving it a 5-star rating so it gets put above 99% of the mediocre games/novels on this website

As for cuckolding, this is it.
I have not finished the other paths, I just went the cuck route immediately and that was so fkn good I just had to make a review before even trying the rest.
Amazing writing compared to most other cuck/HW games, even with the silly jokes and plotline! IT JUST WORKS!

- You are NOT thrown into a "my gf/wife suddenly turned mega evil and suddenly fucks other men", "valid" reasons are given.
- You are NOT keeping your feelings trapped inside without ever talking to your GF (except for the plotline ofc, I don't want to spoil, but I find that whole part rather hilarious and absolutely fits the game)
- Your GF is the one making decisions from YOUR actions and behavior (and choices actually makes a difference).
- Freya is a god damn goddess! <3

As always, I went into the game with the expectation "this will just be one more generic ntr game", BOY was I wrong! The humor actually works for me.

I REALLY hope the dev keeps the interactions and relations between the MC and GF as well written as it is up to this point.

If you are a fan of "GF realizing dominance = I can get more pleasure", then this is the game to play!

Again, I have not tried the other routes, I can only speak for the cuck route in this review.

Absolutely fvcking incredibile. I don't know what to say. I've tried many NTR/NTS games, but this has a funny yet hot as fuck plot like I've never seen before. Especially the cuckold path, it really is a breath of fresh air to see the girl pushing for this, instead of the man, like always. This is really a unique, funny and hot story, with an even hotter girlfriend. Loved it.

If what you are looking for is an interracial ntr game with humiliation content (there is a path where there is not so much of this) and a hot fmc, this is your game.

Of course it has flaws like every game, but so far for me it is a very enjoyable game with fun writing (and self aware at moments), very hot scenes, and a very unique fmc model.

So yeah, if what you are looking for is a super serious and dramatic story, maybe this is not for you, but if you are looking for what I mentioned above, give it a chance.

And some might not like the mc model but I find it hilarious, I guess you just you have to get it lol.

I liked the game a lot before, cute girls, good picture, hot scenes, touching relationship with GF. The cuckold paths are quite emotionally different depending on whether you drink the potion yourself at the beginning of the game or give it to your GF.

Its goods in own way i like it about few things about it but there other things that makes me hate like BBC and overused black characters i know cucking pretty much done by mainly BBC but still man its overused its exchanged for good well made story really we now BBC is big gonna make her feel good then what ? its gonna solve her problems sadly answer is no %100 no this is where game broke down.

Story interesting other than Mc look like cuck pathetic being its annoying to even look or listen to his talk plus his mom hoe yeah she is anohter BBC lover so original really and gf is mess really i wish she was pure naive loyal gf where she slowly corrupted and other characters using her naive mind to corrupt her but nope she is secret slut feels like she gonna explose any min and author pretty much using that.

So game is bad ? no its not thats why i am giving 4 star but sadly overused BBC ruins 5 star for me if not for that i can give 5 star but forgive me its too many games here about that genre and trend its annoying and boring so its good game that in early days i pray author improve more and make this game amazing without rushing main girl.

Very good unique story telling and good ambiance overall all the subliminal effect very orignal. the story with all the funny side its a must have and make the NTR more acceptable . hope this game continue like this

Man I really like this game so far, it has some serious potential. The writing is great, the art is amazing and love all the cut scenes. Also this game has some good humor in it and is nicely done and not crammed in like usual

One of my favorites, and definitely a contender for the top spot... if he continues to develop the story. Freya is a bit boyish for my tastes, but I give that a pass because of the story telling. The dialog definitely needs work; it's very awkward at times... almost as if English isn't the author's first language. The author could benefit from having an editor clean things up a bit. I've actually learned Ren'py a little, just so I can modify some of the worst parts of the dialog. Other than that, 5 STARS!, and I eagerly await the next update!

This is a real NTS game. You get what you expect. Story, character, choices everything is amazing. Maybe dev could tone down the supernatural aspect a bit, but overall i really like it.

Art style is amazing, dev really goes all out and doesn’t shy away from fetishes.

High quality animation and audio. Large amount of background transitions to text ratio, keeps the game more engaging. I'm surprised about the large amount of renders this game has for being so short in length. As a finished game this will be high quality.

Really solid NTR type game, it hits all the notes a good example of the genre should hit. The MC is pretty lame which is perfect for ntr-centric games to launch the story from, also having such a hectic pace thanks to his paranoia gives the game a great atmosphere. Up to this point, Freya's storyline is just picking up steam but it has been great so far, but the real star of the game has been Danielle's short scenes, it definitely is a good way of introducing more sex scenes into the fold while keeping it kinky and engaging. I'm definitely seated for more updates.

Pro: Great models and posing; keeps the story going without starving you for sexual content; nails its fetishes soundly (perfect for a fan of NTR, interracial, themed dirty talk and similar stuff).

Cons: The story has a really unique pacing (not for everyone); like I said before, the game is all about its themes and fetishes so if you're looking for anything more nuanced or less hyperfocused, this ain't it.

8/10.
v0.4
A humorous NTR with very high highs, but somewhat mediocre lows.
I really wanted to give this game a max score - the 'Good' stuff in this truly deserves it. But the 'Bad' stuff was just too big for me to ignore.

Good:
- Tone - 10/10.
NTR <=> Comedy.
The very best thing about this game.
An NTR can be a pretty dark genre - and here author for sure explores some extreme emotions and past traumas - but because the comedy is at the very center of this story, it never feels truly gross, depressing or disgusting.

- Relationships (of the main couple) - 10/10.
The couple loves each other. It's not some empty relationship just for the sake of checking out an NTR box. Their funny/caring little moments are incredibly cute, and not just some padding between sex that you want to skip. You feel for these two freaks of nature.

- Sex scenes (of the main heroine) - 10/10.
From teasing, innuendos, and character turmoil to the flow and tempo switches - almost everything with Freya is pure electrifying enjoyment.

Bad:
- Sex scenes.
-_-
Half of ALL the sex scenes - with Mom - are complete side stories that have nothing to do with the main plot. These are just fanfics.
And another half - with the sister - has absolutely 0 emotional investment from her. There are just some gifs of her fucking appearing out of nowhere and no one on the screen cares about what's going on - until... she just becomes a malicious bitch? There's some glimmer of possible tension for her after the hospital - but it's quickly squashed and she goes back to be her unpleasant self.
Not very sexy of her.
And that is 'a bit' of a problem when almost ALL of the sex scenes in the game are either her, or her mom's meaningless cameos.

- 'Bad choices'.
"You want to behave like a decent human being? No content for you~"
"Oh, want more content? Act like a piece of shit."
Classic.
Dude, you have antagonists for a reason. Several of them! Use them if you need something bad to happen to create the drama.
Why the fuck are you forcing Ugly to destroy his own relationship, while antagonists just sit on their balls doing nothing - and picking up what's falling on them from the sky?
These relationships Are Important. See what I listed in the good stuff? There won't be any NTR without them.
It would be just like with the sister - mindless fucking. And I can go on pornhub for that. No need to sit for hours in the game.

Overall:
Hot, cute, and funny.
Highly recommend it even with the 'bad' stuff listed.
Most importantly: the author showed that he CAN write hot scenes and character tension - he just doesn't do it for the sister. For some reason.
And he CAN write the adorable relationships for the couple - he just uses MC instead of the antagonists to create the drama. For some reason.
He can do everything.
So I'm looking forward to the future of his stories.

very good gameeeeeee
specially the mom content. liked her intro but could hope for more involvement
also the sis. her cucking path is very fast paced and good
to lower degree the gf. hoping will get more involved with the sis to teamup
also hoping faster pace specially the mom cucking

I get there are not a lot of games where the big cocked black guy takes the main love interest. Couple that with the low quality of those games and that fetish is not well represented. This game may add another to that list (if you take that path), but it is not an arousing AVN.

The only animation I saw was the LI doing an eye twitch. I guess I didn't make the right choices to see anything else. All sex renders were very dark and no animations. The LI is attractive, but I could not have been more disinterest when the anal sex was happening.

If there is no interesting porn, the story and writing are way below a lot of other AVNs on this site.

This was not worth a 5GB download by any means. I'll put this in the forever ignore category.